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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2006 20:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your story and look forward to your updates. I also like how you have the characters. True to form but different at the same time, if that makes any sense, lol. I know its a bit dark and what not but I think you really got something good going on here. I would liked to know more about their backgrounds though. I think that would be interesting. But I do like the flashbacks, I know some dont, but I do. It gives a better explanation of whats going on and that between the characters. And poor InuYasha. It almost seems he doesn't know if he's coming or going. He has his own inner demons to deal with. And not just cause he is one either, lol. That was great chapter to an excellent story. Cant wait to see what happens next, so update when you can. :D
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Reviewed By: Jane67 On: August 13, 2006 18:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This was another great chapter! I'm sorry that I haven't reviewed before. I've tried to, but mm.org can be a real pain when your trying to leave a review. Anyways, I hope we see a bit more into Kagome's past as I loved the little conversation she had with Sango at the end. Good luck with your next update!
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Reviewed By: Tarzan from fanfic.net On: August 11, 2006 00:59 EDT
Comment/Review:
wow!
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Reviewed By: KC14 On: August 10, 2006 21:51 EDT
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oh my gosh! That was so awesome! I loved it, epsecially Inuyasha's jealouy...that's so like him...and i have to find that song, it sounds really good Well I hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: KissMe4BadLuck [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2006 14:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU UPDATED!!! WHo0o0o0o0o0o0oT!!! Kagome and Inuyasha finally kiss!! I thought it would never happen!! Literally. Lol. Anyway, Update soon. Ja ne.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: monk-miko On: July 31, 2006 20:41 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great fic. Please hurry and write another chapter cause I want to know what happens between Inuyasha and Kagome. After that Kagome still is not mad at him. She has guts to just put up with everything that he says and does. Please hurry cause I don't know how long I can last without having another chapter. LOL!!!!
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Reviewed By: scherezade [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2006 12:04 EDT
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I read your fic the other day and couldn't get over how well you're setting up the angsty, dark Inuyasha with Kagome's more redemptive/faithful persona. Contrary to some of the other reviews, I don't think you've made Kagome hollow at all - you've hinted at a painful past for her. I'm looking forward to seeing how you flesh her out further; and I like that you've given her a strong character that chooses to stay positive despite the darkness she's seen or experienced. The only objection I have is to Inuyasha physically lashing out at her. I understand he's got complex, dangerous feelings about Kagome and doesn't like how she makes him feel. But I hate the idea that he could physically push her hard enough to hit her head or strike her in any other way - and just leave her without seeing if she's okay. I know this is an AU, but that just strikes me as a terrible thing for any version of Inuyasha to do to Kagome. And if it's not addressed further, I would have a hard time understanding the development of any romance b/w Inu and Kag, since I think her character would be very weak to think it okay that Inuyasha could strike her. Anyways...it will be interesting to see how this story progresses.
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Reviewed By: Inuyashaluvr13 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2006 00:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love how your story is going. I have one question, is Inuyasha a hanyou or does he just have his youkai features excluding his (cute) ears. Best of luck, update soon.
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Reviewed By: KissMe4BadLuck [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2006 20:20 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kagome's kinda like a hollow shell.... Well, not really, but kinda..... Is there a reason for that? Update soon!! I can't wait for the next installment!!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2006 08:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOOT! for quick update....Great chapters. And who was it though that InuYasha didnt want to see at his brothers anyways? Hmmm...guess we'll find out soon enough. And it seems InuYasha has it really bad...its almost like he wants Kagome to go, but doesn't. He must've went through some shit for him to be so bitter. Im sure you'll be going into more of their backgrounds soon enough. But update when you can. :D
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Reviewed By: ~Alanna On: July 23, 2006 03:30 EDT
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WOW.... I'm not sure what to say.... rxcept I think this is a very good story and I wish for you to update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: ~Alanna On: July 23, 2006 01:57 EDT
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Is that war a real war? Is that why Inuyasha is such a bastard in this story? Kagome isn't that easy to break, she wouldn't succumdb to Inuyasha.... would she? I don't want her to be a hollow shell!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Update soon.
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Title: Ch 1-3
Reviewed By: lavie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2006 00:28 EDT
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It's pretty good/funny, though I did skim/skip some parts, like the beginning. Please identify whose point of view you are writing from or who you are writing about immediately, as I would more likely read what you've written. Btw, "base guitar" is spelt "bass". u don't need to capitalise the 'y' in Inuyasha; & why'd you make Kouga's hair brown instead of black (not that it matters). Also, wonder what scar(s) Kagome has. Tonikaku, looking fwd 2 the next chapter! Ja!
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Title: jtcl
Reviewed By: not log in On: July 22, 2006 16:06 EDT
Comment/Review:
I like your story I think is good I hope you up date soon on it
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2006 15:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this, I really do. Its a bit dark and ruley but I like what you've done thus far. Love how you've made the characters. And maybe Inu is a bit OOC, but I like him as you have him. Being this is an AU you can take it and make it any way you want it. That's one thing I love bout AU fics. Good piece ya got goin here and cant wait to see where you take them all. Update when you can. :D
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