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| "Minoue" Reviews/Comments [ 521 ] | | Pages (35): [ « ‹ 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 › » ] | Title: arizonasiren
Reviewed By: arizonasiren [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2008 03:56 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just love this story. But, I love all your stories. Can't wait for next update.
| Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2008 19:16 EST
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Poor Sango, so uncertain yet of her new friends. More time is the key, she can't hold out forever. Glad to see Sess bringing IY into the family business, give him an outside purpose and importance. That'll go a long way, I bet, with his confidence, too. I love the way your slowly working them all through their problems/fears. Makes for a 'fuller' more engrossing read.
| Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2008 21:27 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. Poor Kohaku. I should have known that Naraku wouldn't leave him alone. Of all the people Naraku victimized, Kohaku may have gotten the worst of it....being forced to kill his own family. The only person screwed comparably is Kikyo. And it's clear in this story that things haven't changed that much. *sighs* I dread to see what else Naraku has planned for this poor boy. If what he did to Kohaku's former doctor is any indication, Kohaku is in for a lot of hell. What has changed, though, is Sesshoumaru. Actually showing concern for a human girl (other than Rin)? Asking his "half-breed" brother for help? Wow. But, then again, nearly being killed and being saved by someone you once would have considered inferior may change even a demon lord. And if he has more than one plot against him as seems to be the case, he is going to need loyal people around him. This story has so many twist. And I'm really enjoying them.
| Reviewed By: landofthekwt [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2008 19:53 EST
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Great wrapup of the gallery opening. Does your hangover remedy really work? Now we get to meet the real villains of this piece. The ones who have been haunting Sango's dreams. The psychiatrist even though he is under a death threat allows himself to use his position to put his patients in jeopardy.
| Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2008 18:19 EST
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WOW... Finally the evil'd "plot" is reveled. You know, when I was reading and "Naraku" appeared I was like, "darn, he just have to come up to corrupt everything", and when he named de Shikon, my first though was "The cursed jewel again". :scratches head: LOL, funny the way we can thing about certain characters. But, nevertheless, like I lot this chapter. The day after and evil finally showing his face. At least now we know a bit enough about how Kohaku changed, poor little thing! Everybody is there, well except Shippou -but I don't miss him. Excellent chapter, now I want to read more!! LOL I know, it's always the same. Really love the way the story is developing, it fascinates me the way you move layer after layer reveling a tiny bit each time and the way you switch the scenes, it's perfect. Nothing rush. Great job Cathy!! Great job!!! Thank you, thank you ::bows deeply:: f/this update!!!!
| Reviewed By: Rihannon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2008 08:50 EST
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Wow. Poor Sango! She had such a terrible experience. I don't remember if you have described the details in previous chapters, but this one was harsh. No wonder why she is so hurt and has so much trouble trusting people. She doesn't remember her brother, does she? She knows everything, if I recall correctly, but if she can't remember his face at the moment of the attack, there's still a long way to go. Anyway, it's been a lot of progress; she is getting more confident and maybe is starting to be capable to deal with her trauma. I like so much the development of the characters. Well written, as usual.
| Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2008 08:49 EST
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Very brave man, to stand up to Sess. Brave but foolish. Very nice IY/K scene, left me with a smile. Miroku is getting in deep, but is handling it nicely, I think. He'll need that strength and resolve to help Sango later on. And poor Sango, she's got a ways to go b/f she's free of the hold the past has on her. It's good to see her supported by such good friends.
| Reviewed By: pewter_wings On: February 11, 2008 00:13 EST
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I have just realized that Miroku does not seem to have his wind tunnel. Am I correct that he carries his burdens inside only? You have Kagome's and Miroku's characters so spot on. Both have shown themselves to be so selfless so often.
| Reviewed By: landofthekwt [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2008 22:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent chapter. The issue of the translator is actually reveals a far more serious threat to Sesshoumaru than a botched translation. Sango's nightmares seem to reveal a far more serious threat to her than merely a threat to peace of mind. Loved Kagome's willingness to help Inuyasha through his time of the month and Mirokus' willingness to help Sango through problems no matter what they are.
| Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2008 13:42 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really interesting. Sango's healing is taking another step, maybe she'll be able to talk about her dream and will open a bit more to let them finally in. Miroku realizing his feelings, and now he must face his and Sango's insecurities. I really like how are you working the "tempo" in this story and the "switching" scenes effect, in your other stories you did this but not as in this one. Here they are like "quicker" adding more action "movement". Although it's not "action" per se, it's like it rolls on a different pace. I like it, and how little by little Miroku and Sango are gaining their space. Beautiful way you are working this two together to make them the centre of the story, how you are leading us and our attention to their story. Really wonderful chapter, you surprised me, wasn't expecting a new update till next week! Like -a lot- the way you're dealing with the translator and curator, at least by now, it's about jelous and greed, not a great evil lurking somewhere. Oh... yes, something is going to happen, but maybe more related to Sango and so, will bring both brothers and the rest of the gang too. Really great chapter! Interesting and wonderful with mystery and intrigue... and love and romance, and angst... A fantastic combination! Great job!!! Thank you, thank you for the update... a wonderful gift for a lazy Sunday!!
| Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2008 12:35 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another good chapter. It looks like Sango is getting strong enough to face her past....as hard as that's going to be for her. At least she'll have her friends with her; she's going to need them when she remembers that it was her brother who killed their father and tried to kill her. Awful can't even begin to describe it. As for the translator....what a piece of trash. Sessh really better watch his back, though. Jealousy can cause all sorts of problems. This translator and curator are probably part of a larger problem. I look forward to reading more soon.
| Reviewed By: TAJE [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2008 17:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am loving your story. I love the way you are infusing the relationships or everyone. I especially love the relationship of Kirara and Sango. I know that there is a dark situation coming up for her dealing with her brother. And Miroku is going to have a serious challenge with Sango. I can't wait for the next chapter! Peace!
| Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2008 22:41 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. It was definitely funny with Kagome and Sango getting plastered and Kagome flashing everyone when Sango decided to leave initially, lol. And a bit spicy with the little quickie Inuyasha and Kagome shared. But, my favorite part of this chapter was the....friendship. This is really the first time Sango fully let her guard down in front of her new friends. True, she fought it really hard (trying to run off). But, when she decided to stay she crossed a milestone. Up to then, she kept herself a bit detatched from them, mostly because she was hiding her scar and her partial amnesia. But, when she realized that they already knew the secrets she's been so afraid of and DIDN'T CARE, it freed her to be herself. I'm so glad that you're taking so much time to develop these characters and their relationships. The best stories always do this, and you are definitely doing it well.
| Reviewed By: kschultea [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2008 19:49 EST
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Woohoo update! And another wonderful chapter at that! I absolutely love this story...one of my top favorites. Can't wait for the next chapter!
| Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2008 18:59 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful chapter!!! Love their interaction and that they were able to clear up -a bit- how Sango got her scar. She is starting to realize that she has friends to count on. Nothing is going to be easy, but it's the first step to begin the healing phase. Wonderful the way you mixed angst, sadness, a bit of comedy and love in this chapter. Really an excellent chapter! Thank you so much for the update and for sharing it with us!!!
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