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Reviewed By: Sassa, too lazy to log in On: August 31, 2007 06:24 CDT
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This chapter was definately worth the wait. I must say that the whole Kagura-episode really showed how Kagome has matured over time. She still got a little down about her misunderstanding, but she reasoned with herself and acted over all much better than say a year ago. It's nice to see such proof of development! I'm also very glad that the death-case was solved, although I smell something fishy about it. I guess we really haven't seen the end of that, have we? The Sesshomaru-part was incredible! It was really different from the usual narratation or Kagome/Inuyasha-thinking. You are really skilled in adapting language to your characters! The only thing I have to ask now is: May I get a taste from the buffé? Sounds yummy!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2007 04:17 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... glad that kagome & inuyasha are getting more intimate with each other... wonder if kagome will think about her relationship with inuyasha more intimately now that she knows about sesshoumaru & rin... any chance of inuyasha & kagome confessing their feelings when kagome goes to inuyasha's house?... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: InuAngelInuDevil [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2007 21:13 CDT
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Not to rush you or anything, I was like really waiting for that chapter 25 to be finished, I was very anxious...I love it so much and Kagome is like so strong in heart...she is so understanding of Inuyasha, though inuyasha may be hot, his attitude is very provocative...^-^...anyways, keep on writing...school started for me already this week and it is so so stressful...^-^...I shall review soon.
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Reviewed By: maryaxe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2007 20:42 CDT
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I really have been enjoying this story. I do hope you'll update soon.
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Reviewed By: antyem13 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2007 17:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, yep another of your stories that I love. The plot is full of things that are very different then most of the fics I have read. The whole conflict about Kagome trying to figure out if she really cares for Hojo is very interesting, plus the additional worries about her feelings for Inuyasha make it all the more involving. I think you have out done yourself on this one, Good job. The one and only strangeness, Emily.
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Title: Sedona
Reviewed By: Sedona [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2007 16:44 CDT
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By tweak I meant like the names... so it would be an original book and not based on Inuyasha... yaknow? I love it just the way it is. :]
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Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2007 00:59 CDT
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This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! The Feudal Association is a group that presents awards to fanfiction and fanart in the InuYasha Fandom several times a year. Our official website can be found here - http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/aug2007art.html http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/aug2007.html And our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs can be found here - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Voting is open August 1, 2007 - August 15, 2007. Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! Winners will be notified by me after August 15th. ~ The Daimyo
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Reviewed By: u ignorent fools [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2007 17:58 CDT
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oh my gah! Let them just do something!!! meh, i'm just impatient. Anyways, i think that if you did a little gathering with Hojo and Kagome, in the future, once Inu and Kagome have their relationship all situated, that it would go decent. Hojo is a very passive person, yes he'll be hurt but, as time goes by he'll move on. If someone did that to me I would want an explanation. I know like you said he doesn't need one but, but I don't know. I was also wondering if Kagome still wanted children or not. I'm glad that you put something in there. OMG. Make them talk about having kids, make it awkward. mwahaha. ok i'm done. :)
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Reviewed By: star555555528 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2007 21:12 CDT
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Omg this chapter was sooo interesting. I think it is so cute!!! I cant wait to find out about this trial thing. Sesshomaru really needs to talk to Inuyasha. Anyway please update when you have time. I hope your having fun at your new job. Have a nice month.
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Reviewed By: Inusbabe (nsi) On: July 23, 2007 12:21 CDT
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cwillia caught what I caught the pitfall of naming another character a name so close in spelling to another character. I am so glad to see another chapter, if waiting a month will get another chapter like this so be it!
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Reviewed By: Sunekai [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2007 21:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE U!!!....yay for the new chappie!....and thats so cute...pack sister....i wonder if inuyasha would actually get along with kouga (i doubt it) and what is ayame gonna do to inu?...o-0....yay inuyasha!!
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Reviewed By: Sassa, too lazy to log in On: July 22, 2007 17:23 CDT
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Lovely, beautiful, intense, finally an explanation to why Kouga has such a major role! It all makes sense! Thank you! I somehow doubt that Inuyasha will do anything to prove himself to the wolfpack though, but I'm sure he'll be given opportunities to pull through any doubts in due time. I find it sweet how Kagome's will to make things work so often turns out in ramblings. I do stuff like that still with my bf, worry about that we do not know each other or that there are things we have missed out. Inuyasha handels Kagome better though: my bf simply agrees with me and tells me we'd better split up. Stupid... : ) Anyhow, even if it takes time I'm looking forward to see how the case with the dead woman will turn out - and of cause to know if mating season will take its toll on Inuyasha. Please, don't let him pull away yet again! And can it be that little Rin has battered an eyelash or two towards out stoic Inu Yokai, hmm? Good luck with your everyday life and enjoy, me, mom and my best friend will wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2007 14:34 CDT
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hahaha it's a good thing that they can eat chocolate too, I would die without it...anyway I love the new chapter...update soon...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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Reviewed By: axel720 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2007 07:42 CDT
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Always a treat to see an update from you. =) Looks like they're getting to know each other better, and I like that you didn't let them just go ahead and screw on the lawn XD I think the Sango Miro one-shot is a great idea, you write them well in this =D Very entertaining. Thorough, as usual, but I liked the more relaxed scenes when Inu and Kagome were on their own and able to just enjoy each other. Looking forward to that next update, keep up the good work.
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Title: YAY
Reviewed By: XxSangoxX [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2007 03:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm SO glad I found this story on here... I know you had it on aff.net but not as many chapters. lol I LOVE this story very much and honestly cannot wait until they sleep together FINALLY damn, he's wanted her for so long it's almost funny. I don't know what else to say, I had some things to say but i'm so damn tired I don't really know what i'm doing lol peace V Heather.
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