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| "Minoue" Reviews/Comments [ 521 ] | | Pages (35): [ « ‹ 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 › » ] | Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2008 16:15 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I'm glad that Inuyasha and Kagome dodged the baby bullet that they weren't quite ready for. But, that whole situation revealed a lot about Inuyasha's insecurities. He truly is afraid that someone will try to take Kagome away from him; that was emphatically proven when he instinctively tried to get her pregnant to keep her with him. It was so desperate and sad. And, even though Sesshoumaru told them that she wasn't pregnant, Kagome probably should still move up her wedding date. Inuyasha seems to really need that committment and security from her, even if he hasn't said it out loud. In this case, his actions have spoken much louder than his words. on a lighter note, Sesshoumaru, to be such a good businessman, is sorely lacking in TACT. From the way he just busted into his brother's house without warning to the way that he denied his true relationship with Kagura, Sessh was batting a thousand when it came to NOT being smooth, lol. But that probably won't be too much of a problem after a while. Kagura will make him sick of the couch eventually, lol. Good update, and I look forward to reading the next one.
| Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2008 13:24 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this introduction of the band of seven in and the way that you eliminated the first one. Also I liked the handling of the mating mark, I am not always fond of the idea of biting to mark your mate. The discussion on how Kagome accepts Inuyasha so much that her aura has claimed him runs true to the original and is well done. The interaction with Inuyasha and Sesshomaru is interesting, they seem to at least like one another. I know earlier you brought that out but it seems to be coming out more as the story progresses. Miroku being awkward explaining to Sango why he stopped and her response was great character development. And Sango's telling him about the rumors that he didn't know about was great. I am eagerly awaiting the next update.
| Reviewed By: airen0920 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2008 00:58 EDT
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Nice Lemons... My favorite part was the kissing scene between Sango and Miroku. 'i can wait a LittLe Longer' ooh, Looks Like things are Looking up for the both of them. *sQueaL* So romantic! Mmmm... Kagura and Sesshoumaru? Not so bad, in fact it's a nice pairing... is there going to be a Lemon about the two of them? Can't wait wait for the next chappie! Oh, and congratuLations by the way!
| Reviewed By: airen0920 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2008 06:06 EDT
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i just can't stay away... When's the next chappie? i reaLLy, reaLLy, reaLLy want to know! By the way, have you written other AU's?
| Reviewed By: hemlockglade On: June 25, 2008 19:31 EDT
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!!! Miroku makes his move! The line sounds corny, but I just know the poor sap actually means it (since if he was planning to dazzle her with a line, I know he could have done better than that!). Now I'm wondering if the next chapter opens with a wandering hand and a subsequent SLAP! And two thumbs up for more Inu-demon (who seems to be a bit of a hentai - but hey, animal lust, right?). Loved how Sesshomaru knew he was riling up Inuyasha's demon side, but seemed amused if anything. I will now re-lurk, but eagerly await the next installment!
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Reviewed By: airen0920 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2008 03:23 EDT
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i got so excited after reading your stories! i forgot to Leave a review after every chapter! And i'm gonna make it up now! WhiLe i DiD expect Kikyou and Naraku to end up together, i never expected that BOTH Sesshoumaru and Kagura saw Inu/Kag's raunchy sex scene! i'd die of embarrassment if i ever step into Kagome's shoes right now! The sex scenes from the past two chapters are very exciting! i reaLLy Like the rush feeLing! i can't wait to read about Sango's reaction from the kiss Miroku gave her. i reaLLy don't think it's earLy, in fact i'd be okay if they have a sex scene in the next chapter! Anyway, thanks for writing beautifuL stories and goodLuck again!
| Title: hi
Reviewed By: airen0920 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2008 03:23 EDT
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wah! FinaLLy! After deciding not to open my internet accounts for about a month and a haLf! At Last! i was abLe to read new chapters of my favorite story by my fave author! Thank you so much for updating! i reaLLy Loved aLL of the story! i'm so excited for the next chapter! Again, update soon! Godspeed and i hope aLL those nominated creations of yours wouLd win!
| Reviewed By: Ro0tin4Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2008 02:17 EDT
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haha you just had to use that line. Not as beautiful as you didntyou. And poor Kagome.. well her soon to be -in laws. Just saw it all. lol. Though i would like to know why he transformed.. got me wonderingnow.
| Reviewed By: Ro0tin4Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2008 02:16 EDT
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haha you just had to use that line. Not as beautiful as you didntyou. And poor Kagome.. well her soon to be -in laws. Just saw it all. lol. Though i would like to know why he transformed.. got me wonderingnow.
| Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2008 18:01 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to admit to extreme curiosity as to what information Sesshomaru had to impart that was so important that Inuyasha and Kagome had to be interrupted at such a personal time. Demon Inuyasha's reaction to the audience was funny, he was making sure everyone knew without a doubt that Kagome is his mate and he would fight for her. The switch to Miroku and Sango was good too. It was a nice development of their relationship. I am looking forward to what happens next.
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Reviewed By: Darknessdawns [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2008 09:32 EDT
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Yay, Miroku kissed Sango.Okay so I couldn't wait to read more and had to chedk on what you had here. I am estatic to find that you are still working on this. I can't wait until you add more. While I 'm waiting for more of this story I may just check out some of your other works on this site. Do you have any suggestions on any other authors by the way. I am currently into Inu/Kag and Sess/Kag fictions. I have even discovered a doujinshi called 'Raindrops' by Youkai Yume on devientArt. If you have any suggestions please let me know. ~Darknessdawns Darknessdawns13@yahoo.com
| Reviewed By: Gin Blossom On: June 21, 2008 23:59 EDT
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That was so mean!!!!! Now post the next chapter, please! Every single section left us hanging!
| Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2008 22:41 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. But, boy, did Kagome ever get a crash course in what it truly means to be mated to a demon....or a hanyou. I was blushing FOR her in this chapter, lol. There is something a bit sexy about Yasha's caveman behavior, though, embarrassment aside. It must be nice to be wanted that much. But, nevertheless, I'm sure that Kagome would have preferred that to be A LOT more private. Hopefully, Inuyasha won't be quite this bad when Kagome finally does mate with him officially. He still seems to be waiting for the other shoe to drop, poor guy. And Miroku and Sango's kiss was so sweet. I'm glad that they are starting to move forward. I can't wait to see what happens next.
| Reviewed By: pewterwings On: June 21, 2008 22:39 EDT
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Wow! I did not expect Jankotsu to show up. Nice touch. Will you be explaining what set InuYasha off? And of course, I can't wait to see how Sango reacts to the kiss. Will she let herself get close?
| Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2008 21:38 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW You brought the band of seven! May I say... I don't like them! But I'm intrigued on what are you planning. Certainly you portrait them in a very scary way, I know... they are. But in your story, well, it's like more real... and that is scary. Now, I'm worried about Grandpa... Well nice scene between I/K... poor them... Sess had to appear... LOL Indeed you know how to break the mood, ne? And Sango and Miroku!! Finally a kiss! That Kirara :D she is a matchmaker!! LOL We'll see how things between these two will work, I imagine that -as normal relationships- it will have its ups and downs. Furthermore, was just a kiss... meaning a lot, but everything is too new for both of them and they still have to build their relationship and, break with their own insecurities and fears. So, yeah, a long way to go. But, really, a nice setting for this kiss... sort of innocent, and romantic... Well done. Thank you so much Cathy, this was a great -short :)- chapter, but I know you have a lot of things in RL going on, so thank you so much for having a bit of time to give us this wonderful chapter for an amazing story. Thank you so much :bows deeply: and thank you for sharing with us!!! :huggles:
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