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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2007 21:45 EDT
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I really, really like how the characters are developing. I especially like how that InuYasha has some reasonable maturity, while managing to keep his angst. You've done a nice job of bringing the characters in, keeping them pretty true to themselves, but with very different life experiences than in the canon universe. This was good to read. I look forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: la623 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2007 01:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this! Damned Miroku and his perverted ways...lol...can't wait to read more!
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Title: I LOVE it!
Reviewed By: Yukiinu On: June 03, 2007 01:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your writing is as great as ever! Now I have another story to obsess over! Yay!! I love how you put the characters in a whole new enviroment but still kept their personalitys the same. I can see Inuyasha being a martial arts instructor at a dojo, and the way you wrote Sangos history, it fits well in the present time. Oh, and Miroku being a college professor with a lecherous streak (and I mean a very big streak!)was pure genius! I'll be looking forward to the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: wildthundakat [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2007 16:25 EDT
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like the others, i enjoy where this one is headed. i can't wait to hear what else u have in store for ur characters. and i can't wait to see how sango will take to miroku's antics
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Reviewed By: rhmarie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2007 02:45 EDT
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I love your new story. Can't wait for the next chapters. Very intriguing how you started it and I can't wait to see where it is headed. Rhonda
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Reviewed By: Silvermisttaleweaver [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2007 18:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well written and easily capturing my interest, as always. I'm a lousy reveiw writer, can't do justice. I've been following your work for over a year now, and this doesn't in any way disapoint
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Reviewed By: AmberEyez! On: May 27, 2007 18:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooo Been waiting for this.. more more more.... So far I really like both the backstory and where this is leading.
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2007 16:04 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good chapter. There aren't that many good, longer Sango/Miroku fics in my opinion, so it's good to finally find one that seems so promising. The plot sounds great, and I can't wait to see where you take this fic next.
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2007 15:39 EDT
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Nice chapter. Interesting twist that Miroku bested Sango, right off. I like it. Wonder how Sango will take to him and his, um, er, 'habits'? Can't wait for more! Hope your vacation's going great, thanks for taking the time to post for us!
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Reviewed By: wildthundakat [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2007 13:21 EDT
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nice begininh. i can't help but wonder if Naraku is the onw scheming behind Kohaku's incident
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Reviewed By: Fyrloche [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2007 09:48 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Promising start. So, is this going to be a Sango/Miroku centric story or are you going to throw in someone else to pair Sango with? Sounds like you have been reading Paricia Cromwell. I take it that Sango is going to become a profiler with a particular specialty in cult related activities? Anyway, I like the start and look forward to other chapters in the future. Later, Fyrloche.
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Title: Amazing!
Reviewed By: Pinkit [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 17:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
For the first chapter, this seems like a very complex and interesting story you have brainstorming, i can see why the plot bunny wouldn't leave you alone, I do not know much about writting, and i am jsut starting off with my first fic, but if you do write more, it is going to turn into the snowball effect soon, promises to be a very interesting story, i am adding this AU to my favorites Cathy, thanks again for the awesome writting you share with us!
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Reviewed By: gen50inlj On: May 20, 2007 10:51 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i liked it. you've made a very interesting, if slightly sad beginning... but then i like the way you write. having been reviewing much, but that's because i've been reading at work (am at home now)
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 04:15 EDT
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Wow. Poor Sango. Very intense and moving. I can't wait to find out how/why/who is behind this, and how she will overcome it. You have her personality down perfectly. Strong yet still feminine and slightly vulnerable inside. You have me hooked!
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Reviewed By: Inu Hanyou Nikkie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2007 23:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a quick note...... YAYYYYYYY!!!! It's posted!! It's posted!! Races around very happily!! Thank you so very much! I will be leaving a more definite review for you once I get some sleep! I'm sooo very thrilled to see it!!
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