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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: Sunekai [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2007 12:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow!!!!....they FINALLY did the huge IT...and yay for kags for facing her fears...kinda embarressing tho that she asked for advice from ALL her girlfriends....lmao....cute how inuyasha was so gentle and he has at least some control over his youkai side.....kinda quick with the moving in factor....when will u have him feeling for an actual mating? be funni if out of no where hojo comes back....lmao....so yea...update soon!...please dont take so long....a month is torture for me!....T-T....
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2007 04:25 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... finally inuyasha & kagome are together... as in bed and in one house... is it still mating season... will kagome get pregnant during that time... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: axel720 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2007 02:53 CDT
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Wow! I bet everyone's thinking "FINALLY"!! It really is about damn time XD I'm thrilled that they've finally taken that next step, and I love the realistic way in which you dealt with Kagome's insecurities and how they didn't just screw right away like in so many other fictions. Again, your little details make the fic, but I find sometimes that it's flooding with details - maybe a little too many? But hey, it's your style and it's working. I loved this chap (for obvious reasons) and I can't wait for more. I can't wait to see how Inu and Kagome deal with this new development and living together. Update soon!
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Title: Good ol' northwest
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2007 02:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter, very very nice lemon too. I was so happy to see another chapter from this story, and even more happy to see that Kagome let go this time too. I'm excited about more, so you'll hear from me again next time. (Arizona has made me look like I belong with my tribe *so cool*)
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Title: 3 am, too tired to sign in
Reviewed By: Autumn the Reviewer nsi On: October 15, 2007 02:05 CDT
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Yes! Yes yes yes yes yes! Awesome chapter. Perfect chapter. Your beta is awesome. I was so anxious waiting all this time for the next chapter, but da-um. If your next chapter is as good as this one was, feel free to make us wait. It was well worth it. I love how Kagome was so nervous but then gained a massive amount of courage to go through with the sex. I love how you wrote the lemon, it was very tasteful and not at all vulgar. Which is refreshing. Having Kagome move in with Inuyasha was a nice surprise. Over all, I think this was a very well written chapter, and it makes me giddy inside to wait for the next one. You rock! Keep up the fantastic work. (oh, and yeah, please think about it, you have the talent to make it work for you. :)
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2007 22:20 CDT
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Well,thanks for this very informative chapter. It was full of surprises too, who would've thought that Sesshomaru and Rin were getting it on already, he never gave a clue. I was surprised at Kagura not being catty with Kagome she was very civil but I still don't trust her. Missed Sango and Miroku in this chapter. Ok,so what is next cause our favorite hanyou is suffering from a serious case of the blue B's and he has been very chilvarious. Oh,please just throw him a bone, hehe. Till next time.
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Reviewed By: u ignorent fools [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2007 11:58 CDT
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Excellent, Rin and Sessh are together. Thats great, it adds more depth to your story. OMG I was watching Rachael Ray. And then I read this and thought 'oh Kagome is like Rachael Ray' and that just made me happy. Now all she has to do is say E.V.O.O. and the transition will be complete.
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Reviewed By: The Daimyo On: September 22, 2007 20:53 CDT
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Your story has won an award from the Feudal Association for the August 2007 term! Your award can be found in the following location for the period of one month. http://www.cadkitten.com/feudalassociation/aug2007awards/Best-AU-AR-Fiction -2nd.jpg After that, only first place banners will be available for download, as they are on perminant display, here: http://www.cadkitten.com/feudalassociation/Awards_Aug2007/Awards.php The Feudal Association is a group that presents awards to fanfiction and fanart in the InuYasha Fandom several times a year. We just finished our seventh term in existence! Our official website can be found here - http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/ And our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs can be found here - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ The Daimyo Owner of the Feudal Association
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Reviewed By: cougiecat1 On: September 16, 2007 18:19 CDT
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Very enjoyable story. The sexual tension you built up between I&K was done very well. I'm usually not a fan of breaking up couples, but you also did an excellent job of showing that K&H were really just not right for eachother anymore. You showed that there was a communication breakdown that went beyond the bedroom to affect their deeper emotional connections. And now Kagome has to relearn dating, communication, and intimacy! What's a poor girl going to do?!?! Especially when your teacher ain't all the good with all the emotional crap! Well- Looking forward to Mr MCHunky Hanyou giving her her first big O. Thanks for the story!
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Title: From Hell to Heaven
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2007 00:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not going to put my life story down in a review, but I will say that it was really nice to have this chapter to read after the three day hell drive I just finished to move from Washington to Arizona. I'm looking forward to more.
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Reviewed By: inu_miko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2007 22:11 CDT
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i really love this story, its so hard to find good ones out there. i write too, but not nearly as good as this. please keep it coming
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Reviewed By: elementalobsession09 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2007 14:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so excited you've updated again. I've been anxious for another chapter. Happy Labor Day! I hope there's plenty more to come. You haven't disappointed me yet. Not that that's really possible. I'm looking forward to your next chapter. And I'm not gonna pressure you with the whole "update soon or I'll hunt you down" crap. Good things take time and I'm willing to wait. Good luck and happy writing!
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Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2007 02:35 CDT
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*yawns* I stayed up again, to read your newest chapter. I'm still enjoying it, and I adore the puppy slobber scent markings. Creative touch. I wanted to bring up your writing talent, and encourage you to write an original short story and submit it to writer's digest. It has contests and the winner receives cash prizes. I think you have a good chance to win, if you were ever interested. It's late and I'm tired. Keep up the great work
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2007 15:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
brouhaha? What a funny word, he he! Anywho, I love this chapter. I like the new Rin-Sesshoumaru story line. It adds to the depth. I'm also really glad you explained that whole Inuyasha, Kagura, Sesshoumaru thing. I wonder if there will be any trouble for Sessh and Rin later. One can only hope. I love drama. And yes, jealous demon Inuyasha would be too yummy for words. I'm such a perv!
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Reviewed By: sempai19 On: August 31, 2007 07:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just ate breakfast and now I want to eat again. The food sounds so delicious.
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