| "Nightwalker" Reviews/Comments [ 472 ] |
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Title: Twilight
Reviewed By: inyu01 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2022 07:22 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm rereading this fanfic and it's 2022. I read this once when you
first wrote it in 2007. Now I'm sitting here thinking that you and
Stephenie Meyer the author of twilight had to be thinking the same
thing when writing. I don't know why your story kind of reminds me
of twilight now lol.
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Reviewed By: sovereignty+too+Lazy+to+Sign+In On: October 14, 2012 02:14 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
chapter 20 born instead of bon “Blood Bone Control. If Narek wasn't speaking, then he entered a kind of meditation. It's something natural bon nightwalkers do when they want to get stronger. |
Reviewed By: sovereignty+too+Lazy+to+Sign+In On: October 12, 2012 14:12 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
chapter 11 Oh year should be oh yeah. “Oh year, sure, it's great to have the family back together.” Bill rolled his eyes. “My ass. It's not even been twenty fours hours and you two are going at it already!” He glared at Claire, who frowned guiltily, then at Albier, who gave a sheepish smile. |
Reviewed By: sovereignty+too+Lazy+to+Sign+In On: October 12, 2012 05:19 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Spelling in chapter 9. The then should be a than. “Indeed. We don't know if the drones' originals are being held somewhere, or if they are already dead. Also, there are more drones then nightwalkers in the city. It's quite a hassle fighting them till you find the right one.” Sesshoumaru said. |
Reviewed By: Sovereignty (is half asleep and still finds mistakes) On: October 10, 2012 21:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
color bone you mean collar bone? She was a rare one, one that looks breathtaking at night, but pails in the sun. How long he had spent staring at her face alone, he didn't know or care, for his eyes had wondered from her face to her neck, then to her color bone, then to her breasts and curves. He found himself longingly staring at her neck, wanting another pint of her wine-like blood. |
Reviewed By: kazanova [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2012 20:52 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so sexy! ;] I've been hoping to read some good fluff between Inuyasha and Kagome, the sexual tension was killing me! |
Reviewed By: Kazanova2 On: January 23, 2012 17:25 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, what a way to spellbound an audience! I'm reading this fanfiction again after so long, and it still feels like the first time I'm reading it. I couldn't wait to login and leave a review, so I had to do one now! That was.. romantic, and.. hot. You have me enthralled. |
Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2011 08:59 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
interesting extra... liked it... good job! |
Title: Great ending. ^_^
Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2011 22:20 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story! And a wonderful ending! This story is now my favorite. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2010 08:27 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful ending... really liked it... seems that things turned out fine... nice sweet moment with inuyasha and kagome... good job... great work! |
Reviewed By: On: December 25, 2010 09:52 PST
Comment/Review:
Amazing story and a perfect ending. I am so glad that I read this story and I do think you can do a few things with a sequal so I hope you consider doing one! Cant wait to read future stories from you. Merry christmas!! |
Reviewed By: BleedingHeart [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2010 05:10 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! So, I wanna start off by saying that I have had my eye on this story for quite some time but I had to hold back on reading it due to it not being finished. I am too impatient to wait for chapters to be posted so I just have to wait until the story is complete to read fanfics. When I checked a couple days ago and saw that you finished I was soooo happy! I pulled some late hours reading this because I couldn't stop reading. This is a beautiful story and I am so glad I got the chance to read it. I have been reading fanfics since my teen years and I have not come across one in quite some time that was not cliche to the others. You did a phenominal job with this story. I love how you made your own characters and how it wasn't love a first sight for Inuyasha and Kagome. It was amazing how you really thought the whole story through to the end and made every little detail count leading up to it all. Thank you so much for writing such an amazing story and I hope to see more of you in the future. Congratulations in all your reviews, your hard work paid off. Also I wanted to ask, was Kagome really pregnant or did she just say that to keep Narek at bay? Thanks again for writing Nightwalkers! Your awesome! |
Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven (not logged it) On: December 22, 2010 15:31 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yea stupid formatting but its all good and wow it was a like the perfect ending that in a way you just don't want to think that its over.. but damn i wanted to see how Inuyasha handle Kagome's parents hahaha and Ooo listen to your sister and write a a sequel!!! WIRTE WRITE!! lol |
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2010 00:38 PST
Comment/Review:
Congrats on a job well done. I have enjoyed this story and felt that the wait was worth it. I'm sorry to see it end, but you did it in the perfect way, making it a complete circle. I love endings like that, don't see to many of those in fan fics. I have enjoyed your interpertation of Inu and Kags charactors, and hope that when you post your next story, MM will be up and running properly so I get the author alert. Kudos and until next time. LOL |
Title: Amazing!
Reviewed By: pixiedust_20 On: December 21, 2010 17:47 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, wow, just wanted to say that this is one of the best fanfic's I’ve ever read. It's a shame that you didn't go into detail about Inuyasha and Kagome’s life after the war, but otherwise a perfect story. Your writing style is amazing, I love how in depth you go with every character and you literally leave nothing out. I hope you continue writing on this site, and I look forward to reading some of your other material. Congrats on a well completed fan fiction P.S. a sequel would be awesome if you have time that is lol |
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