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Reviewed By: CookieCookie On: January 06, 2009 17:18 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay!! An update!! Praise god! I love your fic. it's original, creative, and oodles of fun to read! Oh and i have a question, does kagome know what Din looks like? because i think she would've recognized him in the elevator if she knew him. hahaha. =))
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Reviewed By: EarthSong [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2009 17:03 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alittle slower paced than the previous chapter, but that didn't take away the desire to continue reading. As always, this piece was well written and smooth. I really do love how this story is turning out! Keep'em coming, Earthsong
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2009 16:23 PST
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Its good that he told her...we need some more honest guys around...but I have to say that the story just keeps getting more interesting and makes me wonder how you are going to plan things out...so continue to update cause I cant wait to read more...XD
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Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2009 15:45 PST
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YEAH! NOT THIS TIIME KOUGA! thanks for the udpate!
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Reviewed By: xyanblue On: January 05, 2009 11:29 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg this was such a good chappie. please update soon
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Reviewed By: Niiicko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2009 08:43 PST
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ahh! I hope Inuyasha beats Kouga to a pulp. x_x ugh. And his bad cronies! Another great chapter! :D
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Reviewed By: Tueske [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2009 07:23 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kouga and Dinshu piss me off so f'n much it's ridiculous! >_
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Reviewed By: MadMistress65 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2009 02:14 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome update! Can't wait for the next.
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Title: Peeping wolf
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2009 01:13 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
someone else needs a beating and he's sitting on the roof being naughty. someone else needs to poligize too, I hope THAT doesn't take a beating to happen...Inuyasha Kickin butt I just can't get enough
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Reviewed By: Ai Kisugi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2009 00:12 PST
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Ahh, I love Kagome's ironic line, "it's not like Kouga is some big bad crime boss". Oh boy, and of course I still love Inuyasha's old comments many chapters back when he tells Kagome's date that he's with the Yakuza and that Kagome is the daughter of a crime boss. They're just skirting around the truth, aren't they? Well, as usual I loved the chapter. It would have been even better if there was some hot make-up sex. But I guess it shows that Inuaysha is in this for the long haul when he did what was right, rather than what he wanted. So maybe some hot make-up sex in the next chapter? Pretty please!!? Sorry, I can be a hentai sometimes... I must say that I am secretly glad you a didn't have Kagome become a drama queen when Inuyasha told her the truth. I am so tired of fan ficts that make her out to be an airhead drama queen. I'm glad to see that your 'lawyer' Kagome actually has her wits about her. And I am really glad that things are going right with Inu/Kags relationship for once. Yeah! Thanks and keep writing!
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Reviewed By: 1love1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2009 22:55 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i can't wait to see what happens when they finally see koga. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!
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Title: Another One!
Reviewed By: inuyoukai24 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2009 21:30 PST
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Another amazing chapter - I could definitely feel Kagome's logical side keeping her together throughout. Freaked out, but always thinking about the important questions: Why? Why? Why? I do wonder if Miroku will ever come around, but it seems Sango would forgive Kagome and not completely and totally blame her - after all, she did see Kouga, and she did get that badass vibe from him. And then Ashton...haha little Ashton...I will probably end up rereading the last few chapters, but without a doubt, it's coming along beautifully!
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Title: Awwwww....that was sweet. ^_^
Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2009 22:59 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I kind of like lovey dovey...that was a nice chapter. I still want to rip kogas manhood off.
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2008 22:32 PST
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omg i finally have caught up and i cant wait for the next chapter...so make your beta hurry or I gonna cry cause i need more please thanks so much
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Title: Thank you!!
Reviewed By: deipurple [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2008 04:22 PST
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I love how you wrote the chapter.. I love lovey dovey ... you do it quite well, with alot of angst. But I am curious as to the wolf demon... assuming it is not kouga but his buddy, was he watching all of this .. does Kagome recognize him? I am so glad they resolved this little issue before that stuff happens...but i guess there will be more angsty stuff when/if inu tells her about what he knows. ARGHH!!!! I really look forward to reading your next chapter. Thank you again for sharing.
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