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Reviewed By: me 2 On: September 29, 2006 17:36 EDT
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oh my gosh, i love this story. thank you soooooo much for writing it! this chapter was my favorite by far.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2006 22:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
** in her best-est Elvis impression..** Why thank you, thank you very much ...lol. But I thank Fenik for making such a great ficlet about The Lord Of The Dance. Any-who...This was a great chapter. Seeing is believing. Wonder what it will take for Inu to actually see anything. Tho Kags had no idea Inu was behind her at the time, Sessh knew exactly what he as doing. Now Inu thinks that if its not Sessh, then its someone else, thanks to Koga, that wants Kags attention and affections. Little does he know. hn...Indeed.... :P Update when you can. :D
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2006 09:21 EDT
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Wow that was a long chpater... and for a moment in the bathroom stall... Inuyasha wasn't a bastard.UPDATE SOON!!
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2006 03:42 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I so can't wait for the chapter when Inuyasha discovers the truth about Kags. About her own scars and past. He's making assumptions, but then again, he's only going on what he sees, and like he said, seeing is believing. I really like this story a lot. It's not shallow in any sense, and I love it. Awesome, long update. I can't wait for the next chapter. :-)
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Reviewed By: Inu_Kagome_4Life [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2006 22:13 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww.... damn plz updatesoon one of the reasons i love u is bcuz u wirte long chpters and not realli short ones...anyways plz update soon when you get the time
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Reviewed By: Inufan85 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2006 21:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it, love it, love it!!!! It`'s dark and angsty two things I enjoy. The music really sets the mood, I've downloaded every song. Keep doing this great job with all the chapters to come. And I have a recomendation if you don't mind, "Live again" by Sevendust (or Praise too) I really think it'll fit there somewhere.
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Reviewed By: Tarzan14 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2006 21:03 EDT
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loved the chapter! must admit that when read kagome was bout to do some kissing that my first reaction was ew he just puked, but aw forehead kiss so cute!
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Reviewed By: New Fan On: September 27, 2006 20:18 EDT
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When will Inuyasha see the truth about Kagome? When will he learns the truth about Kagome? You must update this awesome story soon.
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2006 20:06 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now that was pain that I felt from this chapter. I can't believe thaat Inuyasha just said all that. And I'm glad that she came after him. This is the best of yet, it felt so real how you discrived all that, though it is amazing how you did it. Well I hope you update soon and keep up what your doing to this story, its brilliant.
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2006 17:11 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Great chapter! I almost cried for Inuyasha. You did a great job picking out that song. It went perfect. Can't wait till you update.
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos nsi On: September 27, 2006 17:03 EDT
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squeals happily! at least something go through to inuyasha, even if he is pushing it aside. and if sesshomaru is being an ass on purpose, seeing how his brother reacts to kagome and trying to make him jealous, i'm going to come in to your story and kick his butt. sigh. somehow i think these people are going about this the totally wrong way. none of them know what inuyasha is thinking and they're making it worse by trying to make him jealous. he already thinks kagome is out of his league and they are just proving it in his mind. will kagome ever tell inuyasha about her past? it's like he's afraid to have her believe in him because she's to perfect to believe in someone so flawed. sigh. i fear the angst that's coming up. and are we going to find out who inuyasha was supposed to be visiting when he went to sesshomaru's in the beginning? the one he didn't have the courage to see?
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2006 16:30 EDT
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It's so painfully hard to watch him punish her over and over. She may do her best to let things wash through her, but those things do build up. If she doesn't stay happy for herself, but instead for everyone else, there is going to have to be a time when she breaks. It seems as though she feels too much. I only hope he realizes (really realizes to himself) that she has been broken and can be again. Sad chapter, but the dialogue between the two was great. Thanks!
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Reviewed By: animefreak492 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2006 20:43 EDT
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This is a GREAT story. I really enjoyed reading it, even though I had to force myself to start reaing it after I red the intro because I REALLY don't like reading character deaths. Please update soon. Thankz much.
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Reviewed By: New Fan On: September 23, 2006 15:02 EDT
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I just read this story for the first time. I have say this is one of the best Inuyasha/Kagome stories I ever read. I hope that you will update this story very soon.
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Reviewed By: Tarzan14 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2006 03:41 EDT
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this chapter was definitely squeal and aw worthy, but the tensions building so it's either gotta go downhill or explode right. and love how kouga is being the sneaky matchmaker!
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