| "The Demons Within Us" Reviews/Comments [ 663 ] |
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2008 23:46 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I knew your baby would be find didn't I tell tell you!? I love the new chap it's awesome I hope Inu and kags can get somewhere better now.
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Reviewed By: skittlecurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2008 03:42 EDT
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wow. i'm so happy alex is healthy and i hope he continues to grow big and strong and sound as any other child. i love your story and am happy you started it up again (i'm happier your baby is okay). can't wait for the next chapter. :)
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Reviewed By: hans sonntag 359 On: March 11, 2008 01:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!!! I am so amazed by you. First you write this BEUTIFUL story and then you deal with having a premature baby (I have a cousin that got water on the brain and Im sure alex will grow to be a strong healthy boy) and you STILL write this for us. This story has made me rethink my faith and I thank you a thosand times over for that much.Im just wanted to tell you that you did an amazing job and that I would love it if you updated soon. god bless, Hans
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Reviewed By: hans sonntag 359 On: March 11, 2008 01:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!!! I am so amazed by you. First you write this BEUTIFUL story and then you deal with having a premature baby (I have a cousin that got water on the brain and Im sure alex will grow to be a strong healthy boy) and you STILL write this for us. This story has made me rethink my faith and I thank you a thosand times over for that much.Im just wanted to tell you that you did an amazing job and that I would love it if you updated soon. god bless, Hans
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Reviewed By: Jewelbrat2 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2008 01:26 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i am sooooo happy alex is alright! It must have been so terrifying, i can't imagine. >_< I love the chapter, i'm so happy that inu and kags are starting a relationship (sort of). take your time writing a new chapter, you deserve that and so much more. ~jewel
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Reviewed By: Kags 13 On: March 07, 2008 21:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Write more please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kags 13 On: March 07, 2008 21:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Write more please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kags 13 On: March 07, 2008 21:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Write more please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: j jarviss [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2008 21:45 EST
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wow...that's all i have to say. Alex is such a freaking FIGHTER! never have i heard a story about that something like that happening and the baby surviving; the little guy's an inspiration. i had a rough birth too; my own, broke my collarbone, right arm and left clavical.. but i wish you and your husband and your freaking FIGHTER baby!, the best of luck in the future. oh, and the chapter was AWESOME! yes, they finally got together; hopefully you won't pull an unexpected twist on us or anything...
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Reviewed By: Kags 13 On: March 07, 2008 21:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Write more please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: rainydays [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2008 01:14 EST
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First off, I am so happy your son is doing well! :o) Miracles are all around us, aren't they? I was premature myself... but I turned out just fine. :o) I can't even imagine the emotional roller coaster you've been on these past months... I will keep your family in my thoughts. I'm so relieved to hear that all is well. Second off, thank you for updating! It was amazing! I basically devoured that chapter... I couldn't tear my eyes away. You must have some pretty amazing bedtime stories for your son! :o) I can't wait until you update again! I am afraid Inuyasha will mess things up... I am glad he game Kagome a small glimpse into his tormented soul... She at least can decode some of this meaning behind the veil of hateful words. Third off... I just wanted to leave this: "Faith, hope, love... but the greatest of these of love."
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Reviewed By: Silver Moon Dragon (not signed in) On: March 06, 2008 23:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a wonderful chapter even though it's a little sad. I thought for sure that Inuyasha would have stopped trying to distance himself from her after the last one, but HOPEFULLY he'll stop after this chapter lol. Im also extremely happy for you to now have a very healthy and happy baby boy :D when I was born, I was 10 lbs and always felt so bad for my mom and thought it would have been easier on her if I was just a little thing... you've got a little fighter ;) congradulations!
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2008 17:31 EST
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Isn't it amazing how miracles happen sometimes? Especially when people pray with all their hearts that someone will be healed... I'm glad to hear that your son is healthy now, and I wish the best for you and your family! Thanks for the chapter update, it was really well done. I can tell you spent a lot of time to get it right, and it really pays off...
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2008 20:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now thats touching... both the story and your note, either though I knew some of it, but its still good to read that he's feeling and looking better. And now the story. You made Inuyasha the perfect character, I almost wanted to kick his ass in one of the paragraphs. I know he's only doing it for the safety of Kagome, but he's could be an ass at the worst of times... Anyways, you get a big, huge PLUS for the song that you put in, listened to it while reading and my emotions where wild. And to tell you the truth what their about to do in the next chapter will hopefully let them be together and not be a one nighter. Well great come back, hope you update when YOU want to and keep it up. Peace, may God be with you and your family...
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2008 12:59 EST
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I'm so happy Alex is doing well Candace! Some things babies have to experience is heartbreaking, I'm so glad my niece came healthy, the stress would have been unbearable. Alex is adorable, and he is one strong little man to pull through all of that. I've still got the hole in my heart that I've had since birth, and I've been told I will die with it. But it's not so bad, and I'm glad Alex's healed; the annoyance of medication and extra precautions of infections because of it will just be one less thing you've got to worry about .__. In regards to the story, the way things ended in this chapter look like I may be pleased with the hapenings in the next one. This pleases us
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