| "The Demons Within Us" Reviews/Comments [ 663 ] |
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Reviewed By: blue_girl On: July 28, 2007 04:47 EDT
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Another wonderful update, much appreciated!! I'm so glad Inuyasha is learning to come to terms with himself and the way he feels. It's always so amazing how you build these characters, there so much depth and insight revolving around the way they think and act. *sighs* but the A/N really had me laughing. "my husband can again squeeze a boob sometimes without me punching him in the balls to let him know what it feels like" I was going for a good two minutes. I'm glad your feeling better again. Happy Writing ^_^
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2007 01:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was the deepest, heart felt, and to think about really hard chapter. Great work from a great author. Hopefully Inuyasha's true self will come to him, some time soon. Well hope you update, like the song, and keep it up. Peace...
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Title: THANK YOU!!!
Reviewed By: KagAka On: July 27, 2007 22:30 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh gosh thank you thank you THANK YOU!!! I've been waiting for this chapter since forever!!! And now I'm gonna be waiting for the next one XD Hehe but hey I never knew you were pregnet congrats children are a wonderful thing to know you can have since there are many out there that can't. So be happy and I hope all goes well and that you baby is healty and strong oh and if the baby will allow you to finish the fanfic :D Love ya!, KagomeAkane
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Title: hey sweetie!
Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2007 21:41 EDT
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I'm glad you're feeling better - I remember those times all to well - to tired to keep your eyes open for more than a couple of hours at a time, and sore, and that bloated feeling, and sick at the sight of food - let alone the smell - yuck. But it does get better, and it is worth it in the end - so much so that I did it twice. The story is great as always - just love how you are painting them - He needs her, he wants her, and everything is telling her that he can have her, except him.. fool! ah - but there is that light at the end - I can see it and I look forward to the journey towards it. Come and say HI at the House of Attonement. Take care!!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2007 19:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah it seems like you've had lots of fun.. (sarcasm, poor you.) Your not the only one who has tried to 'scare me out of pregnancy, History teacher did that well and truly... (adoption look to be a better option in the far far future.) Wonderful chapter (still want to bash InuYasha with an inflatable baseball bat until he realizes he can be with Kagome)
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Reviewed By: Maloy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2007 17:08 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I'm very happy that you updated) The story is progressing perfectly, I love InuYasha's feelings, and the songs you put are just great! Hope the next update won't take you so long) Congrats on being pregnant! It may be though but in the end you get the best thing out of it! At least that's what my mom said^___^
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Reviewed By: serenity101 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2007 16:54 EDT
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Kagome seems to be getting through to inuyasha. i'm not sure if that's a good thing or a bad one though. keep up the good work, and at least your not losing your hair. my mom tells me all the time how much hair she lost when she was pregnant with me.
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Title: i've been waiting!!!
Reviewed By: bluezinthos nsi On: July 27, 2007 16:25 EDT
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yay! can i jsut say how much i love this story? how realistic everything is? the emotions, the actions of the characters? it's not one of those "let's get together now that we know we have feelings!" there are so many consequenses for these two, so much that inuyasha has been holding back, so much that kagome has yet to reveal (how will he feel about a 'flawed' angel?) that the internal debates and the debates with each other are some of the best pieces of drama i've seen in a long time. i loved the line: "Will you just shut up and let me take care of you?" so like this inuyasha. and then to realize what he said afterwards only to wonder what the hell he did! i love it. i'm so glad you're feeling better. be hubby is happy that you can go near him again!
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2007 16:07 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing chapter!! I'm glad that Inuyasha is finally willing to be saved!! Update soon please and keep up the excellent work!! ^_^ P.S. Hope everything goes okay with your pregnancy!!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2007 15:46 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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interesting story... enjoyed reading it so far... wonder what will happen next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Title: julie
Reviewed By: Jewelbrat2 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2007 05:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you want reviews, i got reviews for you!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!
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Title: julie
Reviewed By: Jewelbrat2 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2007 05:21 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!
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Title: julie
Reviewed By: Jewelbrat2 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2007 05:20 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!
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Title: julie
Reviewed By: Jewelbrat2 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2007 05:20 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!
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Title: julie
Reviewed By: Jewelbrat2 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2007 05:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this story. Out of all the stories i have ever read, i keep coming back to this one to see if you updated yet. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!
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