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| "The Gods' Opinion" Reviews/Comments [ 376 ] | | Pages (26): [ « ‹ 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 › » ] | Title: yeah yeah, im too tired to sign in
Reviewed By: Autumn_The_Reviewer too lazy to sign in atm On: April 21, 2007 22:23 CDT
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good lord, im on my Vacation and i still want to read and respond to this story. *sigh* I dont know how i feel with Inuyasha going through with the injection of fertilized eggs. I wonder if the eggs will stick... blah, im not having eggs for breakfast after this lol. its a good chapter, you might want to take the d off of the word needle (its not needled) and the *knock out doctors* ,i cant even begin to spell that dreaded A word atm, usually stay with their patients until the anesthesia (sp?)starts to take effect, they also stay to monitor the drug intake. When i was pregnant with my daughter, i was hospitalized due to complications. One of the tests i had to undergo was the amniosintesis (sp? yet again)test, where they drugged me up and stuck a LONG ASSED needle into my stomach, past the uterus (sp) wall and into the amnio sac. The *knock out man* was with me the whole time. Dunno if its relevant, but im up way past my bedtime and this room im in, smells like paint. So good night and update when ever you get a chance/ I might not be able to review right away because i am on the road, but i will try. :)
| Title: oops
Reviewed By: Inusbabe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2007 11:29 CDT
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that review should had said "without drugs involved"
| Title: Chapter 14
Reviewed By: Inusbabe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2007 11:27 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Review of chapter - Fridays funny when I was pregnant all my dr appts were on Friday. Oh cute sweet dreams = white fuzzy doggie ears. I loved how Kagome got turned on and poor Inuyasha trying to ingore it. I am looking forward to her getting turned on with drugs involved and him being around. Hojo up and left her again!!! Did he even try to get them to see him later or did he not even think about her? What is going on with Kagura? I know we will find out soon. I don't know if I want those eggs to take or not... Reply to response of review - in reguards to staying in a relationship because it is comfortable been there and done that. About mating I thinking more about an actual dog. While growing up I saw our alpha male tied with all our females that I know dogs aren't "picky". But there are enough animals that they only have one mate either for life, the season, or as long as both are alpha. But the beautiful thing about writing is that the author is all powerful and any thing they say goes. Looking forward to your next chapter on this and "A Delayed Dawn"
| Reviewed By: Sassa [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2007 10:44 CDT
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Thank you for your enlightening personal answer to me, as well as for this new chapter! I really love how you allow us readers to see how well fitted Inuyasha and Kagome would be as a couple, yet neglects them the knowledge. That's qualified reader tesing right there, score 10 on the scale! I really liked how you sneaked in Kikyo's name again and Kagomes small reaction to it. Very discreet but yet it spoke volumes. Here they finally have quality alone time, and it will be spent watching a movie Kikyo (workrelated, possibly rival) recommended. As always, I'm impressed with the accurance of facts. My best friend is currently trying to get a baby herself, but she's not so good in english, so I translate your story for her chapter by chapter. I make sure to write out your name clear, of course. We both love it!
| Reviewed By: unistar On: April 21, 2007 03:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just a comment: the story is really good and different but developing kinda slow... hope something major will happen soon...
| Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2007 01:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
CONGRATS!!! 100 reviews,just awesome. Yeah, wow there was alot of medical jargon but hey, now when I watch those t.v med dramas ,I'll understand more of what the hell they're talking about. Ok, Hojo is an idiot, first he kinda acts suspiciously jealous when he finds Kagome and Inu having lunch. He makes a big deal about not being there for her and then just dissappears before she gets out of the room. What if something went wrong and she died ( I know a bit dramatic but possible)and plus he was told she would need a ride home. His priorities seriously need a revamping. Leaving like that was just callous and inconsiderate,period. Will we get more of a background on Kagura's and Inuyasha's past together? HeHeHe, you made Kagome have a wet dream about Inuyasha,(smiling with glee) he's not gonna get over that one anytime soon. But,yeah I would like to know if what he's feeling is just out of his personally enforced celibacy. Anxiously awaiting to see what's next. Happy writing.
