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Reviewed By: SoClose137 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2007 14:48 EDT
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i really like your story. I normally dont like AU's because they usally just write about teenagers in high school with hormon inbalances. I really like this because its not like that and has a really good story line. i check like four times a day for updates. keep up he good work!
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2007 13:43 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice chapter. I can't believe that Inuyasha had just gone over to ask Kagome's mother for permission to offer her a position as an instructor! I nearly fell out of my chair! LOL. It's a good thing that Kagome's mom doesn't beat around the bush. She cut directly to the chase, which was exactly what Inuyasha needed. It was so sad how he still thinks so lowly of himself. Emotional cruelty can do more damage to someone than a beating ever could. But, Inuyasha certainly chose the right family and the right woman to help him heal. As for Miroku.....I laughed so much at some the responses he got to his questionnaire. You know that you are a complete slut when students don't give you any more respect than that when it involves legitimate work. We've all heard of the Nutty Professor, but the SLUTTY Professor?! LOL. It's funny because he did this to himself....but it's also a little bit sad that he has devalued himself that much. He's much more than just a man-whore....but he is going to have his work cut out for him proving that.
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Title: Great as always
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2007 13:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter 7 was very well done. I love how Kagome's mom just got right to the point and told Inuyasha to ask her daughter out. I love how you've made Kirara smart like she is in the anime/manga. You've made all the characters personalities just like really are with just a different story line. Wonderfully done. I'm just as eager for "sunday" to come as well. keep up the terrific work. Patiently waiting for the next chapter in this fantastic epic tale. --- Amy
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Reviewed By: jflorea [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2007 13:30 EDT
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Nice chapter. Mrs H jumping to the conclusion that Inu was going to ask permission to marry Kags was just great! LOL Nice to see Miroku's thoughtfulness coming out. Even tho he's always such a lech he is also serious about his religion and helping people. I wonder who Sango is going to open up to first, Kagome or Miroku? Can't wait to see if Inu can keep it together til Sunday :) Inu & Kag are always that last to admit their feelings for each other! Miroku seems to have quite a rep around the campus. Bet that's gonna bite him the but before all is said and done!
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2007 11:25 EDT
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I love your handle on Kagome's mom...and how well she always manages to read InuYasha's soul. As hentain as Miroku tends towards, yet he has that side that is responding to Sango, and in his friendshop witn InuYasha that shows his potential good nobleness of character. I like how his attraction to Sango is pulling the hentai layers back and letting the gold shine.
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Title: Nice!
Reviewed By: quirkyslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2007 23:10 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a lovely chapter. Like I said before, I hardly think it's an AU the way you do the characterizations so well. I like how Inuyasha and Kagome's relationship is progressing. They seem very comfortable with each other and you portray that nicely. The scene with Sango and Kirara really made me smile. Very warm-hearted, so great job with that. I look forward to your developments!
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Title: Awww
Reviewed By: quirkyslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2007 23:02 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was really cute. I liked how Miroku was thinking very seriously about what he could do to impress Sango. Kagome was sweet to Inuyasha. Great job with their interactions. Sometimes I hardly feel it's an AU!
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Reviewed By: wildthundakat [not signed in] On: August 16, 2007 15:25 EDT
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i really enjoyed the last two chapppies. i'm so happy to see Inua nd KAgs progessing. But what about Kikyou and Kouga? I know you have some kind of plans for them. I love the way you introduced Kirara. I've never seen her introduced in that way. I'm very curious as to whether or not you intend to bring Sesshoumarau into the picture. But if not, then I'm still content and happy with the way the story is going. i can't wait to see how things progress with the two soon-to-be couples
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Title: 2 lazy 2 login in
Reviewed By: shivonne aka ladytokyo On: August 13, 2007 15:32 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm ssssooooo sooorrry that last review wasn't for this fic and I got confuse and please don't pay any attention to it and sorry again and I love your fic's (sniffling) plz don't be mad!!!! Awe Kagome and inuyash is so cute. damn monk ruin the moment, but hey looks like he's growing up and whats this maybe in love, and Kiara back she'll help ease sangos loneness and pain. Mrs H is so cool, whos the demon door man? update plzzzzzzzzzz
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Title: 2 lazy 2 login in
Reviewed By: shivonne aka ladytokyo On: August 13, 2007 15:25 EDT
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Mirkou is a Dick! how sad for Sango and Inuayasha. that's no way to live and to go from on master idiot to another master jackass. that has to be hard on Inuyasha that's not love that control and inuyasha can do better hell I almost want him to go to hell with kikyou! they both don't deserve inuyasha how about sango hooks up with him? I thought that I review for the last chapter but I guess I didn't sorry about that mate. I really like the chase but know seeing how the perv really is keh! update plz
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Title: awesome
Reviewed By: fawn of the woods [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2007 22:40 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yo this is cool different from the other ones you've done but still in your unique wonderful style your beta, inufan625 has an AU too. you guys are awesome writers.
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2007 04:25 EDT
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Aw, such a nice chapter! Loved the Kagome/Inuyasha interaction in this one. Making her a card shark was fun! And Inu is finally really admitting his feelings for her to himself, at least, AND realizes she really cares for him, too. So sweet! I like the introduction of Kirara in Sango's life. Nice little story there. So, Inu feels like he has to get Kagome's mother's permission before he asks her to be an instructor? That seems a bit odd. We're talking about a job, not a courtship. But, Inu does have some stange ideas of propriety. LOL!! More Inu/Kag!
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Reviewed By: antyem13 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2007 02:44 EDT
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Pardon me while I go have a total fangirl moment. I LOVED the Inuyasha Kagome wake up part. Not only is it incredibly touching but both show a little more then they ever would while more coherent. (dam it I need to quit using big words, my spelling is bad enough that my spell check program cant tell what the hell I'm saying) *is pissed at computer* Anyways I really loved this chapter, thanks for getting it out so fast. The one and only strangeness, Emily.
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Reviewed By: AKA Pirate Queen On: August 10, 2007 16:53 EDT
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I'm not usually an AU fan but I think this is really, really well done. Of course, I love your other work as well -- and I am hoping we get some good citrus sometime soon! Keep up the great work!
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Title: Aww.
Reviewed By: MrsJoey Wheeler [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2007 14:42 EDT
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I liked that last chapter (Chap 6). That's really cute. You're stories always draw me in and I'm reading them all the time now. Update this one soon! It's getting SO good.
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