| "The Demons Within Us" Reviews/Comments [ 663 ] |
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Reviewed By: Inuyashaluvr13 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2006 23:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a damn good fanfiction and your an awesome writer. This story is perfect, I have not seen one mistake and the plot kicks ass. This is the one of the best fanfictions I've read. Keep up the good work! I'm counting down the days hours minutes seconds till the next chapter.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2006 19:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a wickedly-awesome chapter. You have everything in its place. I love it, I really do. Just cant wait to see what happens next, but as always, update when you can. :D
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Reviewed By: Hanyoukagome962 (nsi) On: August 22, 2006 17:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey i found this fic on this site too cool. Anyways I hope you update soon i really like this fic and the suspence of not knowing what happened to the others is killing me. UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Tarzan from fanfic.net On: August 20, 2006 23:53 EDT
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aw! and I love it that miroku was the one bonding with kagome! was wondering what kind of scars she had, but the story behind was good. great emotion
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2006 04:36 EDT
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You really are a good writer. I love the character Kagome and how you prtray her. Inuyasha is mean, crude, and a bit sadistic, but it works well with your story. This story is really deep and it deals with issues that matter to everyone in this type of situation. And I think it's great that your using music as an outlet in your story for all these emotions in the air. Great, great, job. I love this story. I really really can't wait for the next chapter of this awesome story. ;-)
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2006 21:20 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story. I love music and listening to it, and your story deals with music in a more deeper way. I like it. I can't wait for your next update. Awesome job. ;-)
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: monk-miko On: August 19, 2006 13:24 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was the best chapter that I have read so far. I just knew that Kagome had to have some kind of scar on her back that reminded her of her past and I knew that something had to have happened to Miroku cause like in all the stories that I read something happened to his hand. Now if only Inuyasha can see that Kagome didn't go through the war untouched like he says, then he may know her better. Kagome just sees the bright side of everything. This chapter almost made me cry, that's how sad that one was. Miroku may have to tell Sango or Sango is going to have to ask Kagome. At least you made her scars look like they are angel wings but somethings telling me that Inuyasha may do something like tear her shirt or something while he is mad and see the scars that she didn't want to show everyone. Please just hurry with the next chapter cause I can't wait for it any longer this is just getting to good to pass up. I'll be waiting for the next chapter and may read all over again just to be reading it that's how good it was. Hope to have a new chapter soon cause I'll be waiting. Til then. LOL!!!
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Reviewed By: Jane67 On: August 19, 2006 00:34 EDT
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Another beautifully written chapter! You had me in tears with Miro and Kagome's backstories. Delving into characters' pasts like that is a hard thing to do without getting overly sentimental and cliched, but you did it brilliantly! *Wipes* tear stained face, *poor Kags and Miro.* I wonder when baka no Inu will find out about Kagome? GL with your next update!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2006 21:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter. I like how Kagome handles situations, like the singer in the hall. but then again if she can handle Inu...lol...Finally opening some to Miroku seemed to do a world of good for the both of them. Wonder what the rest of the Band will say. As for the beliefs/religion aspect, I like how you're handling it. It fits very well, and I haven't seen another one such as yours before. Keep up the excellent work. Update when you can.
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Reviewed By: InuNekoHalf-Breed [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2006 17:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! I was just thinking 'Hey when's the next part...?' and then there it was! Woohoo!
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Reviewed By: amelita On: August 17, 2006 04:59 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I am in love with this story. All the characters are completly believable, the plot flows beautifully, the songs fit perfectly, and I can't wait for the next chapter. I really like how you are slowly developing backgrounds, giving a piece here, a hint there, not just blurting the entire story in the begining. For me, it keeps the intrest up, makes a jigsaw puzzle to work out while reading. I am in awe of your explanation of faith without making it into a regurgitation of an organized religon. It enables anyone to empathize with where Kagome is comming from, no matter their personal background. There is an enormous difference between being faithful and being religeous, and sometimes that difference is overlooked or ignored and will cause others to misunderstand many of you actions. Again, I can't wait to see where this story goes, but from what I've seen so far it'll be a great ride.
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Title: LOVING IT
Reviewed By: la_cuban_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2006 15:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please write more im lovin the story it very good GOOD JOB Keep wriitin plzzz
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Reviewed By: tiffani On: August 13, 2006 22:21 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story. i like the plot and the characters. i just wanted you to know that. anyway, i can't wait to see what happens next, so update soon and keep up the good writing.
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Title: sweeeeeeeeeeeet
Reviewed By: sweethings On: August 13, 2006 21:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
my g0d.. i d0nt understand y people w0uldnt write ab0ut 50 reviews by n0w... ur st0ry kicks ass!!! me likey!!! n the great s0ngs to0... co0l...c0ol...c0ol..COOL fanfic!!!! h0pe u'll c0ntinue!!!
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Reviewed By: Ochiko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2006 21:16 EDT
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I really, really like this story. The plot, the way you portray the characters... Everything. You're a really excellent writer, and I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter!
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