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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2008 18:25 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh no!!! You're so mean! Don't you love us? lol. Just kidding. That was a mean trick, though. Getting us all worked up just to pull the rug out from under us. I hope he does something soon to make her understand. She thinks the worst, and so does he. I hate that he feels like she's above him. Kagome would never want that. And Hobo! I could strangle him! He meddles way too much. If he would just let Kagome be happy...Thanks for giving us a new chapter, even though you are so busy. I have idea how I would continue if I had a baby. My sister-in-law has to take care of four by herself and I wonder everyday how she does it. I'm glad to hear that Alex is doing so well and that he has a lot of love in his life. Take good care of him and love him all the more because of it. God will take care of him, too.
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2008 17:14 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Terrific chapter. And it is so good to see you writing again! And I'm even more glad that your baby is doing so well. This chapter was a real treat to read, and I'm sure your readers are grateful that you've been able to update at all with how busy you've been . I look forward to reading your chapters whenever you can post. You are an amazing writer.
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2008 16:10 EDT
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Sweetie!!! So happy to see you still having some time to write. So happy to see that you and all of yours are doing well too.
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2008 16:10 EDT
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Sweetie!!! So happy to see you still having some time to write. So happy to see that you and all of yours are doing well too.
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Reviewed By: Sassa [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2008 15:54 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Phenomenal. Just phenomenal! I was wondering how Inuyasha would react about the scars, considering the false image he has about Kagome. His current sadness is indeed appropriate for someone who are obviously completely unable to see things from another person's point of view. He told her to trust him and trust she does - and he pulls back because she indeed was too good a person. MORON! Of cause she won't be happy! I however do think Hojo should learn to shut his trap. Kagome wasn't expecting a complete understanding there and then, but his words forced a confrontation where Kagome otherwise could have smoothed things over, saying they could talk about it later or whatever. Gah, at least something that could be a stepping stone for getting closer, not THIS! I am also so happy to hear about your baby, but I suggest you to be a little more withdrawn about him. People might want to steal him. : ) He sounds utterly adorable! I'll be reading you!
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2008 13:27 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well inuyasha was an ass - tho i understand his reactions.. even if it was bad >< I could have simply seen the hurt on kags face as if i was right in front of her.. curses to u inuyasha!! (i still love him xD) lol... and i always love miroku!! i mean even if he's the goofey one, he's like the smarted one when it comes to solving situations - especially for a friend.. u jus gotta love him, ne? ^^ I'm also happy to hear about alex =] ... blessed!! aww... i jus love babies, n even tho i dont kno alex he sounds like an amazing kid, n you're very lucky to be blessed with him. Babies r a handful, but their cuteness overpowers all n u jus love them even more xD am really happy to hear about his progress and may he continue to do exceptionally well - plus u got a geninus on your arm.. be happy... he'll do wonders when he grows up O.~ ja! and take care
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2008 12:09 EDT
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I'm glad to hear that Alex is doing so well. I hear you with the busy baby schedule, and I'm only Auntie @_@ My cousin's little baby seems to have the same issues as Alex; only Emma doesn't use her right hand. But her mother I don't think actually went to the doctors to see whats up.... though they should know. Emma too was a preemie, she was actually about the same as Alex... but I think she was 3 months early.....might have been 4 @_@ and she was 2lbs and like 2 ounces. She tends to keep her right hand fisted up and if you try to get her to open it she might clench it tighter...
