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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2009 13:30 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT chapter. It was intense, and the action was terrific. I can't WAIT to see what happens next....especially since you seem to be ready to throw something else in! ^__^ Wonderful story
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Title: action baby
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2009 11:20 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this time around it was like a blockbuster thriller all packed into one chapter I think it took me like ten seconds to read even though it was a long chapter. I can't wait for next chapter "the plot thickens" nice tease at the end there.
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2009 10:20 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No Sessh didn't! LOL! I laughed sooo hard at his "I need a lover" comment. That was amazing! As was the "test-run" Dinshu did. Really well-written and exciting. I swear my heartbeat sped up reading it! I LOVED this chapter. Until next update! ~Amber
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Reviewed By: Niiicko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2009 08:51 PST
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Scary!! x_x
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Reviewed By: Tueske [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2009 23:55 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes!!! Best *@#! chapter ever! Whoa you had me going! *sigh* When Dinshu came to her door and pulled that little stunt that he pulled... I almost pissed myself! I just KNEW he was going to capture Kagome... I couldn't have gotten any farther from the truth! That little cut scene you through in there with InuYasha bonding with Sesshoumaru's pups. That was cute... and funny how Sesshoumaru got InuYasha back... paybacks a *beep*! ^_^ Than you put a GranTurismo in there... I don't even know what that is... I just play the game! *hee hee* This was truly an amazing chapter... I loved the slight comical relief that you through in there for the audience, to calm our poor little frayed nerves down. *sigh* InuYasha's commentary about how he'd be one lucky bastard if he doesn't end up in jail. ^_^ Classic! And as always the endearing part that was displayed between Kagome and InuYasha.... as if nothing else in the world really mattered to the other but the other! Very nice I hope to see an even better follow for this chapter very very soon!
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Reviewed By: Ai Kisugi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2009 23:10 PST
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Oh Gosh! Wonderful chapter. It is funny that what I really enjoyed in this chapter was the brotherly banter between Inuyasha and Sesshomaru. Honestly, Inuyasha really had it coming with all of those 'lover' comments that he kept on joking with Rin about in front of Sesshomaru. I can only hope that Sesshomaru gives Inuyasha back a little of his own medicine. I get the feeling that Inuyasha won't be so quick to make anymore lover jokes with Rin anymore. I also get the feeling that Sesshomaru was prompting Inuyasha only to ascertain whether or not Kagome was Inuyasha's mate. It's too bad that Inuyasha still doesn't know about it. So now Kagome's moving in with Inuyasha. Yeah! The confirmed bachelor is living with a women. Woooeee! I love that plot development. And how will Inuyasha keep her next to him all day? I'm guessing that he'll bring her into the office to take over Rin's duties. That way his office gets the lawyer help that they need and he can keep an eye on Kagome. And I bet Kagome is getting sick of being at home all day. Oh and you still have so many subplots to resolve. I'm guessing Inuyasha actually trounces Dinshu which leaves Koga to try to kidnap Kagome all by himself. And I'm betting Kikyo will show up when we least expect it. Darn! Congrats on your nominations. This story deserves them. Keep writing!
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Reviewed By: 1love1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2009 22:09 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH NO the plot is already thick im interested to see how the plot will thicken. hmm will kikyo come back? UPDATE SOON!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2009 21:32 PST
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OMG that was so intense...you are amazing that is all i have to say...I wasnt expecting Din to act so soon but now that I understand that he was planning it all makes sense...but i cant wait for the real drama and angst to begin so update soon
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2009 20:12 PST
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holy crap i kept having to swallow down my heart during this chapter DX Experiencing something like that would be TERRIFYING!! and I wouldn't have needed Inuyasha's insistence that I stay with him, I'd be like "YOU BOY I AM NEVER LEAVING YOUR SIDE EVAR!!!!!" xD gawd i need the next chapter
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Reviewed By: pokiepal [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2009 19:27 PST
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I just finished reading everthing that you have written! all I can say is WOW!! great story! I am loving the twists and turns that you've got going on!! I REALLY can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work!!!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2009 21:19 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
'Proof Postives' is next?? got me excited XD that was interetsing... i thought Kagome would have denyed anything about Kouga... i had the same rection like Inuyasha lol hope you had a great birthday, xmas and NYE ^___^
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2009 14:11 PST
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Ugh sorry about the three replies, something was wrong with this system...
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2009 14:09 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like to say Happy belated Birthday. And sad that you've gotten coal for X-mas while I got what I wanted (sheepish grin). But besides that Im glad to see this update, I was getting REAL bored and started to miss this story very much. And its funny how Inuyasha thinks some women are like an airhead that thinks the badass boyfriends of theirs will turn good if they hung out a bit longer, because isn't that what had happened to them...? Sure he is very nice on the inside but he sure didn't show that to her when they first meet. Well Im happy that he told her what he knows and didn't keep it to himself, now I hope she puts two and two together with the whole attack thing that had happened with Sango. Well thanks for the update and hope there will be more in the future. Peace and Happy New Year to yah.
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2009 14:09 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like to say Happy belated Birthday. And sad that you've gotten coal for X-mas while I got what I wanted (sheepish grin). But besides that Im glad to see this update, I was getting REAL bored and started to miss this story very much. And its funny how Inuyasha thinks some women are like an airhead that thinks the badass boyfriends of theirs will turn good if they hung out a bit longer, because isn't that what had happened to them...? Sure he is very nice on the inside but he sure didn't show that to her when they first meet. Well Im happy that he told her what he knows and didn't keep it to himself, now I hope she puts two and two together with the whole attack thing that had happened with Sango. Well thanks for the update and hope there will be more in the future. Peace and Happy New Year to yah.
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2009 14:09 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like to say Happy belated Birthday. And sad that you've gotten coal for X-mas while I got what I wanted (sheepish grin). But besides that Im glad to see this update, I was getting REAL bored and started to miss this story very much. And its funny how Inuyasha thinks some women are like an airhead that thinks the badass boyfriends of theirs will turn good if they hung out a bit longer, because isn't that what had happened to them...? Sure he is very nice on the inside but he sure didn't show that to her when they first meet. Well Im happy that he told her what he knows and didn't keep it to himself, now I hope she puts two and two together with the whole attack thing that had happened with Sango. Well thanks for the update and hope there will be more in the future. Peace and Happy New Year to yah.
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