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 Reviewed By: Aisuru_315 [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 13, 2007 16:24 EDT
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Awsome story definatley one of my favorites right now...pleaseee update soon I've been waiting forever lol
 Title: AHHH!!
Reviewed By: KagomeAkane [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 12, 2007 10:35 EDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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CUTE CUTE CUTE CUTE!!!! But why's it taking soo long for the next chapter?? I want's more Yash!!! Hehe but seriously awsome chapter very long awaited.
 Reviewed By: bKatty  On: July 07, 2007 21:47 EDT
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I've said it before && I'll say it again this is one of (or THE) best stories I've read. Can't wait for the next update!!=) (oh!! and CONGRATS!!)
 Reviewed By: Ookami Suriya [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 17, 2007 02:49 EDT
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AWESOME~!~!~!~! I've read the entire story in like 6 hours... Started at about 6 and its 12:49 now. Very dramatic. Made me cry even. but it was amazing! I cant wait to know what happens next! update as soon as you can!
 Reviewed By: Caitriona695  On: June 14, 2007 13:13 EDT
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Good chapter. I don't care if they are sometime short, as long as they are good - like this one. Also. CONGRATS ON THE BABY!!!!!!!!
 Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 14, 2007 02:25 EDT
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I have never read a story so full of... spiritual enlightenment? These last couple of chapters have brought tears to my eyes. You've touched me through a story and given me wisdom to pass down through family and friends. You are going to make a terrific mother.
 Reviewed By: nime_bby [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 12, 2007 02:13 EDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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omfg this story is the best ive ever read!!!!!!!!!!! plz plz hurry and update before i die here sitting on my chair starring at my computer screen waiting for an update^^
 Reviewed By: nime_bby [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 12, 2007 02:13 EDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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omfg this story is the best ive ever read!!!!!!!!!!! plz plz hurry and update before i die here sitting on my chair starring at my computer screen waiting for an update^^
 Reviewed By: axel720 [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 11, 2007 03:02 EDT
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Congrats big time on the baby ^^ (Oh, the writing is good, too) XD
 Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 08, 2007 23:20 EDT
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Grats on the bun in the oven, lol. Sorry if that was obnoxious, I mean well. Still, thanks for the update and all, and hey, life throws us all curveballs. We can only hope to write as much as we can. I;m on Facebook, send me an email privately and I'll send you my name in reply (email it, pseudonyms are great, afterall), and I'll not be an uberstalker like some people. Anyway, good luck with the move, and with future work (as well as the pregnancy). Update as you can, since life crushes us all down. Well, later.
 Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 08, 2007 01:45 EDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Aw a baby gotta love it!! I hide from kids they want to be around me to much and i'm their mommy! lol anyway long time lady lady happy to see ur well that very good email me sometime so that I know ur still alive ya know lol. ah poor inu the sad thing is so many are like that. Why most we see what there to know it's there? We feel see the great spirit in so many things but deny it. hmm no one want the finger on them so they blame god, i mean the man give free will that mean. I love ya but it u fuck up that's on u i'll be here if ya need me. But before this become a unwant history class from "that Native chick" I say to you now that you are one of the best and always will be and I thank you for that. I'm good at reading people and you would make anyone happy to friend or family, so great mommy u in deed will be. till next time
 Reviewed By: TrinityK (nsi)  On: June 05, 2007 05:42 EDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Aww, this chapter may have been shorter than your norm but I think it was packed with a ton of insights to make up for it. Really, I genuinely like reading the insights on life. heh. Congrats on the pregnancy!!! It's something new but I'm sure you'll do your best at it. ;-) I liked this chapter. I'm glad Yash is finally admitting he needs Kags and can't let go of her. I can't wait for the next chappie. I'm sure it'll be great! :-)
 Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 03, 2007 14:07 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Wow, a new chapter and your pregnant? Damn that must be a record or something, you know? Well hope you and the baby are doing ok, plus your "hubby" as well. And the chapter was amazing, beautiful, incredibe, and outstanding, shoot I could go on for days if I wanted to. Hope you update when you feel like it and keep it up. Peace.
 Reviewed By: rainydays [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 03, 2007 02:01 EDT
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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First off, congrats! on the baby! That's fantastic! :o) I am very happy for you. Second off, fabulous chapter! No worries about the length.. I think it was an adequate length for a breakfast chat. I am glad that Inuyasha is being fairly civil to Kagome.. and he even calls her Kagome! :o) That's definitely progress. I really am curious to see what happens next.. and how Hong Kong goes. I wonder if Inuyasha will really lay off the pills. That would make me so happy! I am glad Inuyasha's and Kagome's relationship seems to be progressing! Third off... I am glad you are done moving.. Have you unpacked? That's what took me the longest.. I had NO idea I had that much stuff.. it's just ridiculous. Anyways, congratulations once again! I can't wait to read what happens next!
 Reviewed By: serenity101 [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 02, 2007 21:25 EDT
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update, update! great chapter. i haven' heard so much about God or religion since i left catholic school to move to PA and go to public school. i love your story. and congrats on the baby!
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