| "Heart's Landfill" Reviews/Comments [ 1155 ] |
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2008 15:49 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Great chapter. I LOVE the interactions you write between Inuyasha and Kagome in this story. They are simply to die for. Inuyasha and Kagome are so alike....from opposite ends of the spectrum. But, suprisingly, it seems like Inuyasha (the hardass!) is falling and accepting it the fastest. And it's great. I absolutely love this story and can't wait to read more soon.
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Reviewed By: Ro0tin4Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2008 15:33 PDT
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OH wow. YOu were smotheringme with emotion. I loved it. I could feel the tension. And with the thought that Kouga or Kikyou can pop back at any moment. Im excited. Good luck with school. I will definitly be here waiting for an update to this blissful madness. haha.
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Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2008 14:02 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice, really nice madam! Both are so cynic that's infuriating,lol. They keep dancing around each other with their own backpack, barely touching and allowing their previous experiences to drive them. Even if you want to kick them both, there is a small part of your mind that is telling "You would do the same!" and, it's true. Your life experience is what guide you and they are having problems between recognizing what the other truly means, to drop their self-built defenses and to take a risk. This means a lot of work for both of them -and to you ;), afterwards you are writing it!lol. Annnnnd, if you add the other sub-plots that are rooming there... well, it's going to be quite a job. But a very exciting and interesting one! Can't wait f/the next chapter!! Yeah, I know you have a lot of things life and school, but I'm glad you could give us an update, thank you.
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2008 13:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Thanks for the long chapter. But... you now have my heart clenched in your hand. Amazing chapter, I need more. The love flowing from the pages have me wrapped around it. Glad you have your new laptop. sorry school is kicking your butt. But feel free to get away sometime and write more. (hint, hint) *smirk --- You are amazing!
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Reviewed By: Niiicko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2008 13:39 PDT
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Great chapter! ^^ I love the inuxKag moments. They are just too perfect for each other and don't know it. *squee* Can't wait for the next chapter! .. maybe Kagome just flings her arms around him and shows him what she wants. ^.^ muwahaha Keep up the great work! ^^
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Reviewed By: serenity rose [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2008 19:02 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story and u better update plz just jokeing
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Reviewed By: tora92 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2008 18:55 PST
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oh, and i love Ginta, just because he's against the evil that is Kouga, haha.. i cant wait to find out what'll happen if/when he finds Kagome, and i wonder when Kagome and Inuyasha will find out how alike they rele are when it comes to lost loves, but im not worried, because im with you.. when you rush things in a story, the story becomes cheesy, and cheesy is bad!! and just to make sure you know, your story is far from cheesy! lol, well i think ive said enough for one night! g'nite
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Reviewed By: tora92 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2008 18:50 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey, i love your fic!! sorry ive been rather silent while reading this, i simply wanted to catch up with what you had posted before i rele said anything!! lol, and all i rele have to say is, this fic is too good for words! i cant wait til your next update, and im glad you got a new laptop.. the battery on mine died months ago, completely 6 feet under, so when ever i get on mine it has to been plugged into an outlet. anywayz, i rele like your story, its one of the best written fanfics ive EVER read, and your an awesome writer!! keep up the awesomely awesome work!! XD
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Title: YAY
Reviewed By: inuyashalover913 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2008 19:33 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YayYayYayYay! Aha, I'm excited for the next chapter:)! This chapter was really great, though shortish kinda *cough**cough* lol but that's okay with me -im notorious for short chapters (even thought i dnt have stories up anymore) lol- as long as there actually is a chapter i'm good:) Keep up the great work! Happy writing.
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Reviewed By: tora92 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2008 23:27 PST
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i like the way you defiantly make up words... im glad im not the only one!! lol
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Title: I can't wait till chapter 26!!
Reviewed By: 0xpeach_bear [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2008 19:03 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You did a GREAT JOB! Whenever i read a chapter you keep me wanting to go on to the next chapter. Chapter 25 was really good and i can't wait to see if Kagome and InuYasha have a RELATIONSHIP!!
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Title: WOW WOW WOW
Reviewed By: OLDDOG333 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2008 23:38 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow Yasha can be such a jerk with Out even trying....lol But at least he Said he was sorry to Kagome rite Away and he knew he was wrong With Rin to,,,, not to mention she is in no condition to be upset like that !!!! He better apologize really quickly or I'm going to help SHESS kick his ass!!!! Opps I think I just did a self insertion In to your story.... Just shows how good It is it makes you want to get Involved ...hehehe I hope they do get Closer at her place,,,, they both could use a break.... As for Kouga I am sure You have something very painful and Humiliating in store for him!!!! BUT ONLY TIME AND MORE UPDATES WILL TELL!!!! Sorry but here comes the bad pun "WRITE ON" sorry I just Can't seem to stop doing that..... I AM OLDDOG333 KEEPER OF THE DEMON HOUNDS^-^
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Reviewed By: Ro0tin4Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2008 20:26 PST
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OH JEEZE!!! Hiding in the closet? Hide and Seek?? Sounds like my version of the game. =D Though I think you are crazy to think this is a short chapter and though considering your others... maybe . Though I loved it none the less. And I think I finally fell in love with Ginta. YOU GO GINTA!! lol Though Im not looking forwart to the meeting of Kagome and Kouga. And I wonder is Kikyou making an appearance? Hm.. oh well just gonna have to wait. And Congrats on getting a computer.. Now if only I could heal I could work and then maybe get a laptop darnit!! =D
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2008 19:00 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I'm glad that you updated and very glad that you made a longer chapter. Unfortinately for Ginta, Koga is not goin' to stop until... well, yeah you know. At least he wants to do the right and not go along with it. Anyways, hope you update and keep it up. Peace...
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2008 15:54 PST
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Killing me softly aren't you? I understand Kagome's reluctance to call first cause who wants rejection and guys are complicated in their simplicity. Just do me a favor puhweese before Kouga finds Kagome cause I know he will, give her and Inu something strong between them to fight for. Oh, I love the Sango character she is the girlfriend you always want to have in your life. Till next time, Happy Writing. P.S. Will we get some fluff in the next chapter?
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