| "The Demons Within Us" Reviews/Comments [ 663 ] |
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2009 22:46 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that things have gotten worse for inuyasha and his group... looks like naraku & kikyo are up to no good... will inuyasha take the bait?... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: C.A. [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2009 22:32 EST
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Nice to see an update. I know how busy life can get with a child and other things going on (I have a 1 year old myself and can never find the time I want for writing my fiction). It's a nice little taster chappy to keep the masses interested, I must say. And I am still interested. I hope everything is okay in WDW world. Take care, and keep writing. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Keianna On: November 03, 2009 12:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't care what anyone says, your writing is beyond talented. I just turned 18 and I want to be a writer and I only read work by those who can inspire me to improve and though this is just a fanfiction story I love it all the same...update soon...I understand how busy you are so no rush on it...But good luck with everything going on in life...p.s. I don't have any problems with the point of view switches. I read things like that all the time...but yeah can't wait for your next update. ~Suzumi-chan_17~
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Reviewed By: fudge On: October 21, 2009 20:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Im so happy to hear about your return and am looking forward to your, no doubt, amazing chaps to come. Thank you for continuing with this amazing story and i can't wait to see your work!
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Reviewed By: palii On: October 20, 2009 07:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its good to hear from you again, i am sorry to hear of you loss, but am over joyed to hear that you son is doing well, i think that its because your son and mine are about the same age, as they are both 2, mine being 2 and 1/2 now. as for the chapter take your time anyone thats gone through so much should never have to rush, at the same time i do hope that you update, as i enjoy reading this story very much, hope to hear from you soon.
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Reviewed By: yashkags4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2009 23:45 EDT
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i'm very sorry for your losses. seems like you've been going through a rough time but im glad you're pulling through. i can't wait for you to update again! thanks for stayin strong and not giving up on the story!
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Title: Don't Worry about them
Reviewed By: WonderBread On: October 19, 2009 22:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wouldn't worry about them they may or may not like it but I can say for some of us that actually like to read enjoy two character point of views in a chapter, it makes you pay attention ohhh the tragedy in that right :) :) :p anyways I hope everything is all right and going smoothly for now and I hope nothing is wrong with you. I know how you feel about long hours I have a two year old myself and am always on the go until she goes to sleep and then I'm doing chores by the time I'm done with that I also fall into bed so when I get a moment to relaxe I'm usually reading amazing fanfiction. I give you and any one on this site alot of credit because it takes balls to write and put it out there for everyone to see no matter what you may think of it at the time. From a parent to a parent life only gets better and so will the writing :)
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2009 21:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope things look better for you in the future. It really sucks to hear about the miscarriages. Wish you well, and all the best, and look forward to your next update!
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Reviewed By: K`Shay On: October 19, 2009 16:33 EDT
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im so sorry for your loss hope your ok and who ever that is that is tell you, you anything wrong in this story needs to have their head examined because this is a beautful story i,ve never read a story that made me cry so much keep with it ^.^
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Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2009 14:04 EDT
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I'm so sorry to hear about the miscarriages. I'm sure they'll find out what's wrong. Who knows, it might be stress and diet(hopefully, it's something small like that). I hope you and your family are doing all right though. Don't worry about the story, it's only been two months since you updated. That's not a gap, believe me. Rel life definitely takes precedence. Ha! MY name's Alex (well, my middle name), so happy early birthday to Alex. I'm also sorry to hear about the laptop. It's always when you need them most that they decide to sputter and die. They suck like that. But, I hope everything is, or will rather, go well for your family in the upcoming months. Enjoy your holidays, please and uh... be well? Yeah. *cough*
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2009 01:18 EDT
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Oh and P.S if ppl don't like your hero being an asshole they could just (bleeps all the nasty things about those ppl) because thats the best thing about the hero... Its something DIFFERENT. And for once its NOT the same as all the others out there... Plus its kinda refreshing if you ask me...
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2009 01:15 EDT
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Well I am hoping you get to this story soon but at the same time I'm hoping for you to take some time, plus you're a busy mom and what not. And like last time about the critiques looking over your story and what they think, don't get too bummed if they don't like it it only teaches you that not all will love the story and that you can learn from them too, so that way you can show them up on you're next story (smirks). But yeah I hope you're just taking it easy out there. Life will always get in the way of the things we love to do so no worries on my part. Peace. Oh and this is for until December. Happy Halloween, Happy Thanksgiving (waves)
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Reviewed By: luvininu28 On: October 18, 2009 15:35 EDT
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As a fellow mom, I'm amazed you had time to write the Author's note haha! I can not even imagine the sense of loss and longing you must be feeling. I do know this though. My mother-in-law had three miscarriages before they did a small surgery to thicken her lining and then her son was born on time and healthy. So if you can bear it, don't give up. Happy Birthday to your little man and brace yourself for the terrible two's and three's haha!! As for the critics of your story tell them to stuff it. It's one of the most powerfully emotional pieces of fiction (published or not) that I've read in quite some time. Good fiction isn't always about POV or character traits, but it is also about being moved beyond words to tears and connecting on an intimate level with the characters presented. I think your story captures that wonderfully. Thank you so much for your story so far. I look forward to more whenever you can update. I wish you peace and comfort and love and joy in life, and when you are ready to add more to your amazing story, I'll be waiting patiently and with baited breath! :0) Always, ¢¾ Monique
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Reviewed By: crazykiss [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2009 09:33 EDT
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Wow, you are such a strong person, you have no idea how much I admire you. Happy Birthday to your beautiful baby boy, (i saw him in the myspace video) and I wish you and him all the best. With everything, nobody would expect you to continue this story, but it is so very appreciated that you will. This story is phenomonal and you have so many loyal readers that will be there to encourage you whenever you need. Take your time and be safe.
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2009 09:16 EDT
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I am sorry for your loss and hopefully the doctors will be able to give you some reassurance in December on what is actually going on...if you ever need to vent we are all here for you XD...and I love the stories the way they are...it wouldnt be yor work if it wasnt original in some way and pros are never pros...just grammer fanatics XD best of luck and hope to hear again from you soon
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