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Reviewed By: vampireskiss [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2008 02:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow this is an awesome story. I am so glad to here that your child is well and is doing great. My prayers will be with you through it all. What is to come (im not saying that they will be bad...which i hope they arent!) But just so you know...may everyones prayers be with you and your family! Your writing is wonderful and so beautiful. Although it took me about 3 days to read it when I can read longer things in about half an hour. I am glad I did not pass this over when I was bored and looking fr something to read. I love the particular songs that you added in it. As I am trying to say...and said before......I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THIS FANFIC!!!! Please continue to write and update as soon as you can. And say hi to your son for me. Best wishes and love... The vampire kiss, aka. Luna aka. Lea
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Reviewed By: Lynzi18 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2008 20:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow.. I don't think I've ever given an author all 5 10's lol! Your writing is beautiful, inspirational and truly amazing. You deserve all of those ten's because your story is truly something I have never read before. You see the regular Inu characters in a different way, and I really love that. I've enjoyed every chapter of this story.. and I'm trying to wait patiently read for the up coming chapters lol.. Keep up the utterly amazing work! And god bless you and your son, Alexander.:)
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Title: *hugs*
Reviewed By: inuyashafanaticllmv [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2008 02:47 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That made me cry..happy tears of course I'm so happy that ur baby is doing so well. IT makes me happy *oh crap here comes the tears lol* U and ur family are in my prayers :) It truly is a miracle.
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Reviewed By: Jessie Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2008 02:43 EDT
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this is totally unrelated to the story... But I can honestly say I completely understand what you are going through. Something similar happened to my little sister you see. She gave birth to a 1lb, 9oz boy at 25 weeks. It was hard for all of us especially for me because my little sister had always been the stronger one of us, and to see her suffering on a day to day basis nearly killed me. We all lived at that hospital for nearly 4 months. I remember having to drag my sister out of there for lunch and dinner and to go home. Those were some very tough times. I donated blood on several occassions for my nephew since we were the same blood type and watched as he developed from a frail little boy to the little rascal he is today. Javier Ismael Hercules is 6 years old now. He will be 7 next year in march. He is really smart and loves to play basketball. He is the sweetest thing you've ever known and is your normal boy (he is even very popular with the little girls at school!!! And he's just six!!!). So far the only thing that has been affected since his birth are his vision and his speech. He does wear glasses, but then so does everyone else in our family. Besides, he says he likes to wear them cuz they make him look smart. The other issue we encountered was with his speech. He's worked with a speech therapist for many years now and is doing really well. He is right there in smarts with all his class mates though (he's in the 1st grade, and will be moving on to 2nd grade next year.). So, for us, even though it's been a long road and had some scares along the way, we have this most perfect little boy who is just the cutest, sweetest, smart and loving child ever. Anyway, I guess what I am trying to say is that if you have questions or concerns about your babe, be it a medical question, or something regarding his development, feel free to ask. My family and I have been through this and we extend our support to you.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2008 01:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's good that every thing turn out ok. He must be your little miracle boy then..
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2008 23:45 EDT
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hmm, i see you're updating each chaps.... o.o *crosses my fingers* is there gonna be an additional chapter at the end? xD Its almost midnight so i cant even stay up n see *sobs* lol... i nvr forgot bout this fic!!!
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Reviewed By: Jewelbrat2 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2008 17:45 EDT
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i have another question. When kagome dragged herself away from the fires did she hide in the well and then 3 days later get discovered by bank? cuz thats the only reason i could think of that could explain why they couldn't find her for 3 days. please answer in your next update. Hope you and your family are well. God bless.
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Title: advice
Reviewed By: Jewelbrat2 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2008 01:53 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
k so, I just watched the anime Saikano and it gave me an idea. So, remember at the beginning of this fanfic when its Inuyasha talking about how he killed an angel(kagome)? Well, in the beginning of Saikano, the main guy is talking about their relationship(his and his girlfriend's) like its over(later on I found that he thinks she's dead), and it sounded a lot like the beginning of this fic. So, I was wondering if when you get to the part where he's talking about having killed her near the end, that it turns out kind of like saikano where she turns up alive and they make up(just leave out the end of the world stuff ^_^), if you don't i understand not wanting to steal someone else's ending but please have it along the 'happy ending' line(without the fairytale element 'cuz that's annoying). PLEASE. The beginning gave me bad vibes but i think this could fix it. Thank you for reading my silly addition review to my last one! i figured that you wanted a real review, not just the ones I've been giving you that say "please update."
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