| "The Demons Within Us" Reviews/Comments [ 663 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2009 03:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderfull chapter! And you know what I'd read any book that you'd write!
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Reviewed By: luvininu28 On: May 04, 2009 01:49 EDT
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Wow!! I think you have fully captured what it means to cherish someone. Bravo!! It's amazing!! Thank you!!
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Reviewed By: Lynzi18 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2009 23:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am in love with your story.. I love every chapter to you update. But I especially love this chapter because it was utterly beautiful to read and it was well written. i can't wait to read more from you.. and I hope everything works out well!
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Title: Love it
Reviewed By: inulover [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2009 22:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is amazing, I honestly had to force myself to stop reading last ight so I could get up for class the next day. Then ended up skipping two class and reading anyway. Also I love the Highlander books and Karen Marie Moning.
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2009 03:49 EDT
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I really gotta say, the new chapters are really impressive. It especially helped that you changed the old ch. 30 into 31 and inserted the new ch. 30 w/ the dream sequence and smile, it flows better now... Anyway, I hope you're doing well, and Alex too! I can't wait til the next update!
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Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2009 17:32 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow it's been awhile!! I happy everythings is gooding good with you. I loved the update can't wait for more. I happy the that you and your family are well
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Title: WOW!!!!great updates
Reviewed By: OLDDOG333 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2009 20:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!!!great updates GLAD TO HEAR ALEX IS DOING SO GOOD !!!! mama gets to sleep at night how about papa has he been helping???? ANYWAY GREAT UPDATES !!!! I'M JUST WONDERING IF YOU WILL L ET HIM TELL HER BEFORE THE SHOW AS IT WOULD ADD A NEW SPARK TO THE GROUP!!!! As always we --await your next update I am OLDDOG333 KEEPER OF THE DEMON HOUNDS ^- -^
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2009 18:01 EDT
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This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by authors/artist, Inuyashaloverr and KnittingKnots, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedfics.html (Fiction) http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedart.html (Fanart) Check them out to see what you were nominated for! Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ Inuyashaloverr & KnittingKnots Owners/Administrators of the Feudal Association ***Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works.
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Reviewed By: animecraz92 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2009 02:58 EDT
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oh one more thing... hows ur son doin? hope ya'll r all doin well. :)
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Title: a story of true excellence!
Reviewed By: animecraz92 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2009 02:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story gets betta and betta every chp. its so intense and such a thrill 2 read. keeps me on te egde of my seat wonderin whens the next chp gonna show up and how much betta it will be than the last one.there are very few authors it writing talents like urs. so far i can only really name 3. u, sailor x, and wolfblossom. ya'll r extraordinary writers and should consider writing anime books made by the fans. cant wait til the next chp. this story makes me think of a beautiful by mariah carey called 'anytime u need a friend'. its a story of truth, heart, and love.
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Reviewed By: YupMuppy On: March 20, 2009 19:45 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm truly at a lost for what to say. This story is absolutely amazing, but that's not the entire reason I'm hooked. There's only been a few stories that I've come across that are... inspring, and those are the ones I've never let go or been able to forget. Your story, I think, is up there with them. I'm really grateful for that. :)
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Reviewed By: catbaker [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2009 16:57 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It truly warms my heart to see you continuing this story!!! The last two chapters were beyond wonderful and so heartwarming!! Poor Inuyasha, so conflicted in his feelings, but no matter how he tries to deny it, it's just so obvious how much he loves her! And the classic Miroku counciling session with Kagome at the fountain made me smile from ear to ear. I love that monk! It was nice to see how conflicted Kagome was in this chapter as well, considering that she's usually so upbeat no matter what. To see her pondering her own faults and doubts was refreshing and really made me connect with her. The big fight scene was great, and the perfect way to bring them back together...sort of. I can't wait to see the big scene for next chapter...in fact, i'm fairly drooling over the possibilities! Hope little man is doing well...can't believe my own baby girl will be five this month!! Enjoy him while he's still so little...unfortunately it doesn't last long enough!
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Reviewed By: Rhiaonna_Moon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2009 15:28 EDT
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I love Monings highlander series, Hawk, Drustan, Dageus, Adam, their all just so....so...wonderful and I still want to go live in Scottland!I totally understand how you could have gotten distracted. Anyway, I loved the new chapter and can't wait for an update!
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Reviewed By: secret35 On: March 17, 2009 15:13 EDT
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hey it's me again, im so glad you updated so soon. this story is the highlight of my life, your such an amazing writer, have you ever considered writing your own book, which probably people have told you that, but you should really consider it, your absloutly AMAZING!!!! i hope you update really soon, but one can never rush good talent. love secret35
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Reviewed By: secret35 On: March 17, 2009 15:12 EDT
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hey it's me again, im so glad you updated so soon. this story is the highlight of my life, your such an amazing writer, have you ever considered writing your own book, which probably people have told you that, but you should really consider it, your absloutly AMAZING!!!! i hope you update really soon, but one can never rush good talent. love secret35
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