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Reviewed By: Bridezilla1015(NSI) On: August 24, 2007 10:33 EDT
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Great update! I loved the description of the temple- I could completely see it in my mind. I giggled when Inuyasha said he didn't want to fall down a well. Too funny! The thought of Inuyasha cleaning is hilarious. Good luck with the ultrasound. I go back in a little less than 3 weeks for my Glucose test (yuck). I heard the heartbeat again today and they measured me. I'm measuring right at 25 weeks (and apparently my weight is right on track, too- *phew!*) Stay well and take care of that baby! Jen
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Reviewed By: blue_girl On: August 24, 2007 09:02 EDT
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yay! update! *happy dance* yay! another kiss after loong time *happy dance* yay! more sexual tension! *happy dance* Happy Writing!
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Reviewed By: Mo On: August 24, 2007 01:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So I was listening to Savin' Me by Nickelback, and I couldnt help but think of your story. It sounds like a good song for Inuyasha to sing later on in the story. Although I do love your recent update. I'm excited that they got to kiss and have a little bit of fluff. thanks for the update. keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: antyem13 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2007 01:39 EDT
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For some reason the idea of him finally cleaning his apartment because of Kagome is funny as hell to me. Maybe its because I never clean my room. I about fell out of my chair laughing. I love the way you made the part with him finally cleaning so serious, it made it seem so funny to me. I loved the way Inuyasha is now all conflicted over what to do towards Kagome, its a great paradox since she's usually the one confused around him. Hope you have good news on the baby on th 28th. The one and only strangeness, Emily.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2007 01:20 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... that was sweet... inuyasha & kagome spending time together... then them kissing... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2007 00:15 EDT
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Hi Honey!!! Yummy chapter! Totally Yummy. I love the temple - I could see it so well - and then he cleans - He's becoming a grown up!! LOL LOVE IT - can't wait for more. Take care!!
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Reviewed By: serenity101 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2007 00:05 EDT
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yay they finally kissesd passionatley!!!!! i'm so happy. *sniff* update soon, this is getting great.
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2007 22:51 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely loved this chapter. It was like the eye of the storm. The visit to the shrine was so well written, I could practically feel the cool serenity. I love the give and pull in Inuyasha's mind. Trying to find some equilibrium. It's beautiful that Kagome is helping him do so or facilitating his self-realization. The kiss? Wow, tender, sweet, passionate- what a place to share such a moment. I enjoyed the ending as well. There's nothing like cleaning one's surroundings to clean the debris in the mind. As always, beautiful writing. You have a wonderful way with detail. Can't wait to see more;)
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2007 18:46 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your update was shocking to me. But in a good way, i swear i moved faster than any human when i saw an update from you. My hentai mind is at ease now, lolz. I kno this is getting old with me saying it all the time but i seirously cannot stop about how u write! you never cease to amaze me and i think it would def stay that way for as long as u write and i read. I was so inching for more than a kiss but in my haze i knew it was impossible with so much unanswered question and her scars I am still happy, yup, i couldnt stop grinning. Even when i just started it, i so wanted to jus scroll down but i kept pinching myself and urging myself to jus read and not leave out anything until i reach that wonderful part in the chapter XD I'm glad to hear your baby is healthy,^^ the thought of it keeps me saying "kawaii" cuz am a sucker for babies =D Guess it has to do with all my lil siblings that my father girlfrien jus keep shooting out... hehe, ((i cant let my dad hear me say that)) haha, Well i hope all is well, and dont stress yourself, cuz that re-writing the SEVEN time seems like some kinda stress... i think i'd wanna break something if i was in that state, lolz Well, ja, and may all things pleasing shine on you =)...oh oh, their photoshoot thing...*thinks* i'll leave it as that... *_*
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2007 18:33 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so dreamy. I know how it is to write a chapter and then not like it one bit when you go back over it. I just deleted half a chapter yesterday so I know how you feel. Anywho, let us know how the ultrasound goes. Good luck!
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2007 18:00 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another good chapter. I am so thrilled that it is FINALLY happening. The REAL Inuyasha is finally starting to stand up....and all thanks to Kagome's slowly rebuilding his sense of self. I have loved watching Inuyasha's progression from the beginning to now. In a lot of ways, he doesn't even seem like the same guy....but he is. He was just in so much pain then that he SEEMED hopeless. But, slowly but surely, Kagome got to him and made him want better for himself......all so he'll feel more worthy of HER. Your characterization in this story (especially Inuyasha and to a lesser extent Kagome) is terrific. This is definitely one of the best stories I've ever read. And congrats on your pregnancy. I hope things continue to go well for you.
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2007 16:40 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chapter!! Update soon please and keep up the amazing work!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: nancey [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2007 16:36 EDT
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You have no clue how excited I get when I get the e-mail saying new chapter! Wonderful as always. Did you cry when you heard the heart beat?
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2007 16:48 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. The ideas you have about faith and belief are wonderful. You can put into words everything I would love to say to some people. It is truly a breath of fresh air. I can't wait to get another chapter from you. It has been a long while since I read a fanfic I loved so much that I stayed up until 3 am on a weekday to read it. I almost fell asleep at the computer last night. Anywho, love the story and can't wait for more. I'll be praying for you and your baby.
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Reviewed By: zaknaf27 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2007 00:24 EDT
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I started reading this in the afternoon b/c of the IY fan guild nominations and it is now almost midnight. Couldn't stop. The characterizations are wonderful and I'm so glad that Kagome doesn't sound "holier-than-thou". Wonderful angst with the characters, makes me feel so hurt for them, but that's what makes a story so great!! Congrats on your pregnancy and hopefully your symptoms will lessen even more. I look forward to an update on this story.
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