| "The Demons Within Us" Reviews/Comments [ 663 ] |
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Title: OOOOOOOO MY
Reviewed By: OLDDOG333 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2007 15:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW NICE CHAPTER!!!! GREAT INSITE AS TO KAGOMES HEART AND MIND!!!! IT'S SO SIMPLE HOW A 4 LETTER WORD CAN MEAN SO MUCH TO EVERY ONE, IT CAN HEAL THE WOUNDS TO THE HEART,MIND,BODY AND SOUL. "LOVE" TRULY DOES CONQUER ALL!!!! As always we await the next update I am OLDDOG333 KEEPER OF THE DEMON HOUNDS
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Reviewed By: nancey [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2007 05:21 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!! congrats on the baby, that is so wonderful!! I don't like to hear about no morning sickness, I had it very bad! Good luck in everything!
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Reviewed By: nancey [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2007 05:20 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!! congrats on the baby, that is so wonderful!! I don't like to hear about no morning sickness, I had it very bad! Good luck in everything!
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Title: You're What???
Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2007 21:22 EDT
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Congratulations!! Yeah!! Babybabybabybaby!!! No worries, and I didn't think that was a short chapter - it was excellent as always - Congrats on everything - ... think I'll try to find you in the forum..
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2007 20:43 EDT
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Chapter 25: Its perfectly fine - brilliant, even. I don't even mind that its short as long as you update sooner this time!
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Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2007 20:28 EDT
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If I remember correctly, you made a crack about making grandkids in your A/N at the end of the last chapter...intuition maybe?? Congratulations on all your new doings!! The chapter may be short by your measure, however, anything more would have changed the nice, warm mood. It was just right! And remember, give in to the cravings! You can atone for it in 7 months! :D
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2007 20:08 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I cannot tell u how much i love your fic anymore!! I really love your writing style! It's like you've experience everything they went through! Awesome writing i tell u, and i dont mind if it was short or long...you updated didnt ya?^^ Make your next updation on the 12th! lol, jk...am sure it's impossible eh...that's my bday tho, so heads up! lolz....am doing exams now and i only got to read this so soon cuz it's the weekend and thank god or i'd have to wait til next weekend if it was during the week -_- Update when u can..am loving it...and Inu BETTER never let her go! I love the lil time they had...i wish more could of happen *grins* Ah, yes, hentai me...*Shrugs* I. Dont. Mind! lol
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Reviewed By: Di On: June 01, 2007 17:34 EDT
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Wow.... Congrats on the baby.... Hope that you don't start to get too sick.... I am loving how the story is going right now, and I can't wait to see what is next.
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Reviewed By: j jarviss [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2007 16:35 EDT
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wow! a baby?! that fantabulous haha! congratulations. the chapter was very good once again and i'm so glad that they made up with each other and shes back in the band. update really soon.
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Reviewed By: blue_girl On: June 01, 2007 09:55 EDT
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CONGRATS ON THE BABY!!! and another great chapter!! i love how Kagome (aka u actually since u write it) thinks. she says everything i want to say but cant really put into words. this story can really change how people think, hopefully for the better. anyway, watch them salts, not safe. I'm hoping for the best in the upcoming months! Happy Writing! P.S. are u hoping for a boy or girl?
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Reviewed By: ixmyeyesadorehim [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2007 09:31 EDT
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Ahh it was worth the wait! Congrads on the baby! but I'm going to worn you, if you have heart burn alot right now its because of the higher levels of estrogen. Try not to eat really fatty food because you could end up getting a gullbladder infection and have to have it removed. It happened to me when I had my baby, and the doctors said that it is very common with pregnant women. It's also VERY painful. But anyways, I LOVED THE UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: Tarzan14 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2007 07:27 EDT
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Congratulations! don't worry bout first-time mom nerves...every one will be super helpful and as for the heartburn, it'll just give you something to make your kid feel guilty about when he or she is annoying. thanks for the update! and I'm super happy inuyasha seems to be dealing with his kagome-related feelings rather well.
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Reviewed By: Bridezilla1015 (NSI) On: June 01, 2007 06:23 EDT
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Good update. I like that Kagome just laid out her beliefs like that- no pressure, no judgement, just 'here's what I believe.' Great to see another chapter (even a short one is welcome). Glad to hear the move went well and big congrats on the pregnancy. That's so exciting (and scary at the same time)! I'll keep you in my thoughts and hope everything goes well. Can't wait for an update (on the story and the pregnancy)! Jen
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Reviewed By: lisam [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2007 00:14 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved the story keep up the good work
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Title: AHHHAHAHAH
Reviewed By: silver moon dragon (not signed in) On: May 31, 2007 22:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww theee best chapter so far :D and i loved the last like 'after the girl he could no longer let go' LOVE IT :D and it wasnt that short, but it did seem a little shorter than usual lol as always, i cant wait for the next chapter XB
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