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Reviewed By: axel720nsi On: April 29, 2007 05:38 CDT
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Some VERY interesting developments! I can't even guess what'll happen next, so update soon =)
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Reviewed By: bettychan On: April 28, 2007 12:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is one beautiful story. I'm not saying that just because Kagome and Hojo are no more. This is a very well thought out and written story. It is a pleasure to read, and I would have continued reading it even if the break up hadn't occured. I cried at what Inuyasha found in the trash. That was heartbreaking. Just one more thing. Who did Kagome leave with? Please update soon because I can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: rainydays [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2007 03:14 CDT
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Wow! Kagome left? I wasn't expecting that. And who the heck is the man that helped her move out? Interesting... I am dying to know what happens. This story is getting really good now.. and I can't wait to see what happens with Kagome and Inuyasha. And I am SO excited that Hojo and Kagome are no more! Hooray! :o)
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Reviewed By: @___@ On: April 28, 2007 02:55 CDT
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She left! SHE LEFT!! YES!! *pumps fist in air* umm... i mean... poor poor hojo...*trying to supress grin but cant!!!* Please update soon ^^
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Reviewed By: gillster On: April 27, 2007 20:01 CDT
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OK I did not expect Kagome to run away. You got me good there.My bigest question is what will Inuyasha do to get Kagome?---Oh Yeah! I'm not grounded anymore!!! I'm doing so much better in school.I might just get all A's, but 7th grade still sucks. I even did all my homework just to read this.Oh one more thing,{you don't have to tell me if you don't to,I respect that}if you almost became a teacher wouldn't you be like 22 years old? It doesn't pay much,but if you like it I don't think you should give up on it. Story's getting good-update!!
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Reviewed By: Seiteki_Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2007 16:30 CDT
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AH poor kagome! that is HORRIBLE...i cant imagine having a miscarriage, let alone as many as shes had. and omg she ran away too, thats so unlike her!!! grief can do strange things to people though. inus going on vacay!!! is he going to meet up with her somehow? i sure hope so. so now, what exactly did miroku tell inu? and why was saori going to cry over inu--was she just worried about him? was it kouga that helped her move out? omg so many questions...hopefully the next chapter will have more answers...totally amazing update! i dont think ive said this yet, but thank you for taking the time and writing this. its such a wonderful thought-provoking story.
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Reviewed By: Inusbabe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2007 10:19 CDT
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Well I don't need Kikyou anymore. Who helped her move out? Kouga? Now Inuyasha has to find her. Hopefully you can update Monday.
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Reviewed By: InusGurl4 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2007 09:09 CDT
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darn....:) o well...that's so sad about the miscarriage! she must feel horrible. Update soon pretty peas!
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2007 08:16 CDT
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bah ha miroku was the other signer wasnt he? I'm so excited! Now Inu has to find her and bring her back to live with HIM!!!!!! When i started readiing this chapter I was wondering 'When/how is she going to break up Kagome and stupid Hojo?!?!?!?' :P as for who helped her move out, it might have been Kouga. And Ayame just didn't tell where Kagome was when Hojo called.... @__@;;;;
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Reviewed By: Sassa [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2007 05:54 CDT
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To me, the heartbreaking element in the whole Inuyasha depature scene is that you HAVEN'T made it dramatic. You simply retell the facts; it hurts so much he has to flee. Plain truth often have deeper impact on me than big words. Now, as for this chapter... I thought the situation was locked but here you go doing a 180, shaking the pattsituation on the chessboard and carry on. It's simply genious! WHO is the man helping Kagome to leave? The same man that signed the contract or...? Confident man, that makes one think of Kouga. However, the one that really shouldn't be involved according to Inuyasha, that ought to be Sesshomaru. But in that case: why would he help? I feel so sorry for everyone involved, but most for Kagome. I'm thinking she's having a really hard time now, trying to cope with her idea of herself and her real self not summing up. As for Inuyasha, is says something about his character and emotions that he ignored the fact that Kagome gave back the ring and focused on her being gone, especially since the ring is such a strong symbol to him. Once again, the small states of facts weights heavier. If you had pointed that out in Inuyashas thoughts or something, the effect had been ruined. Marvellous!
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2007 23:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(sniff,sniff),You got me teary eye'd on this chapter and would you believe it was for Hojo(?). I laughed at the scene with Kagome doing the pros and cons with the spatula's. I've personally have used inanimate objects to stress a point, too bad they can't answer you back (would that be good if they did? hehe) Kagome, that poor girl has finally had her mini-breakdown. She eventually had to realize that she couldn't be superwoman to everyone and now that it's hit her,she's lost. How do you find yourself when for so long you tried to be something else for everyone else. Will Inu find her before Hojo? Is Kouga the one that helped her move? I really hope that she finds the answers that she's looking for, I think she deserves to find out what Kagome wants and not think about anyone else (well, except for inuyasha)and did she give Hojo the ring back? Fantastic chapter once again,read ya later.
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Title: localsamurai
Reviewed By: localsamurai [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2007 23:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That is so sad. I can't even imagine what it would be like for that to happen for the ninth time. My favorite teacher at school had her baby die when it was six months along in the womb. She was showing and everything, listened to the heartbeat too. It was right after our senior trip and right before graduation. I cried so hard when I found out. Back to Kagome, I can understand why women would believe that they are a failure when they fail to conceive and carry to term. I probably should give Hojo more credit than I do, but his obliviousness to the one he loves irks me to the core. But there is that biological difference that we have to forgive guys for not having. I''m glad they are finally broken up and now Inuyasha can move in. Is there any chance that hanyou sperm and embryos are more durable or resilient and have a better chance of survival and implantation? I love the scientific lingo, ie. LH or FSH, I know what all those letters mean and their implications. Thanks for making me feel smart. I can't wait until you update again. Right now I'm hanging on the edge of my seat blowing my nose. Bravo on an amazing chapter.
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Reviewed By: breesasha [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2007 23:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe Kagome ran away. Where did she go? At least she made the right decision, not marrying Hojo but she shouldn't have run away. Poor Kagome, her head is all twisted up. I don't feel bad for Hojo.
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Reviewed By: Togu On: April 25, 2007 14:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg! O.O please say no, Kagome!! Throw the ring at Hojo and go screw Inuyasha!! :D
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Reviewed By: star555555528 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2007 21:42 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG this is so totally awesome!!! I love the plot & everything!!! I can't wait to see what happens next please update soon!!!
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