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Title: Yes!!!
Reviewed By: sweetkijo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2007 14:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes!! Yes!! Yes!! They are finally back in eachother's lives. It is so romantic how eachother are dying to be together but to respectful of one another to do or say anything to jeopardize what they have. You are right....a man will wait for as long as it takes...if he is a good man. But I cant wait til the first kiss, I think it is gonna be explosive. I was kidding with the blue balls....ehehehehe....thanks so much for the update and take care of yourself.
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Reviewed By: u ignorent fools [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2007 15:22 CDT
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She has the restraunt she asked Kouga about earlier. And she left Hojo. Poor guy, poor Kagome..... poor Inuyasha. Lets get some happy going on here. hmm. I'll be looking forward to your next update dear.
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Reviewed By: Aylese1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2007 00:34 CDT
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This is a really good story. I think in the end Kagome and Inuyasha should get together and marry each other and have kids of their own. You have creativity and imagination, keep up the good work and I'm looking forward to the update.
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Reviewed By: axel720nsi On: May 02, 2007 16:13 CDT
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I like where you've taken it ^^ There are some little gaps that need filling here and there though. I'd like to see those future developments! =p
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Reviewed By: violet blossom On: May 02, 2007 06:20 CDT
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Finally...They meet again..And this time without HoBo..Haha..I'm glad Kagome finally has her own restaurant...Hope she and Inu will be together soon.. PS : I think the condition you mean about RH- mother and her fetus is erytroblastosys fetalis. A mother with RH- having a baby with RH+. Her body recognizes it as an antigen and responds in producing antibody. Her first baby can be saved but if she get pregnant with another RH+ baby, her antibody will attack the fetus. It can caused death for the fetus and called erytroblastosys fetalis.
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Reviewed By: @___@ On: May 01, 2007 06:00 CDT
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YAY! Kagome wish came true!! well...half of it ^^ oooh I can't wait for the next chapter. Hope you update soon x]
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Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2007 03:22 CDT
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*grins* I love the way this story is flowing. Kagome finally figures out that she isnt happy with Hojo, and she gets her restraraunt. Now after a good six months *not moving too fast imo* she meets up with Inuyasha.. How wonderful is that. I'm truely impressed with how this story is going and i eagerly await the next chapter. Congrats on the plasma job, thats wonderful. I've only donated plasma a few times; I had to stop because the cold feeling you get when your blood returns to you, made me sick. I just couldnt handle it. So i do other things to help the community. Keep up the good work! p.s. congrats on the seconding. Knew you had it in you! :)
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Reviewed By: ~Alanna On: April 30, 2007 23:14 CDT
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I'm so happy!!! I am so glad that they are over! Wow, I was just wondering how long it was going to take for them to be over, but you surprised me. Thnx for updating, hope you update again soon!
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2007 21:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm very happy that Kagome has found her niche in life. It's good to know that she pulled herself together and was true to herself and followed her dream. Will you put Sesshomaru and Rin together?(just asking). What little stinkers Miroku and Sango are, I mean I know they felt a responsibility to Kagome as professionals but come on Inuyasha is their friend. Even if they couldn't tell him directly they could've gave him a hint, you know how friends do. Anywho, kudos to Sess for bringing Inuyasha to the resturant now he doesn't have to guess where Kagome is, but I hope they'll have a heart to heart talk in your next chapter. FANTABULOUS CHAPTER LOOOOOOOOVING ITTTTT!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: sweetkijo [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2007 19:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is fantastic. It is a real joy to read, but I am sooooooooo ready for some interaction between Inu/Kags. Can you at least give us a little sexual tension..lol. Poor Inu is gonna have blue balls if this keeps up. And we cant have that now can we..?lmao....thanks for the update. I look forward to them...
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Reviewed By: moussajinx [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2007 18:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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I can't remember if I'd reviewed this before or not, and to be honest I'm too lazy to go check. My bad :P I am now leaving a review I hope I'll remember leaving.:) Firstly, your culinary experience must be that of either actually cooking things or having an appreciation of good food, the thought is apparent in what you put into Kag's 'meals'. It's a nice touch and makes me want to make all the stuff I haven't had time to for the last little while. (I'll have to send you a recipe for Chanterelle/Cremini stuffed buffalo(or beef) tenderloin.Mmmmm) Also, you've done an admirable job of researching the medical aspects of this, though there are a few bits you might have gone into further depth regarding the miscarriage(s) (D&C and other things that may have been necessary, but not always. Anyhow, moot point). all in all you've made a wonderfully original story here and I'm eagerly looking forward to further updates and more 'fun for me' reading. Thank you for your wonderful story! Cheers!:D
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Reviewed By: Seiteki_Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2007 16:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i never meant that kagome running away was a bad thing, it just surprised me. amazing update, YAY inu found kags again!!! and rin and jak are in the story now! i feel like its comming to a head now...and im getting so excited to see what inu does now that he knows where kagome is, and what rin and jak do now that they know about kagomes attraction to inu...
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Reviewed By: Inusbabe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2007 14:41 CDT
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Since you did a fast forward 6 months I think it is ok that Kagome saw Inuyasha again. And it was only for what 5 mins, she made his Ramen and left. I think they might need one or two more awkward meetings. Continue to build it slow. Maybe we can get a few WAFF and other fluff, but they really need to be friends, before they become lovers.
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Reviewed By: Persephone_K On: April 29, 2007 19:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a marvellous creation you have so eloquently bestowed upon us. I could choose to praise your character developments for progressing so beautifully throughout the story, or perhaps the never been heard, never been read original plot you have formed. But… it would do nothing to express what you have given us, this creation of hard work and long hours, this piece of yourself… it truly is beautiful…and wonderful… In the years to come many who have read this may not remember all the specific details of the story, but Without a doubt they will surely remember how they felt. The laughter they laughed, the smiles they smiled the tears they inevitably cried. The way you made your reader feel as if they were deep within the weave of your imagination. I thank you for this, I am a medical student at the University of British Columbia, and your story has helped be decide exactly what doctor I wish to be. This may seems silly, but you have really opened my eyes to the view of the patient, in a time where most medical students can only see the doctors.
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Reviewed By: Glinda the Good On: April 29, 2007 09:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOO! You can't leave us on a cliffy! Write, I say, WRITE!!!!
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