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| "Heart's Landfill" Reviews/Comments [ 1155 ] | | Pages (77): [ « ‹ 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 50 51 52 53 54 55 56 57 58 59 60 61 62 › » ] | Reviewed By: Midoriko-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2008 07:10 PDT
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Gah. I really hope it won't be some silly misunderstanding next -- they were going so well! *headdesk* He's obviously sweet on her, and he seems to be ok with this, so she needs to pull her head out of her butt. And I hope HE doesn't stick it there too. X'D these two are impossible, and with that title up next? I'm a bit worried about the Foot-in-mouth disease that might run rampant between them :p I also have a bone to pick with the speaker on the phone. >v< Or you, because you made him call right there! *laughs* Well, my dear, you sure know how to wind your readers up.
| Reviewed By: inuaeryn On: August 13, 2008 05:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a fantastic fic. You've managed to build the scorching tension so well its practically burning my monitor! LOL. I found this a little while ago and have been taking every available chance to read it. Fantastic isn't even the word. Love your writing style and ability. Really looking forward to whats next!
| Reviewed By: Silent Reader On: August 13, 2008 01:48 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What is it with you and cliff hangers?! Were you a sadist in a past life? What happens next? What happens next? *sigh* I await your return on bated breath.
| Title: GRRRRRRROW
Reviewed By: OLDDOG333 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2008 00:47 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FIRST OFF LET ME SAY, I KNOW I'M LATE AND I USUALLY DON'T TOLERATE LATENESS BUT IT WAS UNAVOIDABLE THEREFORE "END OF DISCUSSION" NOW ON WITH THE REVUE!!!! AFTER READING CHAPTER 29 IF THAT WOLF SHIT BASTURD ENDS UP ANY THING LESS THAN A CASTRATED SEX TOY FOR A 450 POUND PHYSIOGRAPHIC KILLER IN A MAXIMUM SECURITY PRISON FOR THE CRIMINALLY INSANE, I WILL BE GREATLY DISPLEASED !!!! CHAPTER 30 YASHAS DEMON ALREADY KNOWS IT'S ,MATE AND HAS FEELS KAGS DEEPEST PAIN AND WANTS EASE HER SUFFERING ,AND PROTECT HER FROM ANYTHING THAT WILL HURT HER,,,, NOW YOU'V GOT TO GET HIM TO KNOW IT!!!! AND DON'T LEAVE KAGS LIKE THAT TO MUCH LONGER SO AFRAID OF THE PAIN TO TRY TO FEEL LOVE ,,,, THAT'S NO WAY FOR ANYONE TO FEEL OR LIVE !!!!! POOR PUPPY YOU DID NAME IT AFTER HIM NOW I'M SORRY I SUGGESTED IT lol..... I wonder what the evening will bring????? ONLY TIME AND MORE UPDATES WILL TELL!!!! Sorry but here comes the bad pun "WRITE ON" I just Can't seem to stop doing that..... . I AM OLDDOG333 KEEPER OF THE DEMON HOUNDSN^-^
| Reviewed By: Ro0tin4Kagome [nsi] On: August 12, 2008 20:05 PDT
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Oh YAY!! Finally some "almost" action. =) But yet ijust hope that she doesnt go all crazii and tries to avoid him now.ANd i kinda hope Ginta died so then maybe Kouga wont find her until they are solid or maybe Ginta will redeem him self..lol who knows. What i do know is that ilove this fic andit is still a constant point for my procrastination for my Psychology reports. =D Thx for that.
| Reviewed By: angleofthenight [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2008 20:01 PDT
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wow, i love this story and i am so glad you updated again so soon. i can not wait to see what else you have planned and i can not wait to see what happens when kouga finds her...please update soon!
| Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2008 19:33 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing chapter. LOL. Inuyasha was such a jealous butt when Kagome was going to name her dog after Ginta. I can feel lots of drama to come. I actually burnt my arm with the curling iron because I was so busy reading this chapter! Thanks for all your hard work. I know you're going through a hard time, but you'll pull through. I somehow did twice. Thanks again for all of the great work. This story definitely has potential!
