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Title: A 10, as always!
Reviewed By: jflorea [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2007 14:24 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Quite a self-revelation for Miroku! It will be fun to see him struggle to actually attain his desire to be worthy of Sango. I'm sure Inuyasha and Kagome's budding relationship will be an inspiration to him *smirk*. Looks like Kirara had a guardian angel (or demon!) of sorts. :) Can't wait for the next chapter! *wimper* *puppy eyes* ^@@^
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Reviewed By: Come Hither [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2007 11:23 EDT
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I was kinda lured by the title. Well, that and SplendentGoddess recommended your work, so I was curious. Usually don't dig AU's, but I really enjoyed reading this so far. Stangely enough, I really like what you've done with Miroku's character. Very realistic for him to be more of an active letch than just talk for a modern setting. But, he's still endearing in a weird way and I don't hate him yet.
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Reviewed By: alexus [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2007 11:19 EDT
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Looking forward to the next chapter and many more.
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Reviewed By: Inu_inu_luvluv [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2007 09:21 EDT
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woah! one the best stories for awhile! update!!!
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Title: last chapter
Reviewed By: gen50 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2007 08:40 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like this intro to kirara, good to see that sango wont be alone, and that if their (with miroku) relationship develops, it wont be just about loneliness because she isnt lonely any more. nice to hear miroku's regrets. but then i hope his conquests knew itwas mainly about sex ... and that he broke no hearts (i dont think so, anyway) and yes, i thought miroku is a good friend of inu. nice way to remove inu's doubts. i hope sess makes a cameo (i like sess also)
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Reviewed By: Fyrloche [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2007 00:37 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't care that I've said it everytime I've reviewed. This story is great. I think I see what you are planning. With Kagome as an instructor, Inuyasha gets around his rule against instructors and students dating. Slick trick chick. I look forward to the next chapter. Later.
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2007 22:35 EDT
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Love it love it love it love it love it!
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Reviewed By: Ravenreux [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2007 22:09 EDT
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Despite how much of an unsavory character he can be, Miroku scored some points for his sneakiness. I thought it was quite clever. And Inuyasha passing out on Miroku's little monologue is just classic. I loved it. Oh, and course, you can't have a story about Sango w/o Kirara. I really enjoyed this chapter and can't wait for more! Thanx for sharin'!
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Title: Amazing as always
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2007 21:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Another terrific chapter. Darn Miroku and his timing. You'd think he'd know better by now. Everything about the chapter was wonderful. It is progressing at a nice pace. But I really want I/K to get together soon. I hope they have their first date soon. I love that Kirara is now in the story. Waiting at the edge of my seat for next chapter.... *please update soon*
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2007 21:09 EDT
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Another wonderful chapter! Love the IY/K interaction. So sweet to see them progressing. Looks good, looks good. Miroku, about time he began some self introspection. (Is that what I'm trying to say? Oh well.) Will be interesting to see how he develops. He has lots of potential, so no worries. Kirara! WooHoo! Can't have Sango w/o Kirara, just ain't right. Love the way this is playing out!
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2007 20:04 EDT
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Kagome seems oh so innocent for 20...even for a shrine family (maybe that's cause my own family is pretty rowdy during the adolescent period.) But I like Miroku's sneaky matchmaking...But he still has the timing of a ......(insert derogory term here). But he does seem rather smitten with the lovely Sango....
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2007 19:42 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another GREAT chapter. I really like how you worked Kirara into the story. That was a very good way to do it. And I can't tell you how much I enjoyed the progress with Inuyasha and Kagome. That was too adorable, especially when Kagome kissed him and rubbed his ear. It's so sweet seeing Inuyasha learn to trust again. I can't wait to see what else you do with the Inu/Kag part of the plot. I am spoiled rotten on that part; it's GREAT. As for Miro, his timing leaves MUCH to be desired. I like him too, but his stragulation doesn't sound too bad right now, LOL. Maybe his timing will improve when he finally makes some pregress with Sango. I definitely look forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2007 07:15 EDT
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Nice chappy. I love the way you tossed in the part about the Shinto religion versus Buddhism, -- I don't see many fics where people even mention the fact that Kagome was raised on a Shinto shrine, while Miroku is a Buddhist monk. I've always thought that was rather amusing myself. (That's why I placed the taijiya village in the Kumano Mountains in "Black Widow Miko.") And you explained the differences in them so succinctly -- I really applaud you for that! So, now Kagome knows Inu's secret about his "night of weakness." And Miroku's thoughts about "cutting down" on his frequent sex life were interesting. Of the two of them, HE is the one who's really a dog. LOL!! It's really interesting that he's SUCH a "player," while Inu's so virginal. (I like my Inu that way! He should always be perfectly chaste until he gets together with Kagome. It's only fair. Of course, that's why it takes the two of them so long to hook up. LOL!) Looking forward to more!
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Reviewed By: Ro0tin4kagome[not logged in =p] On: August 03, 2007 02:05 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loving it. It was so funny when Mirou was gettin his freak on couple chapters back. My song el noche de sexo cameon. lol it was perfect i swear. ;] [p.s u know who this is .. its lazy r4k. Butheyy not my fault .. just worked out and myarms are lik..blah! hehehe ne who update soon . 'k?]
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Reviewed By: smich16 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2007 06:45 EDT
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this a very well written story i like it very much, please continue. :)
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