| "The Demons Within Us" Reviews/Comments [ 663 ] |
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Title: Splendid!
Reviewed By: Corr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2008 18:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is simply beautiful! I'm so hooked up on it. I can't wait until you update. I'm glad your son is doing well. May God bless him and allow him to grow up to be healthy and strong. I understand your workload, esp. after the little addition. I think it's wonderful that you still write, as well fulfill the rold of a mother. Your story is fantastic! Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: JustCare On: April 19, 2008 07:13 EDT
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im so glad your baby's doing well :)
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Reviewed By: yashielover [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2008 18:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just want to say that you are incredible. You're able to write a really good story and deal with your son at the same time. Your story is one of the best I have ever read. I almost couldn't stop reading. I'm really glad Alex is growing up to be a strong and healthy boy. He's very beautiful:-) I really hope that you can update soon because this is a fantastic story.
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Reviewed By: catbaker On: April 15, 2008 21:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have just completed a marathon read of your story over the last two nites and I'm totally hooked on this fic! the emotions conveyed in the songs fit so well with the characters struggles!! I look forward to your updates on this fic, but I understand your situation, being the mother of two...and congrats on the addition...I pray everything works out well for your family!!
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Title: ALEX IS BEAUTIFUL,,,
Reviewed By: OLDDOG333 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2008 00:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW GREAT UPDATE SORRY THIS IS LATE BUT GOOD TO SEE YOU BACK!!!! FIRST OFF LET ME JUST SAY ALEX IS BEAUTIFUL,,, IT'S SO NICE TO HEAR THAT THINGS ARE LOOKING UP FOR YOU GUYS!!!! I DON'T THINK I NEED TO TELL YOU TO TAKE GOOD CARE OF HIM OR TO GIVE HIM ALL THE LOVE HE DESERVES BUT I WILL ANYWAY....XOXOXO FOR ALEX NOW ON WITH THE REVIEW....NICE UPDATE GOOD TO SEE THEM BACK ON TRACK AGAIN HOPEFULLY YASHA WILL BELIVE IN HIS TRUE FEELINGS FOR HER ,,,, BUT ONLY TIME AND MORE UPDATES WILL TELL!!!! Sorry but here comes the bad pun "WRITE ON" I just Can't seem to stop doing that..... . I am OLDDOG333 KEEPER OF THE DEMON HOUNDS,
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2008 06:40 EDT
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i spent all my free time this past weekend reading you story. i couldn't stop. the intensity of the characters is a thing of beauty. i have no idea how you connect so closely with the ability of the human mind to wall itself off in desolate solitariness, but the forlorn quality really comes through to the reader. i love stories that make me feel. thank you so much for posting this.
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2008 11:54 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your son is really a miracle ^^ I found myself smiling at how you said he recovered n acts. Babies bring so much joy to people *Squee* I wanna hold my lil baby bro now xD lol I'm glad the light is shining in your favor and it better stay that way! =).... And this chapter! I'm so happy i got to read it cuz i couldnt since i had exams >< but it's all ova, and am now on vacation 4 2 weeks *yay* Isnt inu hawt?! Man, your an amazing writing and i get so much reality out of reading it, it's like i literally leave this world n enter the characters to understand them. Inuyasha is carrying a shit load i tell you, and it jus makes me love him even more with how he can handle it, lol. I love the updates like always... and hope to read more ^_~ Take care... xoxoxo for you n your kawaii baby ^__^
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Reviewed By: im the girl who smiles sadly in the mirror On: April 06, 2008 22:00 EDT
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I can't see your link to deviant art and all that. If you could email it to me or something. I'd appreciate it. clc_tx@hotmail.com thank you
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2008 06:43 EDT
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i can't wait for the next update! update soon please!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2008 23:19 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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things seem to be getting interesting... feel bad for kagome... and inuyasha being a jerk... wonder how things will turn out... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Nekoreibaka-not sgined in On: March 30, 2008 00:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Congradulations on your long awaited sucsess with your new son Alex. A baby is a wonderful gift and you and your husband have every right to be able to exsperience it. Everyone knows what a handfull a baby can bring, so paitently we will wait for another chapter and update on your beautiful son. He is quite cute. :)
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Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2008 20:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter 10: This story is not bad. There are a few spelling and grammar mistakes and you should probably add 'religion' to the list of genres (a little preachy DX), but it's pretty good. I do have another issue though. Kagome's shift/formation of feelings towards Inuyasha was abrupt. In just a month she goes from not knowing and being nervous around him ad wanting to be accepted, to "loving" him? Where were the budding feelings and recognition of her attraction? The uncertainty and her period of coming-to-terms? ...She is twenty-three right?
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Reviewed By: Kags13 On: March 25, 2008 17:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Write more now please!!!!!!!!!! Write more.
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Reviewed By: Kags13 On: March 25, 2008 17:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Write more now please!!!!!!!!!! Write more.
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Reviewed By: Tarzan from fanfic.net On: March 24, 2008 16:20 EDT
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oh man I just reread the whole thing and took into account the into where inuyasha talks about killing the angel...is there not gonna be a happy ending?! Scary, but still good!
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