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Title: RAWR!!!
Reviewed By: BrOkEnCyDe-GrRL27 On: June 07, 2009 17:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please continue. itz an awesome and i wanna badly see what happens at the end =^,..,^=
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Reviewed By: inyu01 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2009 21:02 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWSOME STORY SO FAR....... I LOVED IT!!!! I hope u continue.I have been wating on this chapter 4ever!!! Keep writing!!!! PLZ CONTINUE!!!
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Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2009 23:21 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME CHAPTER!!! Inu and Kags makelove and come to really see who they are in this world. The feeling this chapter gives is beyond words. I wanted to cry for both of them. But yet I see what was in Kagome's words so I find I'm happy they have one another!!!
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Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2009 23:17 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sorry for your lost. But there is light to be found in any darkness. I thing your find but you need rest. You have so much going on and your mind, heart and body went through a lot over this year. Take time to breath in the air around you. Let your mind get some peace then try again. Go on and make books so I can buy them. You have the power to be anything you want. Many of us love your work, so go for it. I believe in you a 1000%!!! May you be bless with all you want and need.....
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Reviewed By: crazykiss [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2009 17:19 EDT
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All i can say is WHERE HAS THIS STORY BEEN ALL MY LIFE! You are a true genius, and i was hooked on this story from the first paragraph. I've been reading till' the wee hours of the morning and i can't seem to stop, even as I write this review I'm itching to get back to it... off i GO! KEEP UP THE BRILLIANT WORK
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Reviewed By: Kibo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2009 21:50 EDT
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Finally! And it was beautiful and flowery - not usually your style, but I liked it. Had to laugh when Inu kicked the jeans from his "person". Just didn't fit with the flow, I guess. So sorry to hear about your miscarriage. :( But don't lose hope! Friends of ours had 3 or 4 ectopic pregnancies (and their subsequent losses) before getting pregnant the first time. Now they have 2 happy, healthy little boys. Who can explain the losses, we just enjoy the gains we get. I was watching my son play in the tub tonight and thinking I don't have nearly enough time left to me, even if I live to see his grandchildren being born, it will never be enough time to enjoy this person I've been blessed with. And bless you for considering adoption. Not enough loving homes out there. Good luck with the writing career!
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Reviewed By: secret35 On: May 05, 2009 13:06 EDT
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When i read the title, that was the first thing that came to my mind was the song from metallica, it always inspires me to do things that i've never done before. I hope you adopt one of my family memebers is thinking about adopting also. and i have to say, your way of thinking is so positive. i love that about you and i can see it in your story and i cant help but love it. please update soon love secret
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Reviewed By: naiobi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2009 23:40 EDT
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amazing chapter. i think we all have been waiting for this wonderful chapter. i've enjoyed this story since the beginning, and even though i don't read inuyasha fanfiction anymore, i always come back to this one. it's one of my favorite fanfics of all time. on another note, i wish you the best of luck on your future publications. you're an amazing writer and everyone deserves to read your stories. have fun with it! thank you for updating and hope you do again soon!
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2009 21:24 EDT
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What an amazing chapter! Inuyasha and Kagome finally got together, yay... that makes me very happy, not to mention it was such a warm/fuzzy moment. Besides that, I'm sorry to hear that you miscarried. If you do adopt, please consider girls from China. Even though modern culture says that it's ok to have girls, many families still want boys, so girls are often unwanted, which is a terrible shame. Anyway, good luck with professional writing!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2009 19:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful chapter! Very sweet. I loved the background story on how Kagome survived... lol The well save Kagome's life... InuYasha's back story was a little disturbing...(in a good way of course... but still that's his MOTHER!!!(not that she remembered)) I wish you all the best in your personal life too. I wish people didn't have to go threw that... especially when they are as wanting and deserving as you!
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Reviewed By: mysteriousmaho On: May 04, 2009 13:27 EDT
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i also wanted 2 say dat without all dat training or knowledge,u came up with such a fantastic story...i sure once u learn all dat stuff,u fic will become better n better n who knows we might be seeing a program about u telling ur own story n u might mention me saying dat i(i.e mysterious maho) was da 1 who inspired u to go ahead and a few others through my review(hahah,just kidding).......n i would like 2 know ur name so dat as soon as ur buk releases i wanna b da 1st 1 to buy......well atleast near my place....
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Reviewed By: mysteriousmaho On: May 04, 2009 13:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow!it was fantastically amazing..i mean i just cant get it out of head you know...every 5 min my mind just goes back 2 da story n i cant help but wonder wat's gonna happen next, r dey gonna pretend like nothing happened or r dey gonna make it official????..man,this story is so addictive......n hey,dont worry about being a gud author n all dat,trust me u'll be n are one of best authors out dere....n all my wishes for you,ur husband n lil alex.....
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Reviewed By: C.A. [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2009 09:13 EDT
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Great chapter! Inuyasha and Kagome have finally come together! Loved it! I would also like to give you this virtual hug: -hug- because I know that a woman who has gone through what you have really needs one. And I would also like to wish you luck with becoming a professional writer. I know if you get published I would buy what you've written.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2009 07:58 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that inuyasha and kagome finally told each other about their pasts... and they finally told their feelings too... and got to be together... hope things work out for inuyasha & kagome... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Title: The Demons Within Us
Reviewed By: Niece [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2009 05:58 EDT
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I'm pretty sure that your most recently added chapter is the most BEAUTIFUL thing I've EVER read. It's just... Kagome's & Inuyasha's first time was so achingly wonderful and sincere, I began sobbing when I finished reading :) Okay. Well, I'm gonna go read it one more time
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