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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2006 04:41 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful job with this chapter. I loved it. Very deep on Inu's perspective, I like it. I can't wait for the next chapter. I really like this story.
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos nsi On: September 01, 2006 21:09 EDT
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ohhh inu, the darkness before the light. they will be out of town, away from hoho (and that's all kagome needs, someone she feels only friendship for pushing himself on her. she could and probably is more able to handle inuyasha because of knowing how he is, but hojo might not be good for her) being away from home can lead people to discovering things that they didn't know before (just like how miroku walked into kags dressing room and saw her scars)you just don't think as much about people walking in on you. i wonder how he would react to that. when he realizes that the person he feels thinks she is about all others hurts and feels like everyone else and if she didn't she'd just whither away. great work. i can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2006 18:24 EDT
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Hmmm, so he's not een ging to try for her? Just sit back and watch Inuyasha. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: liany [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2006 14:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I got so caught up with your story that all I've been doing today was read it. This is one of the best stuff I've read in a while. Keep going, 'cause I'll be sure to read more. I know you just updated the story but I'd be greatful if you could update again really soon. Again, your story is great stuff.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2006 11:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Inu. When will he learn, and what will it take for him to do so. But even Koga knew, and has known. Heh, but just by the look he gave Hojo when the watched them on TV, he knew and quietly conveyed that to Hojo with just a look. Dont think Hojo ever stood a chance before Kagome tried out for the band anyways. She doesn't seem to look at him in the light. Should be interesting on what all happens when they all go to practice. Awesome chapter. Keep it up. Update when you can. :D
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Reviewed By: kaggiesessh On: September 01, 2006 01:28 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god...i can't believe that's the story of kagome...poor her...but anyway..great fic!!!please update!!!and really really soon...!!!!and of course...keep up the good work!!! and remember...UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE!!!!!!
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Title: YAY!
Reviewed By: InuNekoHalf-Breed [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2006 04:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Best chapter so far I felt really bad for Kagome but was amused by the almost interest in her from Sesshoumaru. The relationships between everyone are really well developed and I'm glad we now know Kouga's story as well as the entirety of Kagome's. Who supports the Ayame/Kouga ship here? ME!
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2006 13:48 EDT
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Your story, is so good and sad. I love it so much. I jope you update again soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2006 23:26 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved this chapter. Very deep. I like it when we learn new things about her past. Each member of the band is slowly learning about that ever-smiling woman. I like it. Great job. :-)
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2006 22:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, you are most welcome..**bows to WDW...** I really do like all the pieces you've made thus far for your fic. You're really good. Better than I am with a pencil, lol. But Im still learning, lol. But this was an equally great chapter. A little more with Sess and a lot more with Koga. That was great. You're taking it a little at a time, it seems, in regards to the band and how everyone slowly begins to actually know the others. Miroku already seemed more enlightened than the anyone, then Sango was pulled into the fold some. Now Koga. But what will it take for Inu? Heh, a miracle. Update when you can. :D
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Reviewed By: HanyouKagome962 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2006 20:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow that was deep its good to see that kags and ayame are as strong as they are and i loved how ayame is starting to pull kouga out of the darkness but i know inu is gunna be alot harder especially with kikyou around but i have faith in kag. Oh and i loved the pics for this fic they were amazing UPDATE SOON
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2006 19:34 EDT
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I love it, it's so angsty and great I can't wait for your next update!
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2006 01:56 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this update. I thought it was classic when Kags caught Inu and Kikyo. And I'm glad he realized what he did about Kagome at the end. I can't wait for the next chapter, I really like this story. :-) Update soon!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: monk-miko On: August 23, 2006 00:25 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is getting to good to not read anymore. I can't believe Inuyasha would do that. Kagome go sad because of him. Though she adted like nothing was wrong with seeing him like that. I bet she may cry alittle or be sad cause of what he did. She really liked him too. At least Inuyasha won't try and break Kagome's spirt anymore. She has been through to much. Inuyasha can't blame Kagome for the things that happened. Lets just hope that Inuyasha doesn't do something stupid later. Please write soon cause this chapter just killed me after I got to the end. I'll be waiting for it real soon. I just can't wait any longer for the next chapter. LOL!!!!
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Reviewed By: Tarzan from fanfic.net On: August 23, 2006 00:07 EDT
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sigh* did the chapter really have to end there? tortuuure but interesting to see how inuyasha tries to make it up to kagome
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