| "Violation of Honor" Reviews/Comments [ 497 ] |
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Title: The bitch ESCAPED!
Reviewed By: PitaBread [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2007 17:06 PST
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So, we knew it had to happen, right? Afterall, it's supposed to be Sesshoumaru and Kagome that finish off Asuza. I can't wait for their reunion. But more importantly - yay! Kagome's finally gonna see her friends! Well, maybe not see, lol. Poor Sesshy, so helpless without Kagome. This has been great. You found an excellent reason for him to fall for her. I had a hard time finding a good enough reason in my own story, so I know it can be tough. Awesome job, can't wait for the next chapter. Hope everything is good on the home front!
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Reviewed By: Dragon Dagger [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2007 13:24 PST
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she mayh be reunited with her friends, but when is she getting reunited with her youkai! *pout* hehehe. This was once again another beautifully written chapter with lots of details and much to chew on. I'm looking forward to seeing how Saburo's plight pan's out as well as the other's
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Reviewed By: ktshabatiee On: November 26, 2007 07:39 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
There was a lot going on in this chapter, but I loved it. It wrapped up a lot of loose ends. Now I would love to see Kagome get her sight back a little bit more. And Sesshoumaru needs to go and get her before she loses hope! :]
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Title: FREEDOM!!!
Reviewed By: TAJE [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2007 03:56 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so glad I ran across your story! Not since A Sister's Gift, have I been so moved with emotions. You really got something going with this story. The dark is really dark, and most enjoyable. You really do well with stories that involve slavery and all of its degrading factors. You put Sesshomaru through something. I love the mystery in the romance department. Your charactera are adorable like the dragon, the monkey prince, and hold the phone! The stone don't work on Females? Great! I can't wait to read the rest! I know I'm in for a bumpy ride and I'll ride it with you!!! Peace!
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Reviewed By: Maddie50 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2007 23:54 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe the bad guys escaped! Excellent end of battle scene. It was real touch and go for a while. Your OC Yumiko is another successful creation. You have talent woman. Sesshoumaru is still reliving hell I see, and it looks like he will be dealing with his lands and his people for quite some time before he can see Kagome again. I cannot figure out how he is going to approach her.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2007 22:36 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEA!!!!!! Another Fantastic chapter!
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2007 21:01 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Uchuu released a string of curses that would burn a seafaring youkai's ears." This line caused me to go into a fit of laughter which ended with the corners of my eyes slightly dampened. I thoroughly enjoyed the rest of the chapter also. It seems that you visited almost every group a little and I liked the size of the segments. ...I suppose they could be called that... I like how you visited how much Sesshoumaru has been affected by his ordeal. It is obvious than it will take him many years to heal and it is probably a good thing that he has this time apart from Kagome to deal with it on his own. He would become too dependent on her presence otherwise. I assume that Kagome's eyesight will improve again after using her power. I hope that you can get the next chapter out soon. I really would like to see Kagome's reunion with her friends.
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Title: I Can't Breath
Reviewed By: Kagome357 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2007 18:42 PST
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There's so much going on here, it was hard to keep up but what a well rounded story this is. I'm glad you didn't portray Sesshomaru as being back to normal and his usual cold demeanor. He's struggling with what happened to him like all rape victims do. Yumiko and Uchuu are my favorite new characters and I hope Kagome gets her eyesight back soon. I can't wait to see her reaction to finally discovering Sesshomaru is hers. Superb story
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Reviewed By: phalon23 nsi On: November 20, 2007 18:35 PST
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I'm not one for dark fanfics, they kind of creep me out but wow! So far the story is amazing! I can't wait to read more of what you will you be writing!
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Reviewed By: Caitriona695 On: November 19, 2007 13:24 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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You have done a wonderful job of writing these fight scenes without making them boring. Often times I get lost in the fighting, but you moved between the fights so that the reader (me) was interested in each one. Thanks for sharing with us!
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Title: Finally
Reviewed By: PitaBread [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2007 18:19 PST
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So, the battles commence!!! I'm glad Sesshy's home is safe. And he seems very anxious to get to his bed, but the question remains, will he be able to rest without Kagome there? And what of our little miko? I'm guessing we'll be updated of her story in the next chapter. You almost had me worried, with Iku back in control. I think Yumiko is a brilliant character, and I'm glad you made her up. She makes a nice addition to the cast, as does Uchuu. I had a feeling when you gave us background on her that she would be more important than simply distracting Sabaro. Well, I hope all is well with you - you're such a brilliant writer. Sometimes I read my own stories and wish they could be more adventurous like yours - your taste for battle and scenery is amazing. I hope it isn't too much work to get the next chapter written; I know how it is to have others asking for an update when you think it's impossible. For now, I wish you good fortune and happy writing. -Pita
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Title: What I think should happen
Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2007 20:24 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so corny the way you ended the A/N.....hehe reminded me of one of the though realy realy old superman showes where its all like 'tune in next week to find out if superman dies'....hehe ya know.....but that great I'm so glade that Sesshoumaru got his home back and the battles for revenge are starting to insui. I mean I'm not one for revenge and I loved the rest of the fic as well but I have been antisapating since Sesshoumaru first got captured for him to kill her butt....hehe.....The half demon girl seemed to come from know where in the story and that guy that likes her too but I'm glad their there because it seem like to me she just saved the monkey kingdom......Ok I know this might sound bad but I don't was the amulet lady to die....well yet any ways first I wan't Sesshoumaru to come in (maybe you can have the odds turn in her favor for a little in) and save the monkeys and Uchoo could see that the dog demon he befriended was actrully the strongest demon lord around......o gosh that would be so crazy..........I Kinda miss not have Kagome in this chapter but it is total ok because I just glad that battles are finaly starting, I wander if Kagome is going to get her eyesight back while she is waiting for Sesshoumaru......I am still conserned about how she is going to know it is him if she doesn't know his voice, what he looks like or anything.....maybe she can recognize his arua.........Ya know what I think I think Kagome should have the ability to restore that girls eyes so she could run her shop with out her unkle I think that would be the best..................well a thats all I have to say for now hope you update soon.........Nyuka.....P.S. I give you all tens good job on the battle you and your inspirational friends
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Title: Uh Sorry...
Reviewed By: Kagome357 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2007 07:50 PST
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I hadn't meant to rate your story. I think my mouse scrolled over the box when I tapped it. I don't rate stories nor believe in a rating system. Sorry...
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Title: Dang
Reviewed By: Kagome357 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2007 07:47 PST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
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I'm not into rape and tend to shy away from them because some writers seem to have a fantasy about the topic. However, you did this story in a way that didn't exploit it and left Sesshomaru maintaining his dignity and decency. For someone who is an emotionless demon, you've portrayed him with a vulnerability and humanity that you normally don't see him depicted as such. I'm still in the process of reading it but I wanted to give you a shout out. Outstanding...the awards were well deserved.
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Reviewed By: Musicorey On: November 07, 2007 08:45 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
In two words, action packed!! There's never a dull moment. I thought it was well written, and very creative. Keep up the great work. I loved it! I think you should try to present this to some publishers...
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