| "Heart's Landfill" Reviews/Comments [ 1155 ] |
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2008 10:39 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh! I'm such an ass! I completely bypassed the A/N! My condolences. Sorry. I know it's hard losing someone you love and I know that if I were to ever lose my grandmother(who also raised me) I would be devastated. So would the rest of my family. I hope you and your family are dealing okay and wish you nothing but the best to come. Just remember that death is a natural part of life and it's never anyone's fault, especially not your own. And I'm sure the people you love would want you to be happy so the best thing you can to honor their memory is to love, laugh, and live each day to the fullest. I Hope you feel better and that this helped. :/ ~Amber
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Reviewed By: fudge On: August 08, 2008 09:50 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm going to take a wild guess and say that they are finally going to move on to the relationship part(crosses fingers). What can I say besides good as always! keep up the wonderful work!! update soon!
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Reviewed By: Caree On: August 08, 2008 08:47 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ginta finally did the right thing. good for him. i love this story everything moves at such a good pace . it's amazing really, please keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: xxsilentbeautyxx@hotmail.com On: August 08, 2008 07:02 PDT
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Well...I completely loved the chapter. That was simply horrendous what Kouga did to Kagome...but it actually fits perfect for the story. That would be about the worst thing that could happen to someone, but the only thing that could make her so broken...I cannot wait for the next chapter and how Inuyasha explains why he's there and why his eyes are red.
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Reviewed By: xxsilentbeautyxx@hotmail.com On: August 08, 2008 06:42 PDT
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I haven't even read your chapter yet...just your note at the top. I just wanted to say that I'm sorry you've had so much going on. I'm sorry that you have had to experience so many deaths in such a short time. I'm sorry that your Grandma died; I don't know what you're going through, but I do know that I can not imgaine losing my Grandpa, and yet, I know I will soon. Sometimes people don't suffer because He doesn't think they're worthy...sometimes people suffer to help others learn(its a horrible way, but its the only way some people learn). Sometimes, people just need to die. I know that sounds awful, and I'm not going to apoligize. Sometimes, they will be in more pain if He had let them live. I'm sure you realize that, but sometimes I know it's hard not to think its all your fault, all because of something you did...cause I feel that way alot. Also, it's not always the Almighty making you suffer...sometimes, its Lucifer (I don't know if you read the bible much, but I recommend the book of Job to learn about that). The Almighty will not give you more than you can handle...sometimes it may seem like you can't handle it...but you are. And to see that your still writing says alot. I will keep you in my prayers, that you see the good in what is happening; that you take it all in stride and glorify the Almighty even more through it all; and that you know that the Almighty doesn't want you to hurt, but sometimes, some things have to happen.
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader On: August 08, 2008 03:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, Well I've been reading your fic since I found it a couple months ago and it is frankly fantastic. I look forward to reading all the time. It's well written and damn exciting. Your cliff hangers are terrible, they make me check the site all too frequently hoping you've posted something. I choose to leave a review this time due to your annoucement about your grandmother. My dad suffered the exact same loss a 4 years ago and I have seen how painful it can be. He still mourns her. I just wanted to offer my condolances and encourage you to continue your work for, you have a talent (at least in my opinion as I'm a very picky reader. Thanks for the new chapter and I look forward to the next.
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Title: INCREDIBLE!!!
Reviewed By: lostgirl1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2008 23:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
absolutely amazing and fantastic. it broke my heart, and still i want more. you are a genius. don't leeave us waiting so long again! you rock.
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Reviewed By: 1love1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2008 22:46 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT WAS THE BEST CHAPTER !! PLEASE UPDATE SOON I WANT @ KNO WHAT HAPPENS NXT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!~
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Reviewed By: inugirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2008 22:20 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG...amazing. I truly love this story. You are an extremely gifted writer. I cant wait to see what happens next...esp when Inu finally meets Kouga! On another note, I am so sorry about your loss. I too just lost family, my grandfather. It terrible and heart wrenching, but it will get better. Let your loved ones help you thru this time. Thats what carried me =)
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2008 22:18 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WONDERFUL chapter. Kagome's history with Kouga was as bad as I feared it was. His cruelty knew no bounds. What a DESPICABLE, sick, twisted FREAK. A rapist and a coward. And Ginta, well-intentioned though he seems to be, is a coward as well. But he does neverthless deserve credit for stalling Kouga and making an attempt to find someone stronger than him to protect Kagome. I just hope it's enough. As for Inuyasha's strong reaction at the end.....wow. Talk about being driopped into the deep end. All it took was hearing the true story of Kagome's past to make Inuyasha drop all of his pretenses as unimportant. He knows that he has much stronger feelings for her than just frindship, as evidenced by his youkai side at then end. I just can't wiat to see if he acknowledges his feelings to Kagome, now that he's at least started to acknowledge them to himself. I will definitely be looking for the next one!
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Title: puppypal27
Reviewed By: puppypal27 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2008 22:04 PDT
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I wanted to write to you about you instead of your fic (although I love it). I just wanted to tell you that you will get through it. It's raw right now and it hurts and I'm sure that you are in the darkness now. But eventually if you dont give up you will find your way back out. It's ok to feel numb right now and to cry. Just don't let it consume you. I'm about to lose my aunt who has been a big part of my life to cancer. My grandparents and mother and father are already dead. My aunt was the last staple in my family of the "older" generation. I can only hope that it helps you to know that you are not alone in your pain. We all lose people we love dearly, but its how we come through the grief that matters. Try to remember the joy with your grandmother. Memories are powerful. Believe me. Visit her place of rest too. I find it very calming as silly as that may sound. I also advise you to talk out loud to her. It's not crazy and it helps a lot to get your feelings out in the open even if she can't talk back. I sincerely hope that your pain eases soon. With time you will be able to handle it better and you have your writing to help you too. Be well. -M
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Reviewed By: inuaeryn On: August 07, 2008 21:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Freaking awesome. Wow, you pulled no punches, and as much as I like Kouga's character, I really don't like him now! LOL. You really did a great job with the emotions. They bled through in almost a tactile way. Fantastic. Looking forward to more!
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Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2008 20:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...................... ...................... ...................... ...................... there are no words to explain how you wrote this chapter. i cried for inuyasha, when he was punching ginta and thinking about all those things they did to kagome. WOW. the best storyline that i've ever seen.
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2008 20:38 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I grinned so hard when InuYasha told Ginta to tell the other guys to come see how tight his ass is. THAT is how you carry out a beat down! Very New York of him...I like very much cuz, well, I'm a New Yorker, lol. Glad Ginta got his...now all we need are for Kouga and that other guy to get theirs a thousand fold. Loved the update! Till your next one ;) ~Amber
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: sunrisegoodbyes [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2008 19:17 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh i love your fic sooo much!! i'm always happy to see in my email that you added a new chapter!! I'm very sorry about what has happened to you recently. I can't say i know how you feel, because truly i don't. But i know loosing someone you love deeply is heart wrenching. The best of luck to you i really mean it.
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