| "Nightwalker" Reviews/Comments [ 472 ] |
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2009 03:21 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it took me awhile where it i saw read lol Lucy?? holy crap! WHO WHO IS LUCY!! *looks around and started to boo* Narek is soo mine >.> even if i have to force Lilliana away XD even though shes like my fav character in this XD
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Reviewed By: FoxyLove [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2009 14:19 PST
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OoOo what drama!!! Whos lucy??? And i had a feeling Narek had a thing for Lilliana!! I can kinda see them togetha in a sick twisted sort of way but hey i still think Narek is sexii as heck with his evil bad boy attitude and how strong he is is definetly a turn on! O umm otha dan da fact dat hes out to kill Inu and Sess i gues...hehe. Well it sure would be a twist if Narek ended up mating with Lilliana in the end!! Well I cant wait till the next chapter so update soon!! Foxy Signing Off!
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Reviewed By: r4k [nsi] On: January 30, 2009 17:19 PST
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hmm.. i must say that it is kind of upseting how i can only see Narek being killed. because how else can the family ever except him back , after causin somuch..idont think..oh..i was being controlled or i saved you so forgive me will work. or even i changed..and that sucks because we can see how he really cares of lilly. :sigh: oh well...
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2009 10:21 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great addition to the end of chapter 29... so sesshoumaru & inuyasha did find them... but before that narek's actions are quite intriguing... and what did he say to lilliana again?... seems like he saved lilliana & kagome from fenrir too... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: xxxshikonxxx [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2009 04:53 PST
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nice update. i really wanted to know what happens next. i also hope that it would not take long until the next chapter, though
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2009 04:17 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HIHI nice ending... for the chapter I mean... (the wicked witch is DEAD!!! lol watched Wicked for my birthday!!!)
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Reviewed By: Hentai Strumpet [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2009 03:49 PST
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interesting chapter, soo many clues but very little answers. soo many allusions but not a definite conclusion. I can't for more. I think I have an inkling to what narek might have said but I can't to read what you have for us next.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven (not logged in) On: January 28, 2009 03:37 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yea i wanna know what it means aswell XD and holy crap! so our hot Narek might have feelings for Lilliana?? as much as i love her, Narek come here!! lol anyways Oo how are they going to get out of this!! is Inuyasha and Sesshy goning after the king.. Oo god.... Oo and a late MERRY XMAS AND HAPPY NEW YEAR!!
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Title: Okay, I'll "bite"
Reviewed By: Licentia poetica [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2009 12:20 PST
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Ich bes es? Sorry for not resisting the pun above, but I was just wondering what 'vonces serunik' translates to. I know it's a variation of "how ya' doin'" but I'm not sure about the "serunik" part. My Latin background doesn't help me here...did he call her sweetheart?
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2009 10:09 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that kagome is still getting used to being a nightwalker... lots of things she's learning... but seems that kagome & lilliana has been cornered by the enemy... what did narek say to lilliana?... how will kagome & lilliana get out of this?... who will come to help them?... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Kimiko Sakaki [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2009 08:53 PST
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LAAAA~ an update!! anyways i love this chapter. seems like lilli and kags are finally getting alone buh yeesh, da bad guys just HAD to come in eh? lol anyways, update soon! :3 kimiko
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Reviewed By: xxxshikonxxx [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2009 05:50 PST
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wow! how i've waited for this chapter! can't waint for the next!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2009 04:46 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sleepy too.. I should be in bed now... I have a bloody meeting tomorrow... I found some spelling errors in the story too so I'm use // to indicate them and list them... But learning //hot// to move in her new body was nothing compared to trying to keep her hunger in check. "I mastered my bloodlust in five years." //Clare// said. If the leader has a mate, she or he is the partner leader. The family heads keep the rest of the members in cheek. "Poor //Clare//." Rukiya and //Clare// despise the way his followers brutalize and eat humans and how his followers are willing to hurt even innocent families."
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Reviewed By: nicc85 On: January 03, 2009 23:35 PST
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i really miss this story. hope an update is in the works : )
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Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2008 08:25 PST
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hey this is a really great story, very well written, but I can't help but think....why is this a fanfiction? Seriously, this could totally stand on it's own. InuYasha and Kagome are pretty OOC, your plot and Takahashi's plot are nothing alike, and you don't really mention Sango, Miroku, or Shippou. Not that I'm critisizing! All you'd have to do is go through and change InuYasha's and Kagome's names, and you have a very awsome original story! Just a thought from a fan ^-^
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