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Title: AWESOMENESS!
Reviewed By: Sunekai [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2007 15:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Inuluvher151**** On: June 22, 2007 01:22 CDT
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Hey i really liked these last two chapters. ha ha hickey well since the drama happened she never got to get made at him for it lol but ya keep up the good work and can't wait til u update again...those two r just too cute
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Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2007 23:16 CDT
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Funny, but I completely forgot about InuYasha's human night, until the line about his violet eyes. Makes sense that his "weakness" (I don't think it is) would be worse for him when it could directly have a negative impact on his career. Especially since he became a fertility specialist because of his mother. This chapter was a rollcoaster all around (pun intended). I could not imagine what had InuYasha so twisted up & saw all the progress they made fly out the window. But you pulled it back at the end! Well done!! Much luck with your new position! My last job change took over my life completely for 2 months, but it was worth it. I am sure you will do well, and you will be back with us when you can! :D
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Reviewed By: rainydays [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2007 18:46 CDT
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Fabulous chapter! :o) I loved the roller coaster ride of emotions. I think it gave a needed glimpse of Inuyasha's character... and I am glad you put in Inuyasha's human night. It really brought Kagome and Inuyasha closer together. I also liked that you introduced another plot line with the deceased patient. I think that you have done a wonderful job on this chapter.. it is definitely my favorite so far. I am glad that they were able to work out their problems. Adult life is fun eh? Good luck with learning everything :o) I hope that your job goes fantastic!
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Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2007 01:30 CDT
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I just wanted to take some time out and say what a fantastic story this is becomming. It's educational, entertaining, and very well written. I look forward to seeing what happens with this new twist, the allergic reaction and what it has to do with Inuyasha. Just a question, will Naraku be in this fic? I can't remember if he made an appearance yet, or what. Will you go into the lawsuit or just remark on some of it? Keep up the good work and enjoy your sabatical. I look forward to your next chapter, whenever you get time to put it out.
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Reviewed By: u ignorent fools [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 18:43 CDT
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Good chapter. I'm glad that you were able to let them get there feelings out even if it was just a little bit. Its still progress. As far as Hojo and Kagome. I think that they need to talk and get some things out of the way because from my understanding so far, is that they havn't spoken really since Kagome left. I think that she owes an explanation to the poor guy at the very least.
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Reviewed By: @__@ On: June 20, 2007 07:25 CDT
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Please don't scare me like that! I thought that with the fight they just had was going to take them both back to square one! Inu Yasha better not screw this up or else. HE IS SO DENSE. Keep up the great work and I hope you update sooon!
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2007 22:51 CDT
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That was wonderful, I was scared for a minute that they were going to have another set back but ~whew~ that didn't happen. Kudos again to Sango and Miroku for being mediators,they are true friends. So now Inuyasha has caught a case it's going to be intresting to see how it plays out with the whole "because he's a hanyou,he should've known". I know from working in the hospital and being a patient myself that no matter how many tests taken and info you have an allergic reaction can pop up out of nowhere. Glad to see that Kagome didn't just give up and blame herself, her characters developing nicely. Their relationship is on an okay start and they're finding out more about each other so when they're finally intimate it'll be phenomenal. Well, good luck at work and I'll read ya when update next. Happy Writing. P.S. Yeah, being an adult sucks sometimes ;)
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Reviewed By: InusGurl4 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2007 19:31 CDT
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Woohoo!! I liked that chapter. Can't wait for the next one. *can't remember if I'm supposed to blow up or vibrate....oh well*
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2007 18:08 CDT
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really good story... i like it... hope you update soon... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: axel720nsi On: June 19, 2007 18:03 CDT
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I think this is my favourite chapter so far. You put so much depth into your characters. It was long and it had pleanty of substance =p I was definately ready to slap InuYasha for being a jerk in his office, and at first I thought the harsh treatment wasn't justified, even after all the explaining. I guess that last scene turned a lot around though, and I'm glad he finally decided to talk XD The best part? "Sex," XD *slaps inu* I loved that. What a way to get right to the point! =p I love Sango and Miroku in this too, they aren't totally just the 'extras', they have some depth too. I like that you put a lot of effort into every aspect of this, well done. Good luck with the 'new' job~ Update as soon as you can. (I had to say it XD)
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2007 17:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very excellent chapter. I was almost late for work this morning because I wanted to read a little before I left and couldn't stop. I hope that the new job is a step up for you. Take all the time you need to get the next chapter up. I can tell you take great pride in your work and it wouldn't be the same if you rushed it just for the sake of those who are impatient.
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Reviewed By: violet blossom On: June 19, 2007 06:18 CDT
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ummm...I'm not sure whether I like this chapter or not..I mean, it's a sweet chapter with human inu that was more open and soft..And also the fluff! But I don't like Kagome in this chapter..I don't know, but she seemed somewhat whiny..I mean, while can understand her actions in this whole inu's ordeal but I can't find myself agree with her reactions..And it's like their relationship wouldn't have progressed at all without sango and miroku helping them..it became a pattern..they have communication problems, inu doesn't say a word, kag decides to step back, and sango interferes..when I read the chapter I was kinda 'ohh..not this thing again..' But afterall, it's still a nice chapter to read..And a long one, too! ;p Hope you're not offended by my review..I really really apologize if you find my words offensive.. And good luck with your job! Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2007 03:31 CDT
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that was good, so all this drama in the clinic was that lady the one that kept comming to him Kagura. And when will sesshy come back to kags restaraunt(idk how to spell that word). i think its sweet tha he let her know that she could have some kind of control, and to let her know that she wont be forced to do any thing that she does not want to do. that was very considereat of him.he must really luv kagome.Hey when will her friends get to see him, meet him or somthing. hold they already have woops sorry my bad. Well i'm not encouraging sexy but i see that ur pulling this story out longer than i expected i've never read over at least forty chapters to a story, but if its good i keep on reading. so yea thats a complment. So is inuyasha gonna tell her about his spring cravings, or will she find out by her self, but u may not tell me that since it leaves nothing to the imagination. juicy but discreet details i wont mind.i just wish he had gotten to see her in her shirt wit the va va va va voom. he probably would have roared with joy. did that make since besides ur story is a thinking subject, but is the issue solved between them wit the deceased client or is there more to her than i think, cuz to me it seemed like inuyasha got off the hook right there when he went off to that room and kagome left after to him in privacy of closed doors!!!!!!!!the drama is a little confussing to try and comprehend
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Reviewed By: Jessie Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2007 02:13 CDT
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Another wonderful chapter. When I get a chance, I'll check the recipe in LJ... But seriously, totally took me for a loop that last chappie. I found it quite... refreshing. Post soon!
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