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Title: Nightwalker
Reviewed By: Funster of fun On: March 04, 2008 17:23 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT WAS AWSOME!!!!!!!...PLEASE write another chapter your writing captivates me in ways I could have ever thought of ...... oh yah I can be real deep when it come s to things i love to read. This is the best fanfic I have ever read and great job on the Inuyasha and Kagome lust scene I loved the detail I had to change my panties it was so good......PLEASE UPTADE SOON OUR I WILL DIE
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Title: update
Reviewed By: megumi192 On: February 28, 2008 16:34 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon, I want to know if Inuyasha is in love with Kagome and if she will eventually have Inuyasha's baby? Please end the suspense.
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Title: Great Story
Reviewed By: Fallen6906 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2008 08:11 PST
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hey just wantd to let you kno i really love ur fanfic u are a good writer u just have a few grammitical errors but who doesnt. neways i wish u wld update often but we all have lives outside of mediaminer dnt we. Keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: Kanna Mizuo Megami On: February 26, 2008 13:00 PST
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I'm honoured that you dedicated this chapter to me and I have to thank you for it. I'm glad I was able to renew your faith in reviewers and I apologize for not having read this chapter until today. First off I noticed that I didn't talk about Miroku or Sango in my last review. I'd just like to say that so far they don't seem like very major characters either but I've come to realise your mind has everything planned so I'm sure they'll come to play a bigger part later on. Congrats by the way on your second lemon, which was very well done for someone that doesn't write lemons. Like I said before, I love that you made your characters 'Nightwalkers' and not vampires but something that I really do love is how you describe Inuyasha thirst. Its so vivid that I can imagine everything that he feels and hears. I still don't trust Lilliana but I'm very interested on those two books that Claire gave her. Especially the one that seems older then the other and is written in her native tongue. Well that's all I have to say this time but keep up the good work and I'll try to read your next chapter sooner than this one. Kanna
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha_SIT [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2008 07:03 PST
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*Adds to favorites* Wow. Yep, I think that about sums it up. This is really good. I just discovered this fic, sat down and read the whole thing, and fell in love with it. I'm so glad that you decided to expand your original one shot. You have nothing to be nervous about, that was a very well written lemon. I'm pretty sure I'm gonna need the help of a cold shower myself. :) Out of all the nightwalkers, I'd have to say that I like...um...Clair the best. Although, I really like Christiano and Rukiya too. I know this is really random, but the more I read this fic, the more I think dyslexia is something you can catch. Everytime I see Rukiya's name, I pronounce it Riuka (reeukah) in my head and have to correct myself. I even had a hard time remembering it correctly just to type it here. So if I got it wrong, I'm sorry and now you know why. ;) Something I thought of when I read this chapter: if Lilliana, Sango and Miroku are in a cave (and I'm assuming it's the same cave Inuyasha and Kagome are in), then were they able to hear that little escapade? 'Cause that would be super embarassing. Anyway, great job. I'm eagerly, yet patiently, awaiting your next post.
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Title: Great Job
Reviewed By: megumi192 On: February 16, 2008 11:00 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait to see what is going to happen from here.
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Reviewed By: fudge On: February 15, 2008 13:19 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*_* hot!! nice work keep it up!! hopefully we'll have another chapter with the aftermath soon!!
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Reviewed By: Kimiko Sakaki [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2008 20:25 PST
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lol, caves. xD good luck wif that! anyways, nice lemon, even though it was rushed but still as heated as ever! inu's starting to wonder bout the attraction between him and kags...FINALLY! please update soon! Kimiko =D
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Title: Nightwalker
Reviewed By: stream0ftears On: February 14, 2008 17:59 PST
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You're making me love Valentine's Day! haha.
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Reviewed By: Breezie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2008 17:26 PST
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Nice very nice, very HOT! I know that Inuyasha felt gulty about bitting her and having sexual pleasure but he couldn't help it her sent was driving him "Wild", and he dose feel much better after its dune. I knew this was going to happend . Now that was a Valentine's treat thank you and Have a Happy Valentine's Day!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2008 15:29 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
drool.... InuYasha is one confused and kool looking hottie!
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Reviewed By: Ethril Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2008 13:32 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
now that was a nice valentines gift. He sure did loose it. Please don't make Kagome too mad in the next chapter, I mean come on! Who would be mad after a round like that?! I think I'd just be content for the next month! Take your time with the next chapter, don't kill yourself for the sake of your readers. What you have done in this chapter should sate everyone's needs for your story.
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Reviewed By: Ro0tin4Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2008 12:31 PST
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I have no clue why you wouldnt have any confidence in your lemons. They are very good. And thats coming from a pervert that has read a lot. haha. ANd that cold shower.. yeah most definitly need it. Its just that February fever. =D
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Reviewed By: Ivellios [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2008 06:25 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for hustling because this chapter was awesomely hot! Sorry I haven't been reviewing much, work and school have been eating up my time like the Inuyasha in your story is drinking Kagome's blood. Basically, I am totally swamped. So sorry. Talk to you later and I hope you have a Happy Valentine's Day.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2008 04:55 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... interesting and quite intense chapter... so was correct that he didn't bite her because he was trying not to depend on kagome... but it seemed that he reached a certain point that he couldn't hold back any longer... wonder what happens when kagome wakes up... what will the others say when they all meet up... update when you can... please and thank you...
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