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Reviewed By: MadMistress65 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2009 21:41 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooooh, a cliffy! I love Sess's attempt at jokes considering he has no sense of humor. What a hoot! I can't help but think Sess is going to play a major part in what goes down with Koga. Maybe I'm wrong. Guess I will just have to wait and see, huh? Heh. Awesome update. Can't wait for the next one.
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Title: OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:D
Reviewed By: Lilsweetpea011 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2009 15:06 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG>>>>OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This story is soooooooo awsome. I can't wait for the next chapater....oh and thanks for puting back together.....please write sooner than usual!!!!!!
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Title: wow!!!
Reviewed By: lostgirl1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2009 20:44 PST
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holy cow, so good!!!!!! i can't stand it. amazing and wonderful. keep up the amazing work!
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Reviewed By: melony922 On: January 19, 2009 19:44 PST
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wow another amazing chap! i can not wait to see what else you have planned and i can not wait to see how kags reacts to seeing koga for the first time!
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Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2009 17:47 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! this chapter had everything! like it was so amazing i couldn't believe it! wow! dinshu is scary! you really have a way of creating characters! thanks!
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Reviewed By: xyanblue On: January 19, 2009 16:39 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg this chappie was so intense. I'm so glad inuyasha got there in time please update soon
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2009 13:30 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT chapter. It was intense, and the action was terrific. I can't WAIT to see what happens next....especially since you seem to be ready to throw something else in! ^__^ Wonderful story
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Title: action baby
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2009 11:20 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this time around it was like a blockbuster thriller all packed into one chapter I think it took me like ten seconds to read even though it was a long chapter. I can't wait for next chapter "the plot thickens" nice tease at the end there.
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2009 10:20 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No Sessh didn't! LOL! I laughed sooo hard at his "I need a lover" comment. That was amazing! As was the "test-run" Dinshu did. Really well-written and exciting. I swear my heartbeat sped up reading it! I LOVED this chapter. Until next update! ~Amber
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Reviewed By: Niiicko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2009 08:51 PST
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Scary!! x_x
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Reviewed By: Tueske [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2009 23:55 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes!!! Best *@#! chapter ever! Whoa you had me going! *sigh* When Dinshu came to her door and pulled that little stunt that he pulled... I almost pissed myself! I just KNEW he was going to capture Kagome... I couldn't have gotten any farther from the truth! That little cut scene you through in there with InuYasha bonding with Sesshoumaru's pups. That was cute... and funny how Sesshoumaru got InuYasha back... paybacks a *beep*! ^_^ Than you put a GranTurismo in there... I don't even know what that is... I just play the game! *hee hee* This was truly an amazing chapter... I loved the slight comical relief that you through in there for the audience, to calm our poor little frayed nerves down. *sigh* InuYasha's commentary about how he'd be one lucky bastard if he doesn't end up in jail. ^_^ Classic! And as always the endearing part that was displayed between Kagome and InuYasha.... as if nothing else in the world really mattered to the other but the other! Very nice I hope to see an even better follow for this chapter very very soon!
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Reviewed By: Ai Kisugi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2009 23:10 PST
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Oh Gosh! Wonderful chapter. It is funny that what I really enjoyed in this chapter was the brotherly banter between Inuyasha and Sesshomaru. Honestly, Inuyasha really had it coming with all of those 'lover' comments that he kept on joking with Rin about in front of Sesshomaru. I can only hope that Sesshomaru gives Inuyasha back a little of his own medicine. I get the feeling that Inuyasha won't be so quick to make anymore lover jokes with Rin anymore. I also get the feeling that Sesshomaru was prompting Inuyasha only to ascertain whether or not Kagome was Inuyasha's mate. It's too bad that Inuyasha still doesn't know about it. So now Kagome's moving in with Inuyasha. Yeah! The confirmed bachelor is living with a women. Woooeee! I love that plot development. And how will Inuyasha keep her next to him all day? I'm guessing that he'll bring her into the office to take over Rin's duties. That way his office gets the lawyer help that they need and he can keep an eye on Kagome. And I bet Kagome is getting sick of being at home all day. Oh and you still have so many subplots to resolve. I'm guessing Inuyasha actually trounces Dinshu which leaves Koga to try to kidnap Kagome all by himself. And I'm betting Kikyo will show up when we least expect it. Darn! Congrats on your nominations. This story deserves them. Keep writing!
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Reviewed By: 1love1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2009 22:09 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH NO the plot is already thick im interested to see how the plot will thicken. hmm will kikyo come back? UPDATE SOON!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2009 21:32 PST
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OMG that was so intense...you are amazing that is all i have to say...I wasnt expecting Din to act so soon but now that I understand that he was planning it all makes sense...but i cant wait for the real drama and angst to begin so update soon
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2009 20:12 PST
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holy crap i kept having to swallow down my heart during this chapter DX Experiencing something like that would be TERRIFYING!! and I wouldn't have needed Inuyasha's insistence that I stay with him, I'd be like "YOU BOY I AM NEVER LEAVING YOUR SIDE EVAR!!!!!" xD gawd i need the next chapter
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