| "The Demons Within Us" Reviews/Comments [ 663 ] |
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Reviewed By: rainydays [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2007 04:53 EDT
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I absolutely enjoyed your chapter! :o) I believe Inuyasha is growing as a character! Kagome is beginning to break down that formidable barrier. These characters have really become your own, yet still possess the essentials that we all love. Fabulous job! It's simply amazing! I am sorry about your pregnancy woes. :o( I am sure they will get better. Thank you so much for the update! It always makes my day when I get to read one of your chapters! I hope all is well!!!
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Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2007 23:13 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this update!! My computer has been a ass it's getting fix now!!! Aw u poor thing but you'll be the best mama you'll see. You got the heart for it girly. till next time
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Reviewed By: nime_bby [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2007 00:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THE STORY IS GOING GREAT SO HAPPY YOU UPDATED. OH I HOPE YOU FEEL BETTER. IM NOT OLD ENOUGH TO HAVE KIDS YET BUT I HEARD THAT WHEN PREGNANT ITS THE WORST 9 MONTHS OF A WOMAN'S LIFE..CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS IN THE STORY AND I WANNA KNOW WHAT THE BABY IS GONNA BE.
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Title: WOW WO WO YOUR BACK
Reviewed By: OLDDOG333 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2007 02:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good to see an update, I WAS READING THE A/N MY WIFE LOOKED AT IT AND CHUCKLED, SAID BEEN THERE DONE THAT!!!! SOUND NORMAL,,, AND CONGRATULATIONS!!!! ANY WAY THE MOOD SWINGS SHOULD BE IN FULL SWING BY NOW NO PUN INTENDED he he he As always we await your next update I am OLDDOG333 KEEPER OF THE DEMON HOUNDS
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Reviewed By: j jarviss [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2007 23:36 EDT
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OMG, i am so glad you updated. this was a great chapter, very deep and meaningful. good luck with your little bundle of joy, but from the way you're explaining pregnancy, i'm not having a kid until i'm like thirtysomething. lol. update soon, or whenever you feel up to it.
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Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2007 19:18 EDT
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Great chapter! InuYasha is at least thinking of the possibility of maybe ther might be a small chance for happiness...there's alot of walls he's put up to be taken down. But I do believe Kagome's making good, steady, slow progress..just right or he'll just re-build! So sorry for the evil food & smell aversions. Had a co-worker that we could not even say 'chicken' without her losing it! We settled on 'yicken' for 9 months. Stale coffee breath is nasty no matter what condition you are in! LOL Glad everything is going along swimingly normal! Update when you can as it is always worth the wait! :D
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2007 18:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT chapter. Kagome is slowly doing what seemed impossible at the beginning of this story......helping Inuyasha to HEAL. It's really beautiful how she's stuck by him, despite all of his flaws. But, it's because kagome could see the wonderful person trapped inside the bitter, self-destructive masochist that Inuyasha had become. She still has her work cut out for her....definitely. But, what's so great to see is that Inuyasha is slowly but surely starting to see that HE himself may actually be worth something worth saving....because of Kagome's unwavering faith that he can find his way back to that wonderful person trapped inside. I can't wait to read more. This story is just TERRIFIC.
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Title: omg....i love u!
Reviewed By: Sunekai [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2007 18:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I LOVE U!!....update soon! i ADORE this fanfiction....keep up the good work...u rock!
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Reviewed By: animecraz92 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2007 08:05 EDT
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wonderful as always....ur story just keeps gettin better and better!i can't wait til inuyasha finds himself and starts letting his feelings for kagome show....when will kagome let him see her scars....that car incident was a pretty close call for her^_~....uh,oh...inuyasha starting to get temptations....is his body starting to burn with anticipation for kagome!? plz update soon peace (p.s.)i kinda feel sorry 4 ur husband.....when m sister was pregnant i saw the way she treated the guy she was with......sometimes i could swear my cheeks were stinging from the slaps that she gave him....(ouch)!
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Reviewed By: bridezilla1015 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2007 08:02 EDT
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Great chap! I really liked the interaction between Kagome and Yash. Is he finally turning a corner or will he slide back to the way he was? ----- So on a note totally not related to fiction, I gotta say that pregnancy doesn't suck so bad when you don't know have the "morning" sickness (that can last all day). Now the peeing every hour is kind of annoying but just wait until your abductor muscles start stretching and you get the shooting pain that comes with it (21 weeks in, girl, and we just found out 2 weeks ago tomorrow). The first time you see that little alien is soo amazing and then when you actually start to feel it move. Awesome! Okay, no more baby talk. Love the story! Keep updating when you can. Jen
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2007 00:58 EDT
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yay...this was an amazing chapter so true and heartwrenching...awww...*sigh*...reading this is amazing...and congrats on the baby...hope everything looks and goes good for you...and hopefully the little tyke of a golf ball will settle down a bit but if you can update soon
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Title: New Fan
Reviewed By: Sci-Jess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2007 16:36 EDT
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Its been a while since you updated. I am glad that you've updated. Great chapter. I hope soon that Inuyasha can return to his old self as well as know Kagome secret.
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2007 10:36 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Jus last week my mind ran off on you XD Ii'm glad u updated... I cannot stop saying how much i love your writing style!! I dont eva think i can reach half as good as you >.> OoOh, inuyasha was so so soooooooo close to seeing her baq! dammit! i wanted him to see it so badly! And the looks and all... you got too much drama here... it's killing me @__@lolz So in da next chapter... will u continue it to when she drops him off ? hhmmm? Oh oh... the pregnant part =) That's souns... hard!! Once again, congrats!!! and i hope all goes well with that ultrasonic thingy. And i kno for a fact now that u're pregnant, that would mean less updates and even after the child's birth...Well... good luck on everything and i hope all goes well ^__^ Ja
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Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2007 05:52 EDT
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*sighs* you've finally updated. *grins* I don't envy you your pregnancy. But the ultra-sound is a cool process. I reccomend you asking for the warm gel, it feels better then the cold gel. Anyways.. I loved this chapter. Inuyasha realizing a few things and maybe allowing his true personality to come to the surface. I look forward to that. I adore how you portray Kagome. I love the spiritual zen feeling you give her. heh, I was hoping that Inuyasha would make a comment about her scar, but I see its left to another chapter. ah well, i'm patient. It's six am and i havent slept yet, so i'll cut this short. Keep up the great work and I look forward to another chapter. p.s. have you thought of baby names yet?
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Reviewed By: antyem13 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2007 04:54 EDT
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Sqwee!!! I love it. He's finally realizing that he may not be as bad as he thinks he is. Man I feel like just going and giving the poor guy a hug, he really needs one. People can still be good, even when they have done terrible things, it just makes being good a lot harder. Man there are so many things in this story that have more then one way to look at it. His whole life could be looked at from so many different angles, he could be a person with almost no consiense or feelings, or he could be a person who was forced to make choieses without really knowing what he was doing, or he could just be someone who really doesn't know how to get out of where he ended up(this one is my opinion). I have no idea how you came up with this story or how you can write it so well. I just hope you don't stop. Happy writing from the one and only strangeness, Emily.
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