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Reviewed By: Yabou [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2007 15:09 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aw, I really loved this chapter. The scene with Kagome's birthday was very well done. I especially loved the bit about Sango and the men on the train. ;) Her perv-radar seems to be working as well as ever (even without Miroku in the immediate vicinity). I did like the insight into her character (no matter how slight it may have been). The development on her is slow, but I can really see it coming together. And, I just knew that's where that dress would end up! Lol. The lemon was very well done. I could see the love between the two characters even though their relationship was quickly developed. The years of longing made of for the lack of time. Kagome's mother was also very understanding. Lmao. I know *my mom* would never let it go that easy, but that's my traditional background, lol. I can only hope that (if I ever have children) I'll react like she does. Congratulations on another chapter successfully completed. I look forward to your next entry, and congratulations on the nominations!
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Reviewed By: ravenreux, NLI On: October 09, 2007 14:07 EDT
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Happy B-day Kagome, no kiddin'. Anyway, this chapter was beautifully written and sweet. Great stuff, thanx for sharin'! Reux.
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Reviewed By: AKA Pirate Queen [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2007 13:56 EDT
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Damn, that's what I wanted for *my* birthday! You go, Kags! PQ
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2007 11:49 EDT
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What can I say....sweet...Happy bd, Kagome!
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Title: Chap: One more day
Reviewed By: vikikibouki@hotmail.com On: October 02, 2007 20:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic! I can hardly wait for the next chapter! I loved the way Kagome managed to finally get her point of view across. Keep on Howlin', Sweetie Luv Ya JA NE
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Reviewed By: Caitriona [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2007 17:36 EDT
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Nice chapter. I like the insight you gave into wolf youkai psychology and why Kouga would train his students to be such bullies. Inu's blush when Kagome mentioned "feeling" something that night was also cute. Lastly, I am glad that at least one of Kagome's old friends was able to adapt to her new life and interests, and able to give the others the slip. I look forward to reading more chapters and hope that you look at Kouga's reaction to so many of his students - male and female - moving to Inu's dojo. Another interesting twist to this story would be for Kagome to deal with the emotional backlash of one of the youkai females when they were forced to 'submit.' Thanks for writing for us!
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: quirkyslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2007 10:27 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter! It's interesting to see how you developed Kagome's friendship with Sango in comparison to her old one. The characterizations seemed so fitting at the end. I'm glad to see you're working the spiritual power angle too. Looking forward to more!
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Reviewed By: Ravenreux [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2007 23:51 EDT
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I love how all the characters...even Kagome's friends...remain almost totally in character. Even allowing Kagome and Miroku to keep their spiritual powers enriches the story. I also liked that you retained the primitively violent aspect of demon behavior. A lot of people forget that they're a savage...species...I guess. Another wonderful update, thanx so much for sharin!
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Reviewed By: jflorea [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2007 23:04 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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OMG! 30 male ookami students! Kouga is gonna be pissed! LOL I loved the interaction between Kagome and her old friends. It's great that Sango was there to support her standing up for herself...she probably would've just went along with what the group wanted to do if she wasn't there. At least the two girls didn't seem upset or mad at Kagome. That dress may come in handy for Sunday *smirk* unless she already had something better. :) Interesting twist you introduced about ookami males fighting females...wondering how that will figure in later. The characters still seem to be very 'natural'. Inu and Kag aren't fighting and bickering as much as usual but they have 5 years of history together and they are both more mature.
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Reviewed By: dreamer789 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2007 21:54 EDT
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oh my god! absolutly love it. i cant wait to find out what inuyasha and kagome are going to do for kagomes birthday.
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Reviewed By: stargazer824 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2007 21:31 EDT
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Nothing brightens my day more than opening my email and seeing that you have updated your story! I am so glad Ayumi decided to go to dinner with Kagome and Sango, and I wonder how the following day is going to go with Inuyasha. This story is truly an enjoyment to read!
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Reviewed By: Yabou [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2007 15:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've really enjoyed reading this. I just started during the last chapter, and I thought I had reviewed... but... lol I have a very bad memory. I don't usually read Sango/Miroku based fanfictions, but you tend to jump around enough that we get to see all of the characters. And, I'm really intrigued by what *did* happen in Sango's past, and Miroku's. I also like your realistic view of the characters... you're not skewing them so much from the canon. It's great that they retain their personalities. I can't wait to see what you turn out next!
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2007 14:54 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. MAN, Kagome's friends are pushy...except for Ayumi. I'm glad that she had sense enough to care what KAGOME wanted to do on her birthday. However, she may yet be able to get some use out of the outfit they bought her. If Kagome wears that for Inuyasha on Sunday, he will have no doubt what she wants from him...if he doesn't pass out from shock first, LOL. I look forward to seeing what happens next.
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2007 13:32 EDT
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Ah, Eri and Yuka...It's good that Kagome has Sango to help be counterweight to their wildness, and be a friend anchor for Kagome and Ayume to hold on to! Somehow, I sense more troubles with ookami in the future....Can't imagine Kouga being happy about losing students to InuYasha....and the birthday draws ever closer....
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Title: Chapter 11
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2007 13:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another wonderful chapter. I especially liked the repor with Inuyasha and Kagome while she was sitting in his lap. Keep up the terrific work!
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