| "The Demons Within Us" Reviews/Comments [ 663 ] |
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Title: right?!?!
Reviewed By: Jewelbrat2 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2007 23:09 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG finally inu gets a clue!!! Poor Kagome... hes such a thick headed idiot. but thats why we love him! continue please!!!!! can't wait 4 the next chappie!!lol no... really....*brings out chainsaw* there will be a next chappie?! right?!?! right?!?!
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2007 19:19 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Been a while since i read this! *sigh* I LOVE it!! and inuyasha got to know a lil sumn sumn^^ I hope Sango tells him everything n i would love to kno who he's gonna act around n towards her now =) Aw man, i love this so much!! Update soon!! ^^
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: baka_mai_28 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2007 04:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, so your story prety much blows my ass out (and trust me thats a good thing, its only an expression) I love it and the way that you have built the chracters to what they are now. I can only wait as patiently as humanly possible for you to update. Once again, excelent work, i aplaud you and your wonderful writing technique! ~Mai
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Reviewed By: Persephone K Graham On: February 07, 2007 17:09 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
First, I must say, I thought your character development was flawless. You have a real gift with your own unique twist that is wonderfully refreshing. In a sea of stories made by 13 year olds who copy plot ideas and fill them with their very own grammatical errors, it really is quite pleasing. I also appreciate the role that you have made 'faith' weave in this story. Its a delicate balance between God and faith and keeping in mind your audience whom may come from various non-Christian backgrounds. I myself, as a Christian and a writer (whether you are a Christian or not) was elated when I had found a story which steps away from the stereotypical 'bible pusher kagome' and can show what God and faith can really mean. I, thank you, once again for creating something which I will always look back upon with a great fondness, many years to come. Looking forward to seeing your name (whatever that may be) in print someday. Sincerely- Persephone k Graham
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Reviewed By: chanda [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2007 00:13 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just wanted to let you know that I love your story. No, I didn't think that you're dragging this story out at all. It has been an enjoyable read. I look forward until your next chapter. Chanda
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Reviewed By: dragonflyhuntress17 On: February 01, 2007 22:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your fanfic, it had been a long time since i had read something so deep. Continue the wonderful job you've done so far, and update. I want to know what is Inuyasha's reaction to Kagome's past =)
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Reviewed By: WanderingAnariel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2007 13:14 EST
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Loved this chapter. I absolutely love Imogen and Hide and Seek is one of my favorites. You worked in masterfully into the story.
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Reviewed By: rainydays [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2007 03:29 EST
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First and foremost, I am sorry I did not review until now! These past 2 chapters were fantastic! The characters were real, the emotions thrust you into their heads, capturing their true thoughts. I am glad Inyasha finally saw a glimpse into Kagome's past... I hope he will come around soon. I want to smack him upside the head right now... I hope he doesn't do those drugs... I think Kagome will be the one to pull him out. I am eager to read about Kohaku.. I wonder what will happen. I liked your approach with Hiten and Maten... I think it shows Naraku's control over every being in that city. I like that you made Hiten actually have a heart, yet managed to keep him in his character. Your ability to create these characters astounds me every time I read a chapter. Simply wonderful. :o)
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Reviewed By: antyem13 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2007 19:09 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.O wow.... This story rocks! I love the way you interpert the characters, everything seems so serious at first but you still sneek in plenty of humer (cant spell, I hope you know what I mean). My favorite joke had to be with Koga and Miroku in the hotel "what underwere?" lol. OK so please try to be fast with your next update, its finally getting to the juicy stuff. Fun, fun. Happy writing from the one and only weirdo, Emily.
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Reviewed By: TrinityK (nsi) On: January 25, 2007 23:07 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey girl! I LOVED this chapter. It was really beautiful in a sad, and wistful way. When I read stories, sometimes it's like watching a movie in my head. And that was the case with this chapter. I listened to the song as I read and I must say, it was beautiful. I loved the song, I thought it went perfectly with what was going on and the scene Kagome was in. I could imagine her pain, and with the song it just put it over the top. I'm glad Inuyasha finally realizes that Kagome is human. We all are. Well, maybe in the exception of Kikyo and Naraku. lol. Wonderful chapter, writing, everything. I love your story, heh. I bet you can tell that already, huh? I can't wait for the next chapter. ;-)
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Reviewed By: j jarviss [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2007 21:27 EST
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wow this story literally rips me to pieces. its so deep. i'm so ready for the next chapter and the turning point in their relationship. in the mean time check out my new story untouchable.
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Title: WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW
Reviewed By: OLDDOG333 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2007 20:19 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW GREAT CHAPTER!!!! With the dawn comes the light!!!! Can't wait till he finds out the truth..... Pain and suffering knows no strangers And doesn't care who it visit!!!! I am OLDDOG333 KEEPER OF THE DEMON HOUNDS
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Reviewed By: New Fan On: January 25, 2007 17:43 EST
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You can not leave a great cliffy like that!! It will drive me crazy until you update again. Sooooo, update soon.
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Reviewed By: Lelbet [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2007 17:26 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an awesome fic. Poor Kagome... That's so sad! But at least now Inuyasha knows. MAybe he won't be such a pirck now. Lol. Anyway, update soon! I wanna know what Sango's gonna tell Inuyasha.
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Title: Rikku-chan
Reviewed By: inuyashafanaticllmv [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2007 11:26 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG finally inu gets a clue!!! OMG I NEED TO KNOW WUT HAPPENS NEXT THIS STORY is freaken fugawsome !!!! I luv it I can't wait for the next chappie!!!
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