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Reviewed By: psyco_chick32 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2009 16:31 EST
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*snickers* Kagura and Sesshomaru literally being lifted off the bed and crashing to the ground is such a great visual; I wish I had mad art skills to do a fanart of it! Hehehehe and Kagura's prepared while Sesshomaru's confused... such a nice touch. I tell ya, men just don't do their research! Score on a nice place to go and even getting the tab picked up!! Can't argue that one... I need to get myself a rich half-brother. And OMG Cliffhanger ending! Poor Miroku!!
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Reviewed By: Milareppa [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2009 13:55 EST
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Considering the fact this was a Miroku/Sango-oriented chapter, it was weird that the two things that leapt out at me were not related to that couple. The first was the emphasis Kagome placed on "wedding", a suggestion that it's seen as the fake procedure it's intended to be... and yet, in a chapter with a title like this, I can't help wondering if, emotionally, it ends up as real as Inuyasha and Kagome's (or Miroku's and Sango's should they tie the knot) - not that I can imagine Sesshoumaru registering the marriage to make it legal on a human level (because I can't), I'm simply thinking on an emotional level, based on a previous chapter when Kagome learned that youkai matings are arbitrary - they last for as long as the youkai partners can be bothered to let it, it's usually not deep enough for a lifetime, even if that can happen. I blame the chapter title for making me think things like this. The second thing that leapt out at me (really the first thing) is the chapter title itself... which, by the end of the chapter, had me wondering whether it might not be aimed more at Bankotsu and Kikyou than at the much more obvious Miroku and Sango. Bankotsu does seem to be increasingly concerned about Kikyou... and without an ulterior motive, it seems, which makes it seem like he's concerned for her sake, rather than anything else. The pair certainly can't afford to fall in love right now, especially with Naraku breathing down their necks but no-one ever accused love of being convenient. :) I am, however, now going to have to listen to my old Whitesnake album. That chapter title is a troublemaker. :)
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Reviewed By: landofthekwt [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2009 22:40 EST
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I enjoyed the afterglow(?) of Miroku/Sango. They enjoyed it but now they have more questions than answers about their relationship.
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Reviewed By: psyco_chick32 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2009 21:08 EST
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Excellent chapter. I got a chuckle out of InuYasha mentioning to Miroku that he didn't use protection... and Miroku's reaction!! Sango was great, too: "We're worse than the guys!" Sango's fears are very well-justified, it seems like a very natural "after the first time" night with the gossip and the giggling and the plans for the future.
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Reviewed By: kmoaton [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2009 20:56 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As always a great chapter. I love how the friendships shine through the romance. I'm so curious to see what Naraku has in store and I think it's wonderful and redeeming that Bank is so worried about Kikyou. Until next post.
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Reviewed By: kmoaton [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2009 20:56 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As always a great chapter. I love how the friendships shine through the romance. I'm so curious to see what Naraku has in store and I think it's wonderful and redeeming that Bank is so worried about Kikyou. Until next post.
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2009 19:09 EST
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Wahhhh...so good once again...when the girls were talking it made me clush too...aww man I want a miroku...gotta find one though which is pretty hard...keep it up and update soon...cant wait for the wedding XD
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Reviewed By: landofthekwt [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2009 01:17 EST
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Very nice lemon. I am glad that Miroku told her she was special. Sesshoumaru and Kagura seem to show up whenever someone is trying to have sex.
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2009 20:34 EST
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wow...its been a while but it is still as great as ever...I am glad that Miroku and Sango are finally a couple...they deserve it...I just cant wait till the wedding gets here with all the drama and angst that comes with it...good luck and update soon
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Reviewed By: Milareppa [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2009 16:39 EST
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Is it me or does Sesshoumaru seem to have a knack for turning up when couples are having sex? Alright, so he didn't directly walk right in on them (for once), but he still wound up under the same roof. I'm starting to think he's a bit of a hound on the quiet! And yes, the bad pun was intended. :) I'm glad there was a "normal" reason for how the reporter found Sango, rather than some mystical super-plot by Naraku. It makes the world seem that little bit more real - just because Naraku's the really big problem in life right now, doesn't mean that other people in your life doesn't throw other up other problems along the way.
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Reviewed By: kmoaton [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2009 15:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad that Miroku and Sango finally had a chance to consumate their relationship. You made it seem beautiful and really intense for the first time. Everyone's reaction, (esp. Inuyasha's. LOL!)was funny and Kagome's lack of demon senses provided some humor. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2009 01:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEA!!!!!!!!!!!!!! great chapter!!!!! I thought that it could be a school connection!!!! I wonder how long Sango will continue to live in her building... hehehe...
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Reviewed By: psyco_chick32 (not signed in, whoops!) On: February 06, 2009 00:08 EST
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Absolutely awesome chapter! I admit, I was surprised they got together so quickly, but I think it fit really well - it was really a good time for them. One thing I really love about this fic is how well you've captured Sango. Her insecurities with how Miroku sees her after are very realistic. *giggles* InuYasha's reaction to the situation (as well as Kagome's, Kagura's and Sesshomaru's) were all pretty priceless. *shakes head* Sango's gotta be beating on some classmates if they're selling information about her! Keep up the fantastic work!!
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Reviewed By: Brandospands [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2009 21:40 EST
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wow interesting how did that reporter find her??? thats is very interesting I just hope they dont know where her home is :( something bad could happen. Well keep up the great work! Cant wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Brandospands [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2009 21:40 EST
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wow interesting how did that reporter find her??? thats is very interesting I just hope they dont know where her home is :( something bad could happen. Well keep up the great work! Cant wait for the next chapter!
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