| "The Demons Within Us" Reviews/Comments [ 663 ] |
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2007 22:01 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really loved the re-write. The first version was good, but this one made the emotions a lot clearer.It's like Inuyasha has been "reborn". I just hope that Kagome can help him be strong enough to withstand the onslaught from Kikyo and the other jerks who have watched and laughed while this wonderful man destroyed himself. I look forward to finding out. More congrats on the baby, too!
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Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2007 21:59 EDT
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Kudos to the baby hormones! That was one hell of a rewrite! Not that the original chappie was bad, cause it certainly was not, but the 'new' chappie moved the story on quite nicely (not that it was stagnant, cause it wasn't). The lyrics played in quite nice & InuYasha's time back in his apartment was much nicer. Though the 'sight' of him cleaning still makes me LOL! Fab collaboration with the baby!!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2007 15:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you're right, this one feels so much better than before. Makes more sense as well? I don't know... awesome kiss tho! Now what will their tomorrow bring? Should be interesting. Update when ya can! ;)
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Title: love it!
Reviewed By: Jewelbrat2 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2007 22:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS NEW CHAPTER! Not because IT WAS AWESOME, or because IT MEANS YOU'RE UPDATING MORE, or even because I LOVE YOUR FIC!(well, those too...) but because it means that the story is moving along and im waiting for them to hook up and see how the beginning ties into the future of the fic. PLEASE DON'T DO SOMETHING THAT WILL PERMANENTLY HURT THEIR ALREADY ROCKY RELATIOnSHIP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Jiwe On: September 12, 2007 19:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I adooooooore ur story....it's one of the most original stories I've ever read...so please keep it up! The most appealing part of your story to me is the depth of all of the ideas....it makes me think..LOL...but only an excellent does that. Just one question...from reading the prologue in chapter one...it seems like this story will have a tragic ending...but if i may request this...PLEASE change it into a happy ending! I don't think I'll be able to stand if its a sad ending...it's too good of a story to have a sad ending!! I hope my review has inspired you to write some more....I'm looking forward to the next chapter! ♥ Jiwe (jiwe_dream@hotmail.com....I'm at ff.net :D)
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 *nsi* On: August 28, 2007 23:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved the chapter. They keep getting closer and the kiss was just adorable. Also are you still looking for music inspiration? I have a great song in mind you should listen to. Can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: klachcik On: August 28, 2007 21:05 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story, its really um i don't no the word but its a synonym for pageturning (specially the whole sango/kohaku situation)....and i love that song i think it reallly fits
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Reviewed By: anf600 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2007 01:32 EDT
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OMG OMG OMG...awesome chapter...thanks for updating and I can wait for the next one as well...it is getting so good I cant wait till they get togther or more drama...epppp....please continue
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Title: Too tired and Lazy to sign in lol
Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer nsi On: August 26, 2007 02:22 EDT
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Oh my. Poor Inuyasha, not knowing what he wants. That can be so confusining at times. I completely forgot about Kag's scars when reading *the kiss*. I didn't realize anything, until she jumped up and said "cold hands". Man oh man, what a way to break up that hot and heavy kiss. *grins* The way you described the lake, made me want to go find it. Is it by any chance, a real place? Or based off of a real place? Well I hope everything is going good for you and that when you get your ultrasound the baby is healthy and has its ten toes and ten fingers. Keep us updated! I eagerly look forward to your next update. :) ~Autumn
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Reviewed By: Maloy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2007 07:03 EDT
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Wow! I really enjoyed the chapter! I describe the feelings really well. I like how it takes time for InuYasha to accept whatever is changing within him. You are really good! I can't wait for an update) I wish your baby the best health!
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Reviewed By: dancin4inu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2007 00:19 EDT
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Wow.... I have been so moved by your previous chapters, and tonight's read was just as spectacular. I'm all squishy now! Amazing. Just amazing. I hope you continue to find time to update, because I just love this story so much and I want more. Congrats with the baby updates, and I will send hopeful thoughts your way for continued health.
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Reviewed By: j jarviss [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2007 22:11 EDT
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this chapter rocked my socks. was that too corny? oh well. i pray that your baby is healthy and happy as well as for you and your husband.
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Title: HEY
Reviewed By: Sunekai [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2007 21:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG...im so loving how ur making this story! and good luck with the baby! ill pray he or she is safe and healthy!
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Title: WOOOOOW
Reviewed By: OLDDOG333 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2007 21:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW WOW WOW That was great, Ok give it up where is the shrine or is it a Combination of places it seems so real!!! The mist dancing over the onyx lake the Fragrant breezes ,the quiet serenity of the nigh They all combine into a place so real that you can reach out and touch the bench And feel the cool dampness of the dew that has settled there!!!! And the fear YASHA Feels of being rejected by KAGS !!!! And then the kiss was so perfect for them But when he nearly troches her back, I can see the look on her face so frightened So unsure of herself!!!! What would he do The rules of the game are so different when it comes to him ?? O MY I AM ON A ROLE TONIGHT LOL WIFE SMACKED ME UP SIDE OF HEAD SAID CHECK ON BABY???? I WANT TO CHECK ON YOUR HUBBY??? TELL HIM IT WILL GET BETTER IN ABOUT 9 MONTHES BY THEN YOU WILL HAVE A HAPPY,HEALTHY BABY AND MAY HAVE FORGIVEN HIM FOR WHAT HE DID TO YOU..he he he I am OLDDOG333 KEEPER OF THE DEMON HOUNDS
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2007 17:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was beautiful as ever. And its good when he's not saticfied with that blowout kiss, 'cause that means he wants more than ever now. And I hope your baby will be in good health and strong like other babies. Well hope you update and keep it up, its wonderful. Peace...
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