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| "The Demons Within Us" Reviews/Comments [ 663 ] | | Pages (45): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] | Reviewed By: animetears4 On: March 02, 2011 19:19 EST
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That was one of the most beautiful endings I have ever read in my entire life. I literally had tears running down my face while reading this story. This story is absolutely epic and you have done an excellent job. This story has reignited my love for Inuyasha and Kagome. I hope to read more stories from you in the future | Reviewed By: Scriptix (nsi) On: March 01, 2011 10:58 EST
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Amazing. I'm so glad you've gotten a chance to write again. This is one of the most beautiful, well thought out stories in the Inuyasha fandom, and I've been on pins and needles for a year, and these two chapters were absolutely worth the wait. I'm glad you and Alex are doing better. Thank you! | Reviewed By: ghusnjwi On: February 26, 2011 23:19 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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OmG! I'm really a sesshomaru/ kagome pairing fan but this story is great and I really love it.! I really hope yu update soon! :D | Reviewed By: me On: February 23, 2011 06:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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this story is very intriguing. iv had so much fun reading it so far. please write more!!!!!! | Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2011 04:04 EST
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great update... seems that inuyasha is trying to cope with his own issues... nice that sesshoumaru is helping in his own way as a brother... looks like kagome is slowly recovering but still not well yet... so naraku and kikyo are dead... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you! | Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2011 00:08 EST
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And by the way this is the BEST story I have read. Thank you SO much for writing it! You have so much talent! Bless you! ^_^ | Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2011 00:06 EST
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wow....you have me crying for Kanna and Kikyo and Kagome won't be able to walk? That poor dear....I hope Inuyasha sees her soon. | Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2011 11:58 EST
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Well...clearly this isn't as far from over as I'd previously believed, but what an amazing update! During Kaede's talk with the 'nurse' I had put together pretty quickly that she was Kanna's mother, but that she was Kikyou took me by surprise. I agree with Kagome, it would be very hard to believe this wasn't all divine intervention. She had taken care of Kohaku and Kanna, and what if she hadn't shown up that day for rehearsals? With all of the challenges and overcoming miracles of your own life, I can see where you get the inspiration for your characters. It's all fine and good to say 'This too shall pass', but you still have to live through it in the mean time. Kagome's breakdown is perfectly understandable, but hopefully now that she's no longer in danger Inuyasha will muscle up the courage to come visit her again. And he thinks he has to be punished and take the pain meant for everyone else. Look at everything Kagome's had to endure! She's taken her fair share of undeserved punishment, even from before she met him. Now, maybe, hopefully, they can work on healing each other. | Title: You are amazing!
Reviewed By: One of the regulars who wants to remain anonymous On: February 20, 2011 10:48 EST
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Wow. Now I remember!! You are the one!! I remember reading a very long time ago, back when you were pregnant, then after you had your baby, and I remember thinking how strong and courageous you were! I kept trying to imagine myself in your shoes and found that in reality, I am a coward. I could never be as strong as you are! ,,, . . . ,,, I also remember praying for you and your family, and thinking that I wish I knew you personally, and that I could help you in some way. Now, after all this time, your small note at the end of this chapter finally made me realize that you were that wonderful woman who even after being faced with all sorts of hurdles in life, still managed to come across the pages as someone very optimistic and with such a positive energy! I have no words to tell you how much I admire you, and how sad I am to know that you had problems with your eyes, it just doesn't seem fair! After everything else that you have to endure and then something like this comes! In the other hand I am happy that you baby is doing so well! It seems like you are doing an amazing job of taking care of him! He sure is blessed to have you as his mommy and I know that sometimes things seem so hard to deal with, but each experience is a lesson that makes us stronger. I know this from my own experience, and I can tell you that there is a reason for everything in this life! We may not know it while we cry and wonder why, but eventually you will realize it and look back and think it was all worth it! It just amazes me that after how busy your life is you still manage to write chapters for such an amazing story!! This chapter, along with many others have made me cry, and that is a sign that you have a way with words that manages to reach the deepest corners of the heart. I still can't understand how you do it!! I know I have followed you for a long time, and sometimes, when there are no updates for a while you tend to forget a bit about the story and who writes it,but I can tell you that this story is one of the most amazing that I have ever read! I think what makes it more special is because so many stories have been abandoned by the writers after the series ended, and good writers have moved on to other things, so it has become a rare thing to find a good story around, and this being among the best makes it very special because you are still gifting us with updates! That means the world to me!! I am afraid to ask, but I can't help myself, because I understand that writing takes time and energy away from yourself and your family. But I really do want to know if after TDWU is over, will you continue to write? I wish with all my heart that you do, but I have to be realistic and not selfish and remember that your life outside internet and fanfiction will always take priority and that perhaps you no longer feel inspired to do so? If you no longer write, please, please! Don't take away the stories that you have done! They are loved and treasured by all of us and it is always a joy to read them again! I also love that you enjoy archaeology! My father used to take us on tours to many of the main archaeology sites in Mexico, we visited pyramids all over the south and listened to many lectures and museums to see artifacts discovered during digs. It never ceases to amaze me how much information can be obtained by piecing together things like those! There is a story on DOKUGA called "Stealing Heaven by Freya Ishtar" and is based on archaeology! It's pretty good! You should check it out!! Anyway, I think I rambled for too long, I just wanted to tell you how much I love your writing, how much I admire you, and how special you are! Thank you for everything you share with us! May all the blessings that you deserve be upon you today and always!! Many hugs and much love: MC | Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2011 02:50 EST
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lols this is Sesshomaru revealing all the cards he is holding... must be a straight or something. | Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2011 02:48 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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cute! (your son I am talking about(imagines little boy putting on his shirt all by himself!)) And Sony makes LAPTOPS?>??>>??? Laptops don't last more than a year in most cases, they just aren't built like computers. My laptop (HP, aka egg cooker) gets really hot and has "issues" with the connection that goes from the base of the laptop to the screen (the plug comes undone, which when it is out of warranty I will fix myself.(IT student (Multimedia)) What kind of training is your husband doing? | Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2011 21:38 EST
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great update... very emotional chapter... lots of drama... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you! | Reviewed By: gomeyasha On: February 13, 2011 01:52 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
once agian you've outdone yourself and the results are astounding!! you dont kno how anxious i was to finally see of updates. i was constanty goin on mm.org to see if this story had been updated. and at 5am decided to do so again, and im glad i did. beautiful, strong heartfelt chapters. cannot wait to see what the end of this story has in store for all your avid readers.^_^ great job!!! | Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2011 09:42 EST
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Phew! The way you'd ended chapter 35, I thought he'd passed out or something. I'm so glad that despite his shock he was able to function well enough to get Kagome to the hospital, with Kohaku's help. So glad he had stayed behind at the car with the keys! So glad Kagome is going to be okay! Sure, there are bound to be more problems up ahead, but now that Inuyasha knows he has something to live for, all he has to do is let her know that she still has something to live for, too. And when is that Naraku bastard going to get what's coming to him?! This is clearly far from over. Keep up the awesome work! | Reviewed By: C.A. [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2011 06:59 EST
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Two days, two updates! You are on a roll! I almost started to cry when Inu got the call from Sess. Then when the next scene started I let out the breath that I was holding. Definitely an emotional chapter and it was awesome. | | Pages (45): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] |
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