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 Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 01, 2009 00:52 EST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Great chapter! I really hope there will be a happy ending...please...
 Title: Feudal Association
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 23, 2008 11:42 EST
Comment/Review:
This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by authors/artist, Inuyashaloverr and KnittingKnots, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedfics.html (Fiction) http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedart.html (Fanart) Check them out to see what you were nominated for! Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ Inuyashaloverr & KnittingKnots Owners/Administrators of the Feudal Association ***Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works.
 Reviewed By: catbaker [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 15, 2008 02:36 EDT
Comment/Review:
ah!! finally!! I'm so glad you were able to breathe just a little bit to get this wonderful chapter posted!! I really did miss this story, and read it many times over the past months just to keep it fresh for when a new chapter appeared!! I'm so glad things are going so well for your little man, and I can totally relate to the hero worship children have at that age!! it ALMOST makes me want another!!! then I look at my teenager and reality smacks me in the head again!
 Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 14, 2008 06:34 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow... I knew he was going to react like some one just slapped him, but didn't know he was just going to sit there and take in the lie... or truth... Its funny though, Inuyasha the one that has no showing scares what so ever and yet has a bad ass attitude, and Kagome the one that has just that scare on here back and is practicly a saint.... Heh. Well hope this would turn out for the best and sorry I didn't review as soon... life is taking me back as well. And Im happy to read that your baby is a smart, high in spirt, and funny kid... (smirks)So, until next update that I hope you'll update. Peace...
 Title: ""OMG"" IT'S A REAL UPDATE!!!!
Reviewed By: OLDDOG333 [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 01, 2008 01:01 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
""OMG"" IT'S A REAL UPDATE!!!! WONDERFUL NEWS IS THE BEST UPDATE YOU COULD GIVE US!!!! AND ALEX DOING SO WELL IS GREATEST UPDATE OF ALL!!!!!! PLEASE GIVE HIM A BIG HUG AND A KISS ON EACH CHEEK FROM THIS OLLDDOG AND MY MATE!!!! GLAD TO HERE HUBBY DOESN'T WHINE TO MUCH LOL,,,, SURE BOTH OF YOU HAVE ENOUGH PRESSURE AND ANXIETY TO LAST A LONG WHILE SO RELAX AT LEAST TILL ALEX STARTS WALKING BECAUSE THEN THE RACE REALLY STARTS HE MAY BE LITTLE BUT HE'LL BE FASTER THAN A SPEEDING BULLET SO GET READY hehehe .... AS FOR THE STORY POOR KAGOME !!!! HURRY UP AND GET YASHAS HEAD TOGETHER BEFORE THE COMPLETION STARTS DON'T LET HIM GET TO MESSED UP IN BETWEEN!!!! As always we --await your next update I am OLDDOG333 KEEPER OF THE DEMON HOUNDS ^-^
 Reviewed By: Lunemoon  On: September 29, 2008 19:07 EDT
Comment/Review:
I love you so much! I'm so glad you didn't abandon this wonderful fic! IT IS THE BEST FIC I'VE EVER READ! (and trust me, I've read A LOT). Your characterization of Inuyasha and Kagome are sheer genius and the plot line and drama makes me hungry for more! This fic truly is perfection!You really have a talent for writing! I'm even more glad that your baby is doing well! Thanks again for continuing this amazing story!
 Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 29, 2008 18:42 EDT
Comment/Review:
Wow, it's been forever! I love hearing about Alex, he sounds so cute... anyway, I really like that you have the contest set in Hong Kong! My parents are from Hong Kong, and I've been there many times myself, and it's just such a beautiful vibrant city (a little smoggy though). Oh, I hope Inuyasha gets a chance to make up w/ Kagome during the contest... keep up the good work!
 Reviewed By: bigfanofiykag [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 29, 2008 18:30 EDT
Comment/Review:
This story is one of my favorites. I am constantly looking for good stories to read and this is at the top of my list. Not only is it very well written, but it stirs emotions in me that I had found dormant for a while. This story is not only just one helluva story, but it is very inspirational. Kagome's faith is simple and beautiful and is contagious. She is a real angel and her faith, rather the way you described her faith, just makes me feel good. Thank you for such a heartwarming and inspirational story. You and your family (especially your son) are in my prayers. Keep up the faith and share your gift wonderful gift of writing with everyone. God bless you and yours. Oh, yeah. What the hell is wrong with InuYasha? Is he thick or what? Kagome's beauty is far beyond skin deep and he's an idiot to run from her. What is the deal with that? I know. I know. I need to be patient, but man, the main reason why I don't like reading fanfiction is because I have not patience waiting for updates. Ha, go figure. Take care and update soon.
 Reviewed By: Kibo [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 29, 2008 07:27 EDT
Comment/Review:
WOOT for the update! Yash just can't seem to get it right, eh? And I'm so happy to hear your son is doing well! My brother in law just turned 9, and he was diagnosed w/CP after he was born too. The doctors told my in-laws he'd probably never walk - well they should have told Trevor! You should see that boy run! He's mainstreamed at school with kids his own age, and needs a little help w/math, but other than that he's right on track mentally too. I know it sometimes helps to hear stories of people overcoming the odds. My son decided to be a good boy and stayed in until 39 weeks. He's three and a half months now, and happy and healthy. I hear you on the crazy schedule! I'm surprised you even find time to write - I have enough trouble finding time to clean the litterbox!
 Title: Good story!
Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 29, 2008 02:48 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I just started reading this! It's really good! And you have a Baby! Congrats! My sisters little one just turned one not too long ago! MY sister told me it was my turn now...but she's setting me up on blind dates...their all nice guys but their all filthy rich. Well may god bless you and you're family.
 Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 29, 2008 02:46 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I just started reading this! It's really good! And you have a Baby! Congrats! My sisters little one just turned one not too long ago! MY sister told me it was my turn now...but she's setting me up on blind dates...their all nice guys but their all filthy rich. Well may god bless you and you're family.
 Reviewed By: New Fan  On: September 28, 2008 20:26 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I am so glad that you have updated. I understand completely that taking care of your little boy takes up most of your time. But, when you do update, I am not disappointed. I am so glad that your son is doing well. I know that he will overcome his CP with time. You are blessed with that little one and know that he is the main one that made you a better person and mommy today (as well as others in the family). God bless you, your husband and that little one. Update whenever time will allow.
 Reviewed By: bluezinthos [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 28, 2008 20:21 EDT
Comment/Review:
beautiful. poetry,really. your descriptions in the beginning part of the chapters was just beautiful. and hojo is a major, and there is just no other way for me to put this, ass. of course there was going to be some level of shock to find that out about kagome. no one else really knew what sort of pedestal that inuyasha put her on. yeah, he could of handled it better, but he didn't curse or yell, or "what the fuck?" now he just needs to try and explain it to kagome. i can't believe it's been a year already! i bet he's such a little handful.
 Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 28, 2008 19:28 EDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
great update... just when things were going well... feel bad for kagome and inuyasha... hope things work out in the end... as for hojo can't say i like him... someone should have punched him... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you... hanka
 Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 28, 2008 19:26 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Another great chapter of "how stupid can InuYasha get". It's great to hear that Alex is doing well! does your dog wait until after you have feed the baby to start to eat the real "dog food"? My friend and I were talking this weekend, about our dogs waiting until after we have had our dinner to see what they may get from of our meals before they even touch their own...
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