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Reviewed By: hemlockglade On: January 25, 2008 11:45 EST
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Poor Miroku, knocking out the drunk guy - all I could think was ..... "Where is the man in black? Fezzik, jog his memory." "Sorry, Inigo. I didn't mean to jog him so hard." Still enjoying the story & looking forward to the next update!
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Reviewed By: Rihannon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2008 00:44 EST
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I was waiting this chapter with such a big expectation. I could not wait to know how Sango would get out of all that mess. Oh! She is such a nice girl; I hope everything works out for her (both in your story and the manga!). I really enjoyed imagining InuYasha speaking Chinese. So cute! Well, nice writing. I drank it up, without breathing. Just as usual.
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Title: Minuoe
Reviewed By: landofthekwt [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2008 01:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have always enjoyed your style of writing. There is something about this style that makes it impossible to stop reading. You simply have to know what is going to happen to the characters. I loved the way Inuyasha intervened in the Chinese translation of Sesshoumaru's gallery to save what could have been a terrible situation. The way that you drew the characters one wanted to see them succeed. You felt for Sango when all the progress to date is set back because of scar on her back and how it affected her fragile psyche. You cheered Miroku's efforts to find Sango and admired the way that Kagome supported her friend. It is amazing how you can turn something as boring as a gallary talk into exciting fanfiction. Way to go
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Reviewed By: Xagzan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2008 21:49 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, since this is my first review so late in the game, it looks like most of what I would say has been said. But anyway, I think it's great that you put actual Japanese culture into your stories. I know it helps me learn more about it, and it's actually a learning that's fun. As for the latest chapter, very nice that you took the original concept of Sango being self-conscious about her scar and transitioned it perfectly into modern times, being out with Miroku.
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Reviewed By: kschultea [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2008 19:35 EST
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Once again, an amazing chapter! I love this story and look forward to every update! I really love what you've done with the characters, and how you're spending plenty of time developing them and their relationships. Keep it up, and update soon, please!
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2008 21:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful! Such angst. I love how Miroku picked he up. Very galant of him. Keep up the wonderful work! Thanks for update even though you were out of town. You rock!
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Reviewed By: ravenreux, NLI On: January 21, 2008 20:04 EST
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Wow...so much has happened since I last read this fic. I must I missed an update b/c I was totally lost when I read the newest chapter. After going back and catching myself up, I was so upset for Sango. First for having the worst luck with that major asshole and then for being afraid of losing her friend just b/c of some misfortune. I'm glad she realized how much she was able to trust Kagome and can't wait to see what happens when she trusts Miroku like that. And Kagome being the voice of reason...she is definitely wise beyond her few years. I sometimes wonder how Inuyasha could have made it this far without her...haha. Another beautifully written chapter...thanks for sharing!!~Reux
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Reviewed By: Pluto ^_^ On: January 21, 2008 10:44 EST
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This is an amazing story. I just wanted to say that I respect the fact that you update regularly and don't leave us all hanging. I really couldn't find a better story on this site even if I tried. Please continue to write. I'm secretly hoping for some more lemony action with Inu Kag in the next few chappies :) Anyway. I can't wait for the next update :)
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Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2008 04:51 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhhh. Miroku to the rescue!!! It's so easy to see him as the Knight in Shinning Armour!!! It suits him perfectly!! Poor Sango, she was so shine and beautiful at the beginning. Maybe now that she showed Kagome her back and scar will be able to talk about that with her. Wonderful Kagome here, been a true friend -what would you expect from her!. Great Inuyasha, showing who he really is and putting that guy in his place. Now, we must find out why the translator did what he did. Who's paying him to damage Sesshomaru. Of course, our cold king is going to find out... merciless. Great chapter Cathy!!! Was shorter? LOL Don't know, maybe I want to read more so... just wanted more! Must go to the office but wanted to live a little review!. Great job beautiful! Keep going and thank you so much not only for this wonderful chapter but for the entire story!!! It's a great piece you have here and you are doing an amazing job!!! :hug: Mage
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2008 23:32 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another good chapter. I'm just glad that Sango is okay....and that she may finally be opening herself up to being friends with Miroku and the others. I loved Kagome's reaction when Sango told her what they guy did "What a frickin idiot..". That was funny. And, boy is her real personality starting to show. Not that the sweetness and light isn't her, too; it is. But so is the fiery, fiesty side of her. So, it's a lot of fun seeing her come out of her shell. As for Inuyasha and the translator.....he did that brilliantly. That's the problem with bigots; most of them are irrevocably STUPID. Their lack of mental capacity just doesn't allow them to see rational truth; the fact that Inuyasha may be the one who was smart enough to bust him never even occurred to that moron. And that's what made it so sweet. Yes, it would have been nice if Inuyasha had beat the heck of the guy, but, sadly, that would have done more harm than good. Inuyasha's intelligence and charm undoing the translator's damage was more of a punishment than Inuyasha's fists would have been. And besides, we already know that Inuyasha could have pummeled that guy in his sleep....and Inuyasha knows that, too. He didn't have to prove it. Good one. And I look forward to reading more soon.
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Reviewed By: MrsJoey Wheeler [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2008 23:01 EST
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That was an awesome chapter! The blossoming Miroku/Sango romance is what I've personally been waiting for!!!!! It's my absolute favorite pairing of all time! I love this story! Keep writing!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2008 22:33 EST
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Kagome is indeed a wonderful friend. I think, b/t them all, Sango doesn't stand a chance! Nice to see them work together for her, this can only help her perceptions of them, and of herself (I hope).
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Reviewed By: TAJE [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2008 21:21 EST
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Oh why? Poor Sango! How himiliating! I'm loving this story. Love Sango and Miroku pairing. You have done a wonderful job on this story. Strong enough to keep my attention! Congrats on your nomination is worth it! Peace!
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Reviewed By: Pewter_Wings On: January 14, 2008 11:40 EST
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Thank you so very much for acknowledging the meaning behind Miroku's name. I think you are the first fanfiction writer I have seen do that. This alone made me want to read more of your wonderful story.
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Reviewed By: youkaineko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2008 05:20 EST
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*blink blink* wow, an author who actually knows a thing or two about Japanese culture. I'm not used to that... Anyway you are absolutely right that hand holding traditionally was considered unseemly. That's changing as so many of the young people there are being more and more influenced by American culture. So I understand why you say they wouldn't, *smirk* yet I did notice in this newest chapter they held hands often. As to the Sesshy/Kag confrontation... I didn't mean a fight, nor did I expect him to subdue her to prove he was alpha or anything. Merely that since she was in essence a new addition to the family he would want to figure out just where she stood rank wise. My understanding of it that canines have a very extensive hierarchy system, not just alpha and everyone else, but rather everyone sits on a different rung of the ladder with only a few being true peers (same rung). But the idea that it took place "off-screen" works well enough I suppose. All of that stuff aside, about the newest chapter... poor Sango! No doubt Miroku is going to get an eyeful of her scar. I hope she doesn't freak too bad when he does.
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