| "The Demons Within Us" Reviews/Comments [ 663 ] |
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2009 10:42 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How is your son doing? Anyway...great chapter. Really good to hear from you. It sounds like everything is going well. I can't wait to read what you have in store for us. :)
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2009 05:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You say the update took awhile, I say it just came in time. Very sweet how Inuyasha saved the day there, but really with the kicks Kagome gave was just a special treat for all of us thats reading. Kinda surprised she even watches violent things, such as Boxing. (shrugs) Eh, shows that she has more up her sleves than we can imangine. Well I hope you update and keep up the good work, plus Im glad that things are A ok with you and your growing family. Peace...
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2009 02:12 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that kagome has done a lot of thinking... nice that inuyasha came to help her also... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Phedre On: March 17, 2009 00:09 EDT
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YAY! New chap! It's a nice little taster to keep you followers here wanting more. :P Can't wait for that little message in my inbox announcing an update. :)
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2009 23:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ahh!!! new Chapter.... but short... new chapter!!!! really quickly too... so I shouldn't complain... (its very odd compared to the length of the other chapters...) Come on InuYasha get up on that pedestal and give the girl a kiss!!!
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2009 22:07 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. Wonderful characterization as always. I look forward to reading more soon. And I love those Karen Marie Moning books, too, by the way. :)
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2009 07:47 EST
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i loved the symbolism of the dream. it was written in such a powerful style. the way the dream kept affecting him only increased the sense of intensity. i am so glad that you decided to come back to this story. it's always had a special place in my heart.
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2009 07:10 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow.... its been a while and you came back with this breathe taking, emotional chapter. Final Inuyasha got his head out of his ass and open his eyes to a new light, Kagome. And now I'm just wondering what happened between Naraku and Inuyasha's Father... And how his mother became psycho... (shrugs) Well I guess you'll answer these in your chapters to come. Hope you keep it up and update. Peace...
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Reviewed By: C.A. [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2009 22:38 EST
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I just love this story. I look forward to reading the chapter when you post. :) Good to know your little guy is hitting those milestones. It's just amazing to watch something you brought into the world grow and develop (I have a 6 month old daughter). Patiently awaiting the next chapter. --CA
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Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2009 08:30 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy cow it's been a while, I'd almost forgotten about this story. Excellent work, glad to see you back! I loved all the metaphors in InuYasha's dream, and how the Shikon no Tama seemed to have come into play. And now I'm wondering what Naraku's up to...hopefully he's not going to do anything to Kagome. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: antyem13 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2009 01:10 EST
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I hope you are doing well, and that you enjoyed writing this as much as I enjoy reading it... though that might not be possible, seeing as writing can at times be amazingly frustrating. I'm so very glad that your little boy is doing well, my oldest brother (who happens to be living with us at the moment) just had a brand new baby. Though they had quite an easy time with it, no complications and a relatively easy birth. (Though I really can say much on how hard birth is I've never been through it.) I would offer you a very big hug, I'm seeing for the first time just how hard taking care of a newborn is... holy cow, I'm glad I didn't have kids really early like some of my sisters did. Much love and encouragement!!
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Reviewed By: Silly1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2009 22:45 EST
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Yay! I read up to the (so far) end: Ch. 30, and anxiously await more! I wanted to write a review after Ch: 28--if ever there was evidence of the Divine, there it was, and I'm not talking about the story! It's a wonderful story, and so is the real one about your son (may he continue to be a miracle child in every sense of the word!). I hope you continue both, as I'm sure all your readers want to know what happens next. (My eyes are gritty--I'm going to sleep now!) Eve
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Reviewed By: Silly1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2009 18:40 EST
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2009, just discovered this story & can't stop reading--until the chapter where Sango tells her story--that's where I am now. I know I won't sleep till I read the whole thing, but I felt I had to write something here--the emotion in this chapter really spoke to me. As you have said, it's universal. It also doesn't need a tragedy to make it real. We all feel responsible for things out of our control, and it's part of life learning how to deal. The greatest thing you convey is that we're not alone. It tugged at my heartstrings that it was Inuyasha who saved Sango when she was at the brink. The songs, too....most of my pivotal memories in life are connected to songs that impacted me. I never really listened to the words of the new generation of songs. Maybe I should.......thanks, and I'll drop another note at the end (or maybe sooner!) Eve
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2009 13:13 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that inuyasha experienced a revelation or enlightenment of something... what will inuyasha do now... what was naraku and kikyo talking about... what will naraku do... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty on old computer On: March 01, 2009 05:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love the new chapter... Naraku is VERY creep... I cant wait for InuYasha to admit his feelings...
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