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| "Violation of Honor" Reviews/Comments [ 497 ] | | Pages (34): [ « ‹ 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 › » ] | Title: Congrats!
Reviewed By: Kagome357 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2007 04:53 PST
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Congrats on the win at IYFG for Uchuu. It's well deserved and you should be proud. Second, wonderful story. I love the young love budding between Shippo and Rin...I just really hope (clasping my hands together and praying) you don't having them sexing at such a young age. I was into another story recently and it suddenly had Rin having sex at 12 and I found story unreadable after that. You're written about them in a cute puppy dog way and it's very cute. As far as the rest of the chapter's concerned, I could almost feel Sesshomaru's wrath as he fought the the Inu Gang and little Shippo's brave accounting for his actions was very cool. Now what the hell are Ota's men up to? Don't tell me they're trying to get Kagome...that's gonna drive Sess even crazier! Please update soon. I love the hell out of this story and again, congrats on the win!
| Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2007 02:00 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lovely! I love the whole cute part about Rin and Shippo! Uchuu's jokes were great! Uchuu and Sumiho are really sweet! Quote: Shin was indignant. "I was not peeking into the lady's chamber. I was simply looking for food." Inuyasha snorted at that. "Yeah, like I would believe that. I suppose your food is often found on the discarded inner kimono of naked women?" Miroku hated that he had missed that particular show since the woman in question was exceptionally lovely. It would not do to have the pixie dragon running amok in the village, however. He was unsure if the place was big enough for more than one hentai. "Release me, you overgrown mutt," Shin growled impatiently. "I do not answer to you." End quote, so funny, but what happened to Shin? I so hope that some thing bad happens to Tsune. Thanks and good luck with writing some more soon(hopefully) thanks for the update*BIG GRIN* *HAPPY HAPPY* *BOUNCY BOUNCY*
| Reviewed By: Maddie50 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2007 23:51 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was so hoping for something good to happen. I am beginning to think you have a sadistic streak a mile wide. Things are not looking up yet! Young love. It is so embarrassing to be making out and one of your parents walks in. Of course in this case the parent wants to literally kill you. Sesshoumaru has completely lost his cool. He needs Kagome desperately and she didn't recognize him and she said that she hates him. Now I see that Nobunaga is still after Kagome and is putting up wanted posters. I'm going to go scream now. Jean.
| Reviewed By: Doberbitch [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2007 15:58 PST
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Let me just say thank you from all of us for this quick update. Rinseternalsoul, our professor is upset with this cliffie, and he wanted me to let you know. Ooo. Don't worry we all love ya! It was very humorous with the whole Shippo, Inuyasha, Rin and Shin. We, I, loved, absolutely loved how you are depicting Inuyasha! I just love him in this story. Of course, the whole Inuyasha topic is where we lost our professor. He is cramming all the names and story background just to be brought up to speed. Now, we lost him. The grades are posted so he won't get back at me for this public disclosure. Haha! Ah, there is next semester, damn! Aww, Inuyasha is like the rest of us who experienced the power of attraction. It's nice to know that he and Kagome just genuinely care for one another. Very moving with Sesshoumaru's struggle and his encounter with the villagers. Honestly, writing well done is not adding up to what I want to say. You are just awesome. Finally, thank you too, Risa!
| Reviewed By: Maddie50 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2007 23:40 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter certainly highlights the emotional impact Kagome's forced absence has on her friends, especially Shippo and Inuyasha. Sesshoumaru also seems to be suffering from the separation and he has yet to recover from his traumatic situation. Their reunion in the village should prove very interesting, as I am predicting Kagome will be able to identify him by his aura.
| Reviewed By: kcddagger On: December 03, 2007 23:39 PST
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This is a very psychological chapter in dealing with the effects that Kagome's disappearance, and Sesshoumaru's mental, physical, and emotional rape had on all of the characters that could have been considered close family to the two, and to the two themselves. Very well written again!