| Reviewed By: 1love1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2008 19:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Things r startin 2 heat up please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: Ro0tin4kagome [nsi] On: August 11, 2008 00:11 PDT
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I have to say never in my life have i felt so disgusted and emotional when reading a fic. I wished i could jump in their and find a way to kick Kouga's ass. Because whatever Kikyou did to Inuyasha is like crumps compared to the shyt he did. GAHH!! im so aangry. Oh and another thing thanks to your wonderful story [ that i just reread! WHOO!] YOu help me procrastinate on my PSY class 40 reports due in the beginning of term. lol So thanks. =D
| Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2008 09:48 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry sweetheart for all the things that are happening to you! Really sorry, if you need to talk just send me an e-mail, ok?! ::huggggss:: Now, loved this chapter although is so... cruel. Yep, never liked Kouga... and that was the manga, now really want to fry him!!! Poor Kagome, good for her that Inuyasha is there although don't know how much is he going to tell her or how will she react if he does or if he doesn't when she finds out. LOL, you just love to put them in the worst scenarios, ne? But, somehow know that -at the end- things will be all right, right? :crickers: errr... right? LOL Great job sweetie, this chapter flowed wonderfully -as usual- but has this sort of desperation in it, maybe because how Inu and Ginta were feeling, that you did expressed it in this piece so vividly that was able to actually feel their despair. Excellent job!!! Thanks for the update!!! :D
| Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2008 09:48 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry sweetheart for all the things that are happening to you! Really sorry, if you need to talk just send me an e-mail, ok?! ::huggggss:: Now, loved this chapter although is so... cruel. Yep, never liked Kouga... and that was the manga, now really want to fry him!!! Poor Kagome, good for her that Inuyasha is there although don't know how much is he going to tell her or how will she react if he does or if he doesn't when she finds out. LOL, you just love to put them in the worst scenarios, ne? But, somehow know that -at the end- things will be all right, right? :crickers: errr... right? LOL Great job sweetie, this chapter flowed wonderfully -as usual- but has this sort of desperation in it, maybe because how Inu and Ginta were feeling, that you did expressed it in this piece so vividly that was able to actually feel their despair. Excellent job!!! Thanks for the update!!! :D
| Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2008 07:42 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Im sorry I didn't reply as quickly as you updated..... But now Im just happy that I read the two last chapters that are up.... Im sorry for your grandmother and know exactly how you must feel... I been through that so many times... And it still hurts today but not as much....I just hope you talk to some one about it than just keep it inside, in your mind... Of course Im not good at that, talking it out but I had my way... Well the story was just fantastic and you were right, I dislike Koga so much I just hope he suffers in this story... So keep it up and updated soon... Peace....
| Reviewed By: Midoriko-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2008 13:46 PDT
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Oh my, suspense and terror filled chapter there. Lovely installment, left me gripping my seat rather badly, and I'll say, I've never much liked Kouga, and the one in your fanfic has just descended to the bottom of the garbage pile. And *headdesk* Damnit, Inuyasha, you didn't hear it till the end! Damnit all, now he doesn't know what very real danger Kags is in... although I'm sure he figured it out. If one of THEM is here, then Kouga is sure to follow close behind... and I wonder if Inuyasha will finally get off his behind and tell Kagome frankly that he wishes to be the one she dates. It would keep her more protected in his mind, so the very real situation and the need to keep her safe might just over-rule his relationship-shy mentality. Somehow, it feels like them being united is really important from now on... even an important businessman and a rather good lawyer don't have much protection against a mafia boss. *shudders* this doesn't look good at all.
| Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2008 04:15 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i feel even more sorry for Kagome T_T and dont worry, ive lost lot of people this year.. a house fire and a car acciedent.. but if you needed some1 to talk, ill be right here :) *gives hugs*
| Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2008 03:12 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you Ginta for telling some. And yea for inuyasha and Kagome's blossoming relationship. That was very sad what kouga did to kagome. please don't let him touch.... he basicly had her raped. and if a man ever did that to me his dick will be shoved up his ass and will never be able to come out unless he had some surgery.How old is Souta again? Is inuyasha and Kagome soulmates like Souta and Nola?
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