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| "Minoue" Reviews/Comments [ 521 ] | | Pages (35): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] | Reviewed By: Milareppa [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2009 17:52 EST
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Ooops, looks like Miroku's past is coming back to haunt him. Hopefully he won't have to wrestle with a giant catfish-youkai in order to prove to Sango how genuine his feelings now are for her. :) It's great to see that Jii-chan got it right when put to the test. He can come through in a stressful moment - but I did laugh at the opening paragraph, and the thought of Sesshoumaru waxing lyrical about true love. "What a sap..." - it was as funny as that moment in the anime, when Jakotsu noticed Sesshoumaru was distracted from battle due to concern over Rin and said "well, aren't you just the kindest thing around". On a more ominous note, the timing for Miroku and Sango's little problem couldn't be worse (both from his professional point of view - grading papers, two thwarted young ladies, and the only witnesses being far from impartial - and also from the wedding's point of view). I notice that Kagome didn't manage to tell Miroku the news about Kikyou's visit to the shrine. Looks like the week leading up to the wedding is going to be stressful in more ways than one.
| Reviewed By: Kagome_Chan_19 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2009 16:57 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooh, this is getting so exciting... everything is starting to fall into place when THIS happens? Perfect way to twist the story and keep us readers out of the know! Love it, keep up the great work! Looking forward to the next chapter!!
| Reviewed By: landofthekwt [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2009 00:26 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent chapter. Naraku has clue that he has been baited. Kikyou was sort of brazen giving her real name. A setback for Mirkou/Sango. Hopefully, they can overcome this misunderstanding.
| Reviewed By: psyco_chick32 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2009 20:16 EST
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*cringes* Poor Sango... it's just one thing after another for her, isn't it, especially when it's going so well? I continue to get a kick of Sesshomaru masquerading as a human... especially with the whole "so sappy he must be a human" comment Naraku made this chapter. Keep up the fantastic work and congrats on your FA wins!
| Reviewed By: Milareppa [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2008 22:15 EST
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Amusing chapter! Not from any comic comments, but just from the setting itself - only Sesshoumaru could come up with the most unromantic reason for getting married (and find a women willing to go along with it). He's certainly good at downplaying emotional attachments (since I'm sure his heart's completely in this, even if he's still got issues admitting it). My reaction to the plan was the same as Inuyasha's - so I'm wondering if there'll be any fallout in the youkai world from two youkai tying the knot in a human manner. I can't help wondering if Naraku will cotton on to the fact this is a trap - everyone he's interested in gathered near the jewel, Sesshoumaru's guards absent... and right on the back of his spies finding evidence that Kagura may be alive. Sounds too good to be true, and Naraku's a smart man. Still, it's also very in keeping with the manga, where characters often realised they were walking into traps but still went anyway. It's not whether a character realises there's a trap that's important - it's what they do about it... and I'm very interested in seeing what Naraku's reaction and decision will be. I'm sure he'll have something up his sleeve the gang haven't planned for. On a strictly comedic note, I can't help thinking that when the danger's passed, and if this has a happy ending for people, that Inuyasha will have a lifetime's worth of teasing material for use against his brother - Sesshoumaru's just made his personal life *very* complicated thanks to his interest in bringing down Naraku. I'm also intrigued by the thought that Kagura's parents might have a brief appearance... it'll be interesting to see what their attitudes towards their elder daughter really are (and if it's as poor as we're being led to believe, what they'd think of her being the Daiyoukai's love interest, of all people). Which leads to another thought... I wonder what Sesshoumaru's mother will make of this turn of events? Yep, if Inuyasha and Kagome ever want revenge for Sesshoumaru's habit of arriving at embarrassing moments unannounced, they'll definitely have options. :)
| Reviewed By: psyco_chick32 (not signed in, whoops) On: December 24, 2008 20:10 EST
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And, well... The Plot Thickens! It's really interesting to see how they're trying to beat Naraku at his own little "snaring" game. Naraku's gotta learn himself some people skills if he wants to keep his "hired" help! Good luck in the FA voting!
| Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2008 19:00 EST
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OMG it feels like forever since i read it but it is such a good timing for a present to read...also best wishes on the contest i am positive u are going to win cause it is that good...i hope this wedding thing turns out well...can only hope XD cant wait for the next update though XD
| Reviewed By: landofthekwt [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2008 18:14 EST
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It looks like we are heading for the cliff. Naraku is preparing Kikyou and Bankotsu to go to the shrine while Sesshoumaru sets up his own wedding at the shrine as bait. Stay tuned.
| Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2008 12:19 EST
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This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by authors/artist, Inuyashaloverr and KnittingKnots, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedfics.html (Fiction) http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedart.html (Fanart) Check them out to see what you were nominated for! Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ Inuyashaloverr & KnittingKnots Owners/Administrators of the Feudal Association ***Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works.
| Reviewed By: TAJE [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2008 20:08 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First I congratulate you on your awards. You deserve it! This story is going so well with me. I know I haven't been reviewing much due to RLI. But I do apologize for that. I'm still enjoying the characters, and just your talents. Until next time, Peace!
| Reviewed By: Milareppa [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2008 14:06 EST
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Another interesting insight into Kikyou. It's nice to see how she's beginning to second-guess not just recent events, but just about her whole life. It seems she doesn't know her own self very well, if she's questioning why she even reacts in such a callous fashion to certain things - but at least the very fact she's wondering why she reacts that way shows that she's consciously aware that it's not a nice way to be. Awareness is only half the battle though, so it'll be interesting to see if - once she's more aware of herself and the situation she's in - whether she's actually got the guts to confront the person she is and do something about it. It's also nice to see Bankotsu strategising - he was a thinker in the manga, and while there may be less high-fantasy battle-sequences in a modern story, being able to use him in a political manner works just as well... the only weapon against Naraku he's got right now, is his brains and how to control the information he feeds Naraku - enough to stay alive and useful. I also like the fact you're continuing to have Sesshoumaru ignore trifling little things such as human-designed barriers and boundaries. I can't help thinking it won't be as much as a problem as before though, given that Inuyasha now knows that Sesshoumaru is no threat to his relationship with Kagome (which seemed to be the big problem last time)... although that doesn't resolve the very normal embarrassment factor of being interrupted like that. It's going to be interesting to what conclusions Bankotsu and Kikyou (and Naraku) reach about Kagura's strangely human appearance and the Director's connection to both her and Inuyasha. It'll be equally interesting to see what Sesshoumaru's conclusions about Bankotsu and Kikyou end up being. It's a nice way to end the chapter! :)
| Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2008 01:27 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter!!!!
| Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2008 16:20 EST
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i love this story, can we have another chapter for xmas, one for new years, one for each day of hanaka, one for any my birthday (jan 13), and as many more times as you can manage.
| Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2008 16:09 EST
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oh boy i cant wait for how pissed inuyasha is gonna act at that little intrusion...funny funny...thanks for the update..its a great thing to read tos tart out my day XD so update soon cause its getting suspensful and i cant hold myself back from reading it keep it up XP
| Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2008 14:24 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another good chapter. I have a bad feeling that Kikyou is getting ready to pay a HUGE price.....because, even though she suspects, she STILL doesn't get how dangerous Naraku really is. And truthfully, after her actions this time, I don't even sympathize with her at all. How could one person be that self-absorbed and still be willing to share air with everybody else. She is a BITCH, pure and simple, though there is certainly nothing "pure" about her, LOL. And Sesshoumaru REALLY needs to learn how to knock. He already knows the full extent of Inuyasha and Kagome's bond....so he can't use that exceuse again. I'm beginning to think that Sessh is a closet voyeur in this story, LOL. I can't wait to see how Inuyasha reacts to Sessh's intruding yet again on an intimate moment between him and Kagome.
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