| Reviewed By: clusterlizard1 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2007 23:36 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
when Sesshomaru goes to the village, won't Kagome be able to tell by his aura? ya know, like spending so much time with him she would have grown to know what his aura 'felt' like at least. oh well, whatever happens, im sure it will be great. clusterlizard1
| Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2007 01:00 PST
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eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa.. ........................what are you tring to do kill me or some thing I mean realy.....not koo with that cliffy.........but wont he expect to see Kagome considering he had a message sent for her to be retrieved....I mean realy.......................and what was that reaction Inuyasha had to our little bline (other blind) friend hmmmmmmmm........I'm think that Kagome will be free to love Sesshoumaru with out to much trubble exsept for the whole Inuyahsa's hated half brother think.................ooooooooowwwwwwww I cant wait for the next chapter......I must read......................Nyuka
| Reviewed By: FuzzyToad On: December 02, 2007 19:56 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic chapter once again, never disappointed! I can't wait to see what happens when he get's to Kag's village, and what about Saya & Yasha. As always, waiting with baited breath. :)
| Reviewed By: FayeMegan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2007 19:34 PST
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oh my gods the suspense is killing me! Can't wait for the next chapter
| Title: Damn it!
Reviewed By: PitaBread [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2007 17:40 PST
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You know, I was just thinking about how evil it was of me to leave my story, Choices, on a cliffie, and then I read this, and I'm like, 'Damn! A cliffie!' LOL This was a great chapter! Lovely emotions, and it looks like there may be an option for Inuyasha once Kagome goes to Sesshoumaru. Well, it's almost time! Almost time for Sesshoumaru to tell Kagome who he is! I don't think it's going to happen right now - while he is bringing Rin back. I think he'll reveal himself after Asuza is gone for good. But I'm excited to see what happens when he shows up to collect his ward. Great job, I await the next chapter!
| Reviewed By: ktshabatie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2007 17:14 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hahaha. I loved the part where Shippo draws a picture of Kagome! I totally pictured a little kid drawing in crayon with their idea of a perfect portrait. She probably had blue hair and orange skin.. I'll stop now hehe. It's good how upset you showed Inuyasha being. He always will protect Kagome, even if she is taken to be Sesshoumaru's mate. Sesshoumaru will never be able to get rid of him. I can't wait for the next installment. Sesshoumaru and Kagome reunited! I really hope it's something interesting!
| Reviewed By: Doberbitch [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2007 17:20 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Thank you for updating quickly! I must say that I enjoyed this chapter immensely. Of course, my friends and I talked about it and concurred how it was a great follow up. Saburo and Yumiko are great characters. Damn, you are good! I loved the background information on Saburo, and his genuine heroics in helping Yumiko while blatantly disregarding his safety. You should have heard our collective DAMN when Iku blocked the monkey king's sword. My heart when out for Sesshoumaru and his post traumatic syndrome. Hurray for Kagome fighting demons when bathing. I really loved that segment. Rinseternalsoul, my friends gave me a lot of flack about me rating each category for this story despite the fact that it was a straight ten across the board. Let me explain, we NEVER discussed any of the categories in the offered rating system when conversing this story. This is the truth. Our entire conversations and reflections are centered on the story, so in essence it is really just the Enjoyment Factor that is our focus point. Thank you for entertaining us for FREE and working your ass off, and you are doing a great job! You ROCK!!
| Reviewed By: TAJE [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2007 17:41 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow, Kag took care of those creeps. I'm happy she was there for Saya. I can't wait to see what happen when the group meets up. You are really getting great!!!! Peace!
| Reviewed By: CherieElizabeth On: November 28, 2007 17:25 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great installment! This is absolutely a fic that I'll come back to again and again to read! I'm always eager for updates, and usually find you on AFF. But yes yes yes, I love it! You are a fantabulous writer and I can't wait to read more!
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