| Title: localsamurai
Reviewed By: localsamurai [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2007 00:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hojo's job is really starting to get suspicious and it's starting to creep me out. Live samples or whatnot. Kinda creepy. I feel bad about how carelessly Miroku treated the egg extraction. I know it's his character but, it is a traumatizing experience. And for those who believe that life begins at conception the references to embryo and implantation was slightly callus. i understand not all have this view, but it I was in Kagome's position I would probably cry at their references to my hope and dream of a family. I love the originality of this story and how emotionally involved we readers become. You're doing and awesome job and I hope Kagome and Inuyasha get together in the near future. I don't like the thought of Kagome carrying Hojo's children. Update soon.
| Reviewed By: XxRuler_of_the_DarknessxX [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2007 21:13 CDT
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Love it, love it, LOVE IT!! Please update as soon as you can because I love this story.
| Reviewed By: gillster On: April 20, 2007 20:45 CDT
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Yo I'm loving the story! I just can't get enough of it! Update soon I think I'm going to get grounded because of my report card=[ And sorry that I flipped out twice,loving the drama=]
| Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2007 03:49 CDT
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i have to admit looking at gillster's comments i'm sort of on the same page but thats like another thought of the matter
| Title: Questioningly good!!!
Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2007 03:45 CDT
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Awsome, so inuyasha is going through some hormonial things. Ok and kagome is contimplating on is her love real for hojo, and that her fantisies about inuyasha need to be reality wit out guilt. But this story is hot, sorry that i havn't reviewed in a while my internet was disconnected for a while. Now he told her a little about himself and they seem simalar in ways of a lost dear one or ones, and their devotion in they work to honor the ones lost. Yea i can relate to them cuz my dad died and he loved to cook and he could just like a chef but he was a kind and modest dad, so i try my best in cooking to honor him since it was one of his favorite things to do. When i saw hime cook it was almost as if he was at his best just shining in his talent.So love the story, i can hardly wait to see what you got up your sleeve for future chapters. The mastermind behind all of this. Your story is the first that when i read it i am not able to tell what is the obvious to come in so many others, well excepts for one but other than that you rank #1.What I always say for the most part is to give credit to where it's due. Keep up the good work and hopefully i can be as good as you in my stories.Well thats all for now.Not many Q:s to ask but the one i want to ask is,is ne thing going o happen in the story or and will Kagome actually have hojo's baby or my mai man Inuyasha the sexy doc. P.S:I shall learn from the master to ever let the obvious show it gives away the character the emotion the ideal thought that depth of knowing so quickly losses interest in the soul purpose of the story, but in yours you have to find what your looking for or ask Q:s to know more but thats only hints to the big issue or idea,am I right or am i putting more meanning and thought in to it? Please answer my uestions as soon as possible if you will.I value the opinion, response, or thought. Much Luv Bre~Bre
| Reviewed By: violet blossom On: April 17, 2007 23:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Gah! How Kagome's mind works when she choose Hojo over Inuyasha is beyond my comprehension.. Inuyasha as a doctor? Definitely hot... I really, really like this fic..Hope you post again soon..I'm eager to know what will happen between Inu and Kag..
| Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2007 19:04 CDT
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Thanky, Thanky,Thanky, she finally admits to herself that she got the hots for the one person she should have the hots for because he is "HOT" (did I say hot enough,smile). Aah, finally we're getting somewhere,you gotta wonder when a girl spends time with a guy NOT thinking about or calling her fiance, you kinda gotta go- hmmmm? But I can't wait for the next chapter, I'm sooo addicted. Read ya later. P.S. Thanks for the Mama Higurashi intervention, a good mother always knows what's not being said.
| Title: Le Sigh...
Reviewed By: Sedona [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2007 23:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This one absolutly deserves a ten. Sometimes I wish I had half the talent you and some of the other amazing authors have. Everytime I try to write an AU it ends up as crap. But this,THIS, is amazing. You had me at, (instert first word of story). I swear. I'm done with the chapters so far...and I'm craving more. You do not disapoint. Keep up with the good work and let me have your babies. ~Sedona
| Reviewed By: gillster` On: April 16, 2007 17:56 CDT
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The story is pretty good so far, but KAGOME AND INUYASHA are still not together!
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