| "Nightwalker" Reviews/Comments [ 472 ] |
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2008 04:18 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. That lemon was HOT! Great job. I'm STILL fanning myself, lol. You made us wait a long time for more Inu/Kag fluff....but what we got was DEFINITELY worth the wait. There is nothing sexier than a deprived male who only craves one woman. Kagome is weak as kitten and as sore as all get out....but Inuyasha can save the guilt. Kagome obviously didn't mind slaking his needs after she got over her shock. But will she tell HIM that? Will it even occur to her that he needs that reassurance? This is why I really enjoy these characters and their relationship. So COMPLEX. Terrific job. It's been a while since I enjoyed reading any chapter this much, lol.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2008 01:34 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG i made a weird noise when i saw you updated ^^ i was sooo happy :P but.... *starts fanning* god you could have warned me! lol.... but your 2nd second... god... i think i need a very LONG shower aswell lol
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Reviewed By: Kanna Mizuo Megami On: February 13, 2008 14:21 PST
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I LOVE this story! I read that you like it better when the reviewer wrights comments to point out what they like so I thought I would take the time to tell you what I like or don't like about your story. I love the fact that everyone is a "nightwalker" instead of vampire. You took an over used idea and made it completely your own. I want to see what other abilities or weaknesses you have created for these Nightwalkers. I like that you have the theme of Reality vs. Appearance so obviously present in this story (Bill) and the fact that Narek is such a dangerous yet handsome character. I find both Claire and Albier amusing and a great way of creating comic relief when the story is getting too tense. Lilliana's introverted personality seems to make sense in the story but there is something about her that bothers me... no thats not the right word. It's more that I don't trust her. Opposite that there is something about Rikiya that makes me want to like her (I think it could be the fact that she gives off a maternal vibe.) and the same can be said for Christiano (I'm really not sure what it is about him that I like though.) As for Sesshomaru and Kagura, they don't really play big roles in the story as far as I can tell. I'd like to see if they become more dominant characters in the story or if the story even calls for their immediate presence. I can't wait to find out who the 'Bastard King' is and I await your next update. Kanna
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Reviewed By: Hentai Strumpet [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2008 19:05 PST
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AND AGAIN AWESOME STORY.
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Reviewed By: Hentai Strumpet [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2008 19:05 PST
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GREAT STORY
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Reviewed By: Hentai Strumpet [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2008 19:04 PST
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JUST BECAUSE I DIDN'T LEAVE A REVIEW FOR THE OTHER CPATERS.
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Reviewed By: Hentai Strumpet [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2008 19:04 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome.One of the most Unique stories I've read soo far. Please keep up the good work. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Ethril Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2008 18:37 PST
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ooooh make him loose it! Please oh please! A cave, a nightwalker, a young human girl. It's perfect!
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Reviewed By: I'm Inulover1253 On: February 12, 2008 18:05 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was awesome KEEP GOING
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Reviewed By: Breezie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2008 16:03 PST
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Poor InuYasha maybe waiting for Kagome waking and being alone with her was a bad idea. The hungier is to much for him, he needs to bit that soft, sweet, neck of her and taste that sweet blood. I do belive that Kagome is his soul mate or is it blood mate but inu is afraid for it to be ture so he made him think that the legend is that a legend and nothing els, get over it InuYashas you know its ture she is your blood or soul mate! Even everyone els think so to.
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Reviewed By: Kimiko Sakaki [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2008 12:56 PST
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lol poor inuyasha. y dun her just bite her and get it over with? Kag would've understand. anyways, great chapter and update soon! Kimiko =D
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2008 01:17 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooooo so Inuyasha is trying not to bite her.... thats sweet ^^ but Inuyasha will give in lol
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2008 23:01 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If you didn't say what InuYasha was thinking it would have sounded rather 'naughty.' Another GREAT chapter!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2008 22:37 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... kagome seems to be the only one that still hasn't come to terms with her situation... surprised that sango & miroku are taking it better than her... so inuyasha hasn't bit kagome for some time now... what's he doing trying to kill himself or trying not to depend on kagome's blood... what will happen before they reach the villages... what will happen when they do arrive at the villages... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Ookami Suriya [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2008 21:25 PST
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Inuyasha should just bite her and get it over with. Then he can carry her the rest of the way, lord knows hes strong enough =P Wot's ur favorite word btw?
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