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Reviewed By: @___@ On: May 10, 2007 05:15 CDT
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Aww. They're taking their first step into a serious relationship!!! KAWaiii!!! HOPE YOU UPDATE SOON!!
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Reviewed By: rainydays [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2007 03:15 CDT
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Omgosh! That was amazing. I am glad that Kagome and Inuyasha are finally together. That was a perfect first date. And.. I am glad Kagome has her own career. I like how you don't just focus on the relationships. It shows this is so much more than a romance. I think you've done an excellent job! Sorry I haven't reviewed in awhile... school has been insane! I can't wait to read more. Good Job!
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Reviewed By: InusGurl4 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2007 22:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, vibrating got old, and yes you're right, people can take advantage of that, so now i'm exploding. *BOOM!* There. I'll remain in a bajillion little gory pieces until you post again! :) Loved The Chap!
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Reviewed By: SSW On: May 09, 2007 11:55 CDT
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I just want to let you know that I love this story. its one of my two AU favorites on the IY guild right now. You space events our just perfectly. the story is not rushed. I love it!!
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Reviewed By: Inusbabe (nsi) On: May 09, 2007 09:46 CDT
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Ok another great chapter. There were a few more spelling errors than usual but I was so happy I didn't care about them! Somehow the formating also got messed up. Loved the chapter it was so sweet. Hmm Maguro butsu sounds great I wish I lived in a bigger town so I could find Sushi grade Tuna. I could eat a pound of the stuff!
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Reviewed By: violet blossom On: May 09, 2007 06:24 CDT
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oh! forget to mention that the whole carriage thing is sooo romantic.. hope all men are as thoughtful as Inu..hahaha
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Reviewed By: violet blossom On: May 09, 2007 06:18 CDT
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Oooooohhh... Finally they're together... And they were kissing too!!! I like the way Inu admit to Kag that he had wanted to do it since they first met.. He's sooo sweet.. Hope you write again soon.. I become addicted to this story.. I check MM.org everyday to see whether you have posted a new chapter.. PS : about the seconding, don't mention it.. You write a really great story.. This story deserves the seconding..
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Reviewed By: Togu On: May 09, 2007 06:01 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm a Kagome fan, So I like to pair Kagome up with ever hot guy there is ;D I know that Sess & Rin have a special relationship, but I see it as a platonic one. But I'm fine with SessRin. As long as they're not in the fic together 60% of the time :p I would never read a fic that focused on SessRin or that had large amount of SessRin interactions. Great chapter btw. And "huzzahh!!!" They kissed!! :D:D:D
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2007 02:22 CDT
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This was the best chapter yet, I couldn't stop smiling while reading. I laughed at Inuyasha's nervousness while he was trying to ask Kagome on the date, I think I would've felt fustrated too. The date was just perfect for them, it was pure genius to use a horse and carriage as transport. How romantic, Kagome just gotta give him a chance now. Bliss, that's what I felt reading them having their first kiss, yaaaay!!! But I cracked up on how as woman we can think of a hundred different things in a millisecond. Mmmmm, did Kagome admit to this being her first open-mouthed kiss because if that's true, "What the Hell,Hojo", no wonder Kagome didn't feel a spark, using tongue is just sooo much more intimate and nice, hehehe. Update soon, I'll be waiting waiting.
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Reviewed By: Tarzan14 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2007 01:18 CDT
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absolutely awesome chapter! well worth the wait. props for inuyasha having enough balls to ask kagome out, and props to kagome for having enough ovaries to get some ear fondling in. Such a great date too!
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Reviewed By: Nomina [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2007 23:41 CDT
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more ear fondling, please!
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Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2007 20:04 CDT
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What an awesome first date and kiss! So sweet! The carriage was an extremely nice touch along with the little hidden jewel of a restaurant. **Swoons** They will have to take things slows so neither of them screw things up! More communication on both parts should help. I look forward to the clearing of the air concerning the issues each have with the other.
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Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2007 18:18 CDT
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oh, i forgot to comment on the carriage ride. That was romantic, and a perfect choice for the first date. And im glad about the kiss. It wasnt too rushed and was the right amount of steamy for a first kiss. I liked how you explained that it was kagome's first open mouth kiss. That was a great detail. I need to go back to ripping out my carpet and feed the kids. good day.
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Title: Bravo!!
Reviewed By: sweetkijo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2007 18:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very well done!! I would disagree with the kiss not being fatastic...but you know...sometimes the first kiss gives you such nervouse butterflies that its the moments of silent reflection that you realize just how nice it was. Hmm, now that they have kinda hinted as to where they want things to go...I suppose they will now really have to sit down and clear the air. Oh, and that was very funny about the coach's balls. I almost fell out. Thanks for the update, and take care!
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Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2007 18:08 CDT
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mmm.. that was a delicious chapter. I think that was a superb date choice. And the food, *muah* magnificant. I am familiar with some ordinary japanese dishes like nigiri zushi and the chanko nabe. the others though. Im gonna have to look into those. Yay! I have the first entry into Roshully's Cook Book! I go grocery shopping next week, so thats when im going to try it. Let you know in the next review how it turns out. And im still interested in the lamb rolls, whenever you get the chance. No rush though. As for the story itself, i only found a few mistakes, but your punctuation is right on. *saavy= savvy* *scar= scarf* *war= wear* *You put this one *on* now.* Thats it, and most of those were taken from Kagome getting ready for her date. As i said, wonderful chapter and thank you for the receipes.
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