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Title: localsamurai
Reviewed By: localsamurai [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2007 16:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww. That was a sweet date. I wish more guys could be that thoughtful and still seem real and not made up to impress their dates. I love Inuyasha's character. I think you capture him perfectly. I now have an insane desire to cook something. Wonder why. -_- Update soon.
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Reviewed By: Sassa [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2007 15:35 CDT
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They kissed. They kissed. I try not to make too much of it, but after so many times of setbacks one simply wants to overlook all the remaining problems and simply rejoice, because they KISSED!However, I must say the ineract on the restaurant was trice as sweet still. The way Inuyasha blurs out random insults'n'stuff and the way both Kagome and "the old man" silently understands his way of affection... that was Inuyasha taking a huge step forward in the relationship. I KNOW there's so many hardships left and I know it's not just to paint the world pink and live with it, but just for now, may I stay in the joy this chapter brought me and forget the rest? I thank you kindly.
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: December Love 05 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2007 14:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And I am satisfied. For now. I was surprised how fast you got this up. I love to bake, so I'm up for the challenge of Pastry Chef. For some reason I think it would be easier than a regular chef, to me anyway. I would never be able to remember all the stuff that they do. But baking really is my thing. I can't wait for college. I don't know what one I want to go to. Maybe Culinary Institute of America. Well, hope you update soon! December Love 05
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Title: ^^b
Reviewed By: axel720 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 17:38 CDT
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Sweets ^^ Inu and Kagome are friends again. AND he's going to ask her out =)Finally XD Keep up the good work, I don't know how you manage to update so fast! Gaps? Hmm, gaps...I can't really think of any other than the Hojo and Kikyou thing, or the Kagura thing (btw, Kagome totally needs to realize Inu is very available and willing =p). Anyways, do your thang.
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Reviewed By: u ignorent fools [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 17:01 CDT
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NOOOOooooo, ugh!!! Not tomorrow,why always tomorrow???!!!!! *pouts* I enjoy how in dep th you get into your characters jobs. Not to many people really go into depth, and i'm glad that you do, because it really gives your readers a better sense of the charaters and how they think by the way they do things. I'm so excited! I want to see what happens with Inuyasha. Did Sango ever let Miroku move in with her?
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Title: Love it, like always
Reviewed By: December Love 05 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 14:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As always, you have terrific chapters. I really love this story. What did you go to college for? Culinary or Doctor? You know so much about both. I'm going to a Vocational School for Culinary Arts. I'm heading towards Pastry Chef when I go to college. I love baking and my boyfriend loves to cook. Ironic, ne? Well, I hope you update soon. I can't wait! December Love 05
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Reviewed By: Togu On: May 06, 2007 04:48 CDT
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aawww! come on, Inuyasha! Ask her out already! :D so you're a SessRin fan, huh? darn *pout*
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Reviewed By: violet blossom On: May 06, 2007 04:44 CDT
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Oh nooooo....You left it hanging there... Aaaarggghh... Please update soon..Gotta know what will happen next...And as always, it's a good chapter..Kinda short, but a good one..
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 01:55 CDT
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(Doing the happy dance, woo hoooo) Yay! Now we're getting somewhere. Go,Sess you may say you don't care about Inuyasha and that this is for business but we know the truth,wink wink;) Oh please knock some sense into those two, they've spent weeks together and hundreds of conversations and still they're confused of each others status, arrgggghh. But I am still as happy as a lion with a gazelle in his jaws (sorry,watching animal planet) I hope they continue to get closer because I'm waiting for that first kiss. Why is Sesshomaru looking at Rin as a challenge, she really hasn't had much dialect with him other than waitress to patron? Well, I'm going to happy dance my way to the fridge, can't wait for the next one, so please update a.s.a.p. It's Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious
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Reviewed By: adara205 On: May 06, 2007 01:03 CDT
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reading a story always makes up for the others im forced to read while i wait on your new chapters
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Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2007 23:02 CDT
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awesome chapter, as always. I kind of want to try those lamb rolls you were describing. Would you ever consider writing a few recipies (sp?) at the end of the story? Like in an endnote kind of thing? *grins cheerfully* But anyways, I like this chapter. I dont mind that it was kind of short, you got it out there, and that make me happy. And there were no noticible errors when i read it. Nothing that stuck out to me. So kudos on that. Maybe next chapter Inuyasha gets the courage to ask Kagome out? They could do something a little different from a normal date, like putt putt golf, or go-karting. Something to take their mind off of it being a real *date*. I dunno, thats my advice/questioning phase. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: InusGurl4 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2007 22:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!! I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!! *vibrates in anticipation*
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Reviewed By: Inusbabe [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2007 17:29 CDT
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So the days turned into weeks? How many about 3 or 4? I wonder how she is going to find out that Inuyasha doesn't have a girlfriend. Remember I want a human night too, you said you have one coming. This one was another great chapter, even if it was a little short but I think you ended in the right place. It feels like the last two chapters have been an interlude, and we are getting ready to start the second half of the story.
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Reviewed By: Inusbabe [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2007 17:29 CDT
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So the days turned into weeks? How many about 3 or 4? I wonder how she is going to find out that Inuyasha doesn't have a girlfriend. Remember I want a human night too, you said you have one coming. This one was another great chapter, even if it was a little short but I think you ended in the right place. It feels like the last two chapters have been an interlude, and we are getting ready to start the second half of the story.
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Reviewed By: Sassa [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2007 15:38 CDT
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I recognise that way of letting the weeks go without doing anything... that is typical behaviour in a locked situation like that. Those two needs to stop being so TENSE... How to fix it? Hmm...I wonder what has happened to the girlgang Kagome used to hang with? Have Sango kept in touch with them? Because I am fairly sure Inuyasha and Kagome won't be able to get back into true flirting mode now. They are too locked in their personal desires and misconceptions of reality. What we need here is some girl interference and a good look at Kouga's latest litter to place the idea of a halfdemon-spawn in Kagome's mind... Have I mentioned before I want to get her pregnant? That is of course due to my best friend's situation, but still. Oh, and I'm sorry I diddn't review last chapter. I was mentally under the ice (and still recovering), but I've red it trice like always!
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