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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2008 02:19 EST
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Finally I am caught up..that is one of the best AU fics I have read in a long time and I am a picky reader when it comes to reading Inuyasha fics and yours is up there with the best. I cant wait for the next update...I am so happy that Miroku finally is on the right path and sango isnt lonely anymore...gonna be good eeeepppppp...anyway...gonna have to start on your other stories now cause you have made me a new fan...keep it up and update soon please and thank you
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Reviewed By: kmoaton [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2008 01:11 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Job! I loved the way you had the boys trying to figure out a plan the first time they are alone. The clueless was fun. I also enjoyed the way Sango felt the need to at least tell Kaede what was happening with Kikyo. That shows in spite of everything that has happened to her she still has a compassionate heart. I hope that Bank and Kikyo don't get caught by Naraku before whatever they are planning has been put in place. Keep up the good work and good luck on IYFG!!
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Reviewed By: Milareppa [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2008 16:11 EST
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Sorry to end up reviewing this both here and on FF.net, but I realised I hadn't finished the comment after I hit send, and FF.net wouldn't let me post another review, so I decided to post the whole review here. Grr. Thumbs up for the Sango depiction in this chapter. It was nice to see she was worried about Kaede, and it made sense she'd be so concerned for the terms on which two people part when one dies, given what she's been through. Most especially, however, I liked the way she restrained herself and Kagome when she spotted all the ofuda - if there's one scene in this story so far that strongly suggests Sango is an intelligent and thoughtful girl, it's her reaction to seeing those ofuda. I definitely liked Sango in this chapter. The other thing I liked was Bankotsu, and the feel that you're paving the way for several things with the museum connection: 1) you're closing the net on Sango. 2) you're closing the net on Kagura as you're raising a very plausible plot device for Naraku discovering Kagura's status and location. 3)You're raising the threat of revealing Sesshoumaru's true nature, as it occurs to me that Naraku could have Sesshoumaru over a barrel if Naraku finds out who Sesshoumaru truly is - the chaos that could ensue if the humans found out (and we all know how much Naraku loves chaos!) could give Naraku a powerful weapon against Sesshoumaru that might negate some of Sesshoumaru's natural power. He's been so concerned about what Naraku might do to Kagura if he found her, that maybe he's not considered what someone as despicable as Naraku might do if he learned Sesshoumaru was the Daiyoukai (btw, I love how you turned that into a rank title). 4) the increasing threat to both Kikyou and Bankotsu now they're actively impeding Naraku's hunt (at least this chapter makes me think they're now actively plotting to impede him - even if it's just to protect their own lives, it's not something Naraku will forgive if he learns the truth). I said that I originally disliked your portrayal of Kikyou, but I've become so much more interested in her now. And I've become interested in seeing how Bankotsu's story unfolds. It's been an interesting pairing you've made of them, but I think it's a strangely compatible one - that moment in the manga they had (especially the way the anime portrayed it) when they met for the first time showed a certain spark, that they did seem to have an innate ability to understand each other. I like the fact you've given them a connection in this story too. Okay, sorry about the length of that, and the fact part of it appears on FF.net as well.
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2008 12:41 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. It's so adorable how pitiful the guys seemed at first without the girls, lol. They soon got it together...but it was sweet. And I do wonder if Kaede will be able to reach Kikyou before she comes up missing. Kikyou is a real b****.....but she doesn't quite deserve to end up forgotten in a freezer either.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2008 09:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"You mean like when you're sparring with Kagome and end up on the floor with her kissing you?" lol I can not wait to see when they will finally get together... although 'i think that might mean the end or near end of the story.. so I am certainly no looking forward to that happening...
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2008 13:41 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. Sango and miroku are so sweet together. His reaction to her back was perfect. And it seems that Bank and Kikyo are forming an unholy alliance. I wonder if it will work, though....
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2008 02:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
how the hell did you put a NICE spin on the semi evil characters... they are not villains any more but anti-heroes... Great chapter... loved the Sango and Miroku part...
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Reviewed By: landofthekwt [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2008 22:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting chapter. Nice to see how compassionate and sensitive Miroku can be to Sango. It looks Bank and Kikyou are having found a common bond and now are united to stay alive no matter what Naraku throws at them.
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Reviewed By: kmoaton [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2008 20:24 EDT
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This chapter, as always, was outstanding. I'm glad Sango is allowing Miroku to get closer to her and he is helping not to feel so horrible about herself. I would love to see Bank and Kikyou betray Naraku but I may be getting ahead of myself! ^_^ Great work and can't wait until the next post.
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Reviewed By: landofthekwt [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2008 11:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved the planning that went on between Naraku and Bankotsu. Kikyou has put herself in the position of doing stuff for Naraku without being in the loop. Somewhat dangerous if he should decide that she is unnecessary.
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Title: Minoue Reviews.
Reviewed By: vikikibouki@hotmail.com On: October 12, 2008 22:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This just keeps getting better and better. I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: psyco_chick32 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2008 18:50 EDT
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It's really nice seeing a fic where Kikyou is actually playing a decent role, has brains... I'm not the biggest Kikyou fan in the world, but it's more because of how she's usually written than how she's been portrayed in the anime/manga. :) I'm really anxious to see where things head with Kohaku and Kanna... poor things, I feel for 'em. Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: hemlockglade On: October 06, 2008 17:18 EDT
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UPDATE!!!! Excellent! Glad you are still working on this!! Though this chapter leaves me wondering who Naraku will kidnap to get some leverage (not that he has to, just seems like a Naraku thing to do)…. A Sango abduction would leave to some lovely Miroku angst, while a Kagome kidnap would give Inuyasha a chance to kick arse. Though the feminist in me would love to see Inuyasha get rescued by Kagome (human night perhaps?). Or the group could redeem Kikyo by helping her despite dubious decisions in the past. Perhaps if Kagura got captured, that'd crack Sesshomaru's cool exterior? Or maybe Naraku will decide to go back to dental school and give up the world domination thing. Whatever happens, can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2008 21:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
a not so creepy chapter... they are still giving me tingly feeling though....
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Reviewed By: TAJE [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2008 06:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I feel for Kohaku and Kanna. The two of them are so victimized that their tunnel seems it will stay dark. I'm anxious to see where you will take Kikyo's situation. Seems rather bleak. I am SO enjoying this story. Peace